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Posted: 11 years ago
nony update do
aj yahan say update liya bagair nahi jao gi 🤣
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Kahan chupa kar rakha hai update ko bahir niklu 🤣
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Aur kitna intezaar, Anonymousji ?

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Ok give us update soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Are we getting an update today? Loved your previous chapter!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Firstly I'm very sorry for the late comments

Chapter 24

Khushi shocked & speechless after hearing him say that he wanted her to marry him. She beyond words & her mind in its blank mode unable to drink in his idea while Arnav remaining calm & letting her gather his words was a superb commencement of the chappie 👍🏼

Arnav's deep rooted thoughts of how Khushi slowly made way in his life & how he can't imagine a day without her sweet chatters, her innocence, her naive self, her pure heart & most of all the sweet child in her which soothens the bruises of his past & also which has given a significant reason to look forward to & creating millions of hopes that with her by his side everything is normal in his puzzled life was fabulously narrated 👏 In a way, after reading his soliloquy of how she's a medicine to his wound & that now she's the major reason for his calm life & he can't even imagine a day without her, I feel really very sorry for him but what worries me is that will Arnav understand that at the end of the day she's also a normal girl with normal dreams & also the major thing that she considers marriage a sacred bond unlike him who doesn't believe in it ... hope he doesn't land up hurting her feelings

Arnav using his father's early proposal for marriage to Khushi as a card & now using it to his advantage in order to manipulate her but at the same time he accepting that he was the one to suggest her name now & also giving her a clear insight of why he choose her of all the girls was an awesome scene portraying Arnav's astute mind convincing Khushi that their wedding was the most appropriate happening for her, for him, for her bade papa, her buaji & for all of their well being

Arnav irritated & panicking while he found her not accepting for marriage & asking for time to think & he angrily asking her to take her sweet time & not to bother about his dad showed the restlessness that he had & the main reason for it being he didn't want to give her time & wanted her consent immediately so that nobody changes her mind in the future. He then creating negative thoughts into her mind that if he marries a stranger she most probably might not like Khushi living with them & it might land up hurting the peace of the house & that either she has to leave the house or he must be the one to leave ending up in instilling fear in Khushi's heart that her bade papa can't survive without his son's presence in the house ... buddy u marvelously penned down how Arnav was using many ways one after the other without much time & some how make her accept that she marrying him is the best solution for his dad 👏

One thing that I greatly admire Arnav is that he pointed out to her that her limp doesn't matter & he too has a problem 👏 Even when she said that his diabetics is curable, he denying that it will come along with him till the end of his life showed that no matter what in the future he'll never ever hurt her in the grounds of her limp & take care of her health to the fullest & will also stand for her if anyone points out at her physical disability

Arnav startled at her weird idea of contract marriage & scolding her for her absurd idea ... hmmm ... poor Khushi if only she knew that Arnav was using his dad's health issue as a bait & was mainly planning for this wedding so that he could keep her by his side all his life

At the end Arnav making Khushi accept with her mouth after his constant attempts on hitting her emotional side & the promise that he clearly stated that she could never back off from it was a bit scary 😲 Thanks for the mail buddy 😊

Edited by fleurs - 11 years ago
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updaaattteee chiyeee plzzz plzzz plzzz
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My dear pyaari annoy...chill you update...
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Chapter 25

Sumer encircled in doubts & worry at the sudden news of his Laddoo's willing acceptance to marry his son & he trying to voice it but his jiji repeatedly refusing to hear it & her mind engrossed in the happy news that her Titilya has come forward by herself to marry her bitwa threw light on Sumer's fix & how he didn't want Khushi to be stuck up in any sort of mess. Sumer astonished by Khushi's decision & his mind refusing to accept the sudden willingness of Khushi to marry Arnav & Sumer trying to assimilate facts regarding it was excellently penned down 👏


Buaji elated that Khushi was now in safe hands & she happy with Arnav now being her daughter's groom; Buaji weighting out as to how Arnav was the best possible match in all terms to handle & take care of Khushi narrated the motherly love that Buaji carried for Khushi


I too agree with Buaji that Arnav is the right person for Khushi in terms of protecting her from this harsh outside world since she is one naive & innocent soul who is yet oblivious to the true world. For sure Khushi is the only one who can pull Arnav out from his troubled past with her unconditional love & care. But initially Khushi will have to go through a lot to understand Arnav thoroughly; it's clear that he somewhat likes her but he is yet to discover the love factor that he has for her ... from the looks of it, it might take a long time for Arnav to come out from his shell & accept Khushi's love & give her space in his fragile hurt heart


