TASTE OF FREEDOM- A ASTHA-SHLOK FF(ch 17 Part 2 updated ON Page 47) - Page 10

Originally posted by: rbb1

nice update thank you

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Originally posted by: LECHU123

superb dear

its was awsome👏 👏

loved the way shlok is trying to win astha back!

and exploring sorad chemisty-good idea👍🏼

hope we will get some sojad romantic scenes as well!😆

it will be fun!

you are a talented writer.go ahead👍🏼👍🏼

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Originally posted by: srilanka123

Good job dear. Nice update

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Originally posted by: avi_ashi

nyc update... hoping for more on Ashlok in ur next update.. i just loved the way u described the Ashlok scene.. plz update soon 😳😳

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Originally posted by: khuwahish

Hmmm... Nice

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Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update dear
loved it
though I expected it to be fully ashlok part
but I loved how you made sorad part important in this
loved it
liked how sojal thinking and realisation
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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very nice update, story keeps getting better and better. i just loved the jealousy factor with shlock and especially what he thought of the dr dude...it was cute and funny that he actually admired him and then realised he cant cause he is the enemy ...and how his PIs missed such a vital point...then how he didnt care if she found out that he followed her cause he couldnt control his temper..and then last realization that he had screwed up...it was perfect

First whn u mentioned the doc I thought astha ws pregnant n wanted it to hide it frm shlok😆anyways...litle jealousy is good for ashlok relationship😳

Originally posted by: latha_555

very nice update, story keeps getting better and better. i just loved the jealousy factor with shlock and especially what he thought of the dr dude...it was cute and funny that he actually admired him and then realised he cant cause he is the enemy ...and how his PIs missed such a vital point...then how he didnt care if she found out that he followed her cause he couldnt control his temper..and then last realization that he had screwed up...it was perfect

i also liked the varad and sojal scene...i wish the real sojal was like this too...its good to have 2 nice love stories going on simultaneously

thanks for letting us know that there may be a few days before your next update...looking forward to it

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