ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1)

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Sara queen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

thanks for the PMing me.

update is super buddy.

khushi's care for arnav was lovely.

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karsvinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Nice update...will comment later...also duniya is been busy 😊

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Parvathi Devi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Wonderful Update... I can see kushi is hesitate to trust Arnav not because She didnt trust Arnav...

Arnav really a gentle man and he is giving space for kushi to adjest changes aroung her

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S.B.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Awesome story..

Read in one go..superb concept..

This story reminds me Cinderella and prince Charles tale..

Where her step mother and step sisters make her life as hell..

really liked arnav in this story..he is true gentle man...

so exciting and interesting..thanks for pm..👍🏼

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Monasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

I really loved this Story...
the way Khushi suffered I just hope Arnav takes revenge soon..

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AR_EternalLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

i just loved it dear...👏

awesome update👏

arnav is tired not physicaly but emotionally and aman knew it...and it was sure that arnav want khusi with him...he want her to be free soon and forever with him😊

while khusi is at war within herself...arnav is breaking in her space at very fast speed..😊..she is falling for him...😕but her reality her broken heart is enough to stop her to move further...😕.she couldnt handle more pain now..😕..though she know arnav is nice man but she also know that where his status is she cant reach there and dream just to get it broken again...😭

she thinks that he must be having many girls of his caliber around him..but she souldnt be one of them...

arnav meeting khusi was nice scene...he want her to be happy again and want to remove her pain.😳..he is making small move at a time.and he was soo happy and felt warm to know that khusi wanted him at dinner and she care for him😳...she asked for his dinner too and how he can take rest..😳.he want to be with her everytime...he was sooo gentleman ...😳but khusi is afraid of it.😕..she know he is good but she didnt trust herself .😕..as she is falling for him and she didnt want it...😕

thier entire convo was very cute and simple and yet arnav did manage to make her laugh like old times.😳..and now he will make sure that he will bring his khusi back anyhow😳

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Awesome update...
Khushi is hesitant to accept her feelings not bcuz she is not sure but she is afraid of heart break and get hurt again... Life is very cruel with her and now she has lost every hope of good...
Loved their time together... Arnav like a TRUE gentle man is giving her her space and on the same time showing her through his action and words that he cares and he is there for her...
Loved when khushi ask him if he ate dinner... The concern and worry was so evident...
Loved the whole chapter...
Continue soon...