TASTE OF FREEDOM- A ASTHA-SHLOK FF(ch 17 Part 2 updated ON Page 47) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
oh cool so we will have 2 love stories going at the same time.
loved how shlock organised the hotel room for aastha, and she was so nieve, looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update! Like the Sojal. Varad track as well. And cannot wait to find out who sanskriti is. Is Varad having an affair?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey finally had a chance to read the update, haha I love Shlok I mean I hate him for what he did earlier, but love him for having patience with our Astha. I liked their cute banter. As for Sojal, I really liked this side of her, like her thinking, its very true, and this will be so cute to read, her making the totally unemotional Varad lol This will be exciting. I can't wait to see Shlok, Varad, Sojal,Anjali, Astha, Kavya all under one roof again. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
great going ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved to read Sorad for a change😳 cont. soon!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update


Waiting for the next one, thanks for pm😊
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CHAPTER:8

"Oh, good you are awake. Good Morning dear wife .Now we can order some breakfast in. Let me call the room service. "Said with his unusual happy and almost excited voice. "There's no need as you will not be staying long. I let you bully me in last night but now you have to leave because I don't have anything to say to you and I don't think anything you say to me will make a difference to me. Now if you excuse me I am going to ready and when I come out I hope no I expect not to find you here." Said Astha in a very calm voice, turning away to the en suite and heard a mocking voice saying "I wouldn't count on that" making Astha fling a hair brush lying around her gravely missing her target which was Shlok's head. That made her angrier at him and more to herself as couldn't help but get affected by Shlok however hard she tried.

When twenty five minutes later, Astha came back to her bedroom she found Shlok lazily reading newspaper in a small adjoining dining room with an array of breakfast selections from parathas to pancakes immaculately arranged with two plates set on the dining table. "I didn't know what you liked to eat in breakfast so I ordered everthing, Come" Said Shlok patting the chair next to him.

Ignoring him Astha kept on rigorously kept on drying her hair still wet from the wash which mesmerized Shlok as he kept on watching her with intense gaze. When she turned around he didn't lower his gaze or even looked away guilty and Astha too couldn't help herself as his eyes arrested her in an eye lock communicating with each other in a pregnant silence . A phone ring on intercom suddenly broke their intimacy of souls as Astha looked away guiltily and went to pick up the phone where the Hotel Receptionist informed, "Mam, Dr. Deshmukh is here waiting in the lobby for you. Should I send him up?" to which Astha hurriedly said in whispers "No, tell him to wait there. I am coming in two". "Okay" came a curt professional acknowledgement to her request. "Look I have to go and we will talk in the evening if you want" said Astha rearranging her clothes and picking up her signature Jhola bag. Shlok suddenly became very still noticing Astha's odd behavior and her sudden civil request to him as he suspected she was hiding something from him the way she was not looking him in the eye appearing guilty. This sudden change of heart and wanting to talk became too much for Shlok to digest as he was intrigued to know its cause. "Okay" Came Shlok's very calculated response. Astha nodded and left heading towards the elevator which gave Shlok the chance to quickly follow her by taking two steps of stairs at a time reaching right on time to see her leaving the hotel premises with some man whose face was impossible to look at from behind. Shlok quickly followed them as the man now visible to him turned out to be a boy in his mid twenties he guessed medium height and built with honey and chocolate dripping from his face helped Astha in his modest Alto. Shlok fumed thinking how his PI (Private Investigator) whom he hired to tail Astha not pass this vital piece of information that Astha had become close enough to some handsome young man to be in the same car with him. He fumed some more as he realized this boy was the reason for Astha's sudden civil behavior and guilty eyes. Shlok involuntarily tighten his grip on the steering wheel following them keep good distance between the two cars as his flashy Ferrari can be spotted by Astha anywhere and he didn't want her to find he was following her. The car suddenly stopped in front of an somewhat old building which read "The Blind Men Association" or "Aand jan mandal". Shlok saw both Astha and the boy getting out of the car smiling and laughing at something infuriating Shlok making his blood boil by the sheer fact that some other man can make his woman, his Astha laugh. This was worse to Shlok than him flirting with Astha as they say Hasee toh Fasee'. Shlok shadowed them until they stopped by what seemed to him a classroom filled with blind kids with their book written in Brail. The boy said in a cheery voice "Hey kids it's me Dr. Vishwas Deshmukh again and I have brought Astha didi with me. You guys remember her right?" "Hi Vishwas bhaiya. Hi Astha didi." said all the kids in chorus clearly excited by finding them here. "A Doctor a freaking Doctor. That explained the innocent and kind look on his face. Any girl could easily get attracted to a Doctor especially if he was as kind and good looking as he was. Come on the guys comes to a blind school to spend time with kids. Heck, even I could fall in love with this guy and wouldn't mind spending the rest of my life with him if he was not my enemy and if I didn't hate him so much. Really god didn't to think it was hard enough to win Astha without this extra baggage of competition. But, no Astha loves me even though she denies this now and she can't get over me and move on so easily and so fast." Thought Shlok reassuring himself. He quietly observed both of them talking to the kids and answering some questions asked by some curious kids. Then he heard some ladies whom he guessed were cleaners cum care takers of the NGO talk amongst themselves "These kids Vishwas and Astha make such a cute pair. May god bless them taking out time from their busy life for these kids. First he used to come here alone and now he comes here with her almost every day without fail. God made a perfect couple in them Astha and Vishwas aptly as they both are the same". This was the last straw for Shlok as his blood boiled over and he charged up towards the classroom not caring what Astha will think about him and if he makes a scene. Astha felt his presence long before he entered