ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1) - Page 9

thnxxx 4 the pm...

so slow process to woo khushi started to work...loved it

luved the update

Chaverah, u r really amazing... I read all ur writings n this is the one which hooked me up...

Comments regarding first two chapters:

From the start i loved khushi's character... She is really strong as a person... For the house which contained her parent's memories, she has been working like a maid in that house... I just hate that permila.. She is her step-mother but she is behaving like her enemy..
And arnav is really cute... He loves khushi n he is going to her now... The way he said about his decision to his family was beautiful... If khushi is in a relationship then he is still going to help her... I was like aww after reading that line... I just love this arnav a lot...

Comment on chapters 3,4,5,6:

Conversation between payal and arnav was mind blowing... The things they were speaking like about akash wa
is funny.. Payal is really bold... I always wanted to see payal n arnav's relationship something like this in the show but we didnt get it... And now reading this made me feel great...
Payal is khushi's jiji n arnav got to know about khushi from her... It is heart breaking to see how khushi is treated... She isnt given food...
But their meet was fantastic... Khushi in arnav's arms... That is the best thing we can ever see...
Mrs Gloria is praying for bringing arnav to khushi's life... She is amazing...

Comment on chapters 7 and 8:

I loved their cabin romance the most... Khushi is really making it difficult for arnav... How can he control himself with her... And the way khushi responded, it is mutual now...
Mrs Gloria.. She is indeed very sweet... She even gave permission without knowing the reason...
And last part was awesome, khushi's monologue where she missed him for dinner and she is worried for him... She made him eat food n is arranging for him to rest... And well arnav's way of convincing too...
By the way i wonder how u make all the characters so sweet and convincing?? After reading all the updates i dont understand whom i love the most!!! I mean arnav's family whom we got to see for very less time is also very sweet... His jijaji, di, nani n of course the blushing akash...

superb update..beautifully written..why kushi was lyk as if she lost something..?..hmm arnav was so lovely n he was so passionate abt her..looking forward for the next..

Awesome update...
Khushi s falling 4 Arnav..
Nd she knw it...
Bt she s trying 2 keep a distance b/w them...
Coz she s scared 2 gt hurt...
Poor Gal...
Waitng 4 d nxt part..
Cntinue soon

such a nice update...