Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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Sharon08

@Sharon08

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Loved loved loved the updates!!

Cant believe I missed three! You are soo talented and you get us emotionally attached to the characters through their innocence, vulnerability, and experiences. Cant wait for more :)

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daneshzeest

@daneshzeest

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Hiii
That was a lovely update...
Loved it...

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Loved the update...!!

Arnav seems to quite like his new pillow...!!!😆 On a serious note the fact that he had to settle for a teddy bear or a pillow to hug instead of a parent or a loved one made my heart go out to the little boy who had to learn how to fight his fears all by himself... These little things point to how difficult his journey has been making him the man he is today...

Khushi... I am not really surprised that it took her a minute after waking up to remember that she is a married woman, sharing the room with her husband...Her life has changed so quickly that I would be more surprised if she adjusted to all of it in a day...

Arnav and Khushi both felt uncomfortable and awkward around each other in the morning... Uncomfortable is good... Uncomfortable is definitely a sign of progress because it means they are starting to realize exactly what they have signed up for by getting married...

What? I only married Arnavji so that I can stay in this house. Now you can not take the perks that come with it away from me' I loved how this one sentence from Khushi bothered Arnav... He is finally starting to realize the big flaw in his plans... By telling Khushi the pros and cons and convincing her to marry him, he might have ensured that she remains with him for the rest of his life, but he did not account for the fact that he might want more from the marriage... He just doesnt know what exactly it is that he wants... But like I had said in my previous comment this is journey with a huge learning curve and the fact that he has realized something is missing is definitely a start...

Sumer might not have revealed much to Khushi about Arnav's past but atleast it made her realize that there is a lot that she still doesnt know about her husband... Also it made her think that even though this marriage may have bound her and Arnav together , they may need more than this arrangement for it to last forever... The big question is will she explore her feelings about Arnav and then make the first move...

Edited by Addicted87 - 11 years ago

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

When can we expect next updt ??

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

^Same question here...
When will be next part updated..?
Plllzzz Vats come back to ur schedule of 'Once a week Update''...Pllleeezzz...

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ragaya

@ragaya

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Anon first the diplomatic feedback: fantastic,wonderful as always.
now, the frank feedback: did u get someone to ghostwrite for you? or were u just not in the mood?
somehow the anon brand of "smart" was missing in this chapter. the twists, the humour, the witty oneliners...i dont know...i just felt like quickly skimming through the chapter and was done instead of how i usually read and reread every chapter and stop at some lines thinking what did anon mean by this line...
am sorry dear if i sound rude and hurt u but just felt like telling.
hope ur arm is ok. take care, sweetu

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

any chance of getting us an update...

cheers...

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murmur

@murmur

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

first of all sorry for not commenting on previous parts .my 2 years old son is a handful and it is becoming difficult for me to track the story so if you can send me pm than it will become helpful for me.i am sending you buddy request.plzz accept.i will comment after reading the parts i miss.😊