Sumer's shrewd brain concluding from Khushi's strange behavior, that is, immediate acceptance for the wedding that something was fishy & then he sighing in relief after observing Arnav's causal self & on his insistence for his final word regarding marriage only after his talks with Khushi was fantastically laid down 👍🏼 The best part was Sumer convincing his mind that everything that was happening from Arnav's side was real & his son has kept his word of not speaking with Khushi beforehand & the former currently dwelling in happiness that things was going good & normal & it was he who over thought a little too much. Must say, Arnav is really very intelligent & he skillfully handled the situation by planning it thoroughly well by firstly getting a strong assurance from Khushi's side ... hmmm ... smarty pants


Deep down in his heart Arnav finding solace these days in his live only since Khushi was around him but his ego withholding him from outwardly letting out his feeling of liking that he holds towards her proved the insecurity that was squeezing his heart & how he was frightened to love or let anyone into his heart & the difficult part being that he has build a strong fortress within it so as to not let even a trace of his thinking to even his close ones. Since Arnav totally has not even an iota of faith on love & his firm belief that love is some sort of feeling that never features in his dictionary showed that Khushi would be having a hard time to make him come out off his shell & shower enormous of love to win him. Hey buddy, Arnav's soliloquy was astounding 👏 👏 👏... loved it


I t was so heart breaking to read how the innocent kid had to go through due to the lack of love, care & attention from his parents 😭 His tormented life due to his mom & dad's careless moves made me dislike them 😡 ... poor soul


Buddy the portion where who wrote about married woman's heart being engulfed with enormous love without her own knowledge was P.H.E.N.O.M.E.N.A.L 👏 👏 👏

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Chapter 26

In a corner off the heart Arnav's previous rejection still hurting Khushi & she worried if this wedding atleast will happen; her mind questioning her why didn't Arnav marry any other girl & why her but Arnav's reply at the restaurant coming handy & that consoling her heart; though Arnav was okay with her limp but her major worry being her disability worrying her the most; Khushi consoling her heart that she can blindly place her trust whole heartedly on Arnavji & she drifting off to sleep narrated the naive & pure soul who Khushi was 😊 & how she failed to realize Arnav's decision to marry her was not only for his father's sake but mainly to keep her close to him since he harboured feelings for her, felt alive around her & his whole existence at present banked on her

La happy for Khushi & her teasing which coloured the latter's cheek's & this duo oblivious to Rishabh's horror struck state on hearing the most shocking & sudden announcement of his love's engagement with another man was beautifully penned down 👏 ... I truly pity Rishabh 😔


As soon as La left, Rishabh snapping at Khushi & his hope springing up on hearing her say that it was just an arranged marriage & not out of love, he trying various resorts to make her understand that Arnav isn't the right one for her & finally he confessing his love for her was a nail biting scene. I felt sorry for Khushi 😔 Buddy, Khushi not knowing whether to be happy since her first love proposed to her or feel sad that she's already accepted Arnav's proposal & her mind & heart surged in confusion & she putting other's happiness before hers was brilliant ... the myriad of emotions into which Khushi was engulfed in was excellently narrated 👍🏼


As a great fan of Arnav, I'm obviously biased for he marrying Khushi but buddy after reading Rishabh's portion & his soliloquy I agree that in case Khushi marries him he would verily take care of her & love her deeply. On a comparative note, in case if Khushi marries Arnav initially she'll have to undergo a lot of hurt & rejection from his end & it'll be very difficult for her to understand & adjust to his mood, anger & extreme possessiveness & also she needs to put a lot of effort to bring him out of his insecurities & make him realize his love for her whereas if she marries Rishabh her life would start of smoothly & would go on well since I believe he loves her & she too loved him. Hey buddy my subjective side is kicking in & it's like Khushi is meant for Arnav & vice versa, Arnav definitely needs Khushi since he's undergone too much of pain & is devoid of love & it's only her who can love him & take care of the deeply hurt child in him & assure him with her love that he too is bound to be loved


Poor Khushi ... so true where was Rishabh when she was going to marry Shyam & even Arnav did reject her out rightly ... all of a sudden both of them wants to marry her ... the innocent soul stuck in chaos unable to come to a consensus made me feel sorry for her ... seriously both these men are pushing her too much & making it hard for her


Rishabh's unannounced arrival to RM starling Khushi & the former not wanting to waste a single second in order to make Khushi accept his proposal but to make things worst, Arnav's sudden arrival at the scene worsening the situation for Khushi was mind blowingly written 👏 creating the expectation of what'll happen next

Thanks for the PM buddy 😊

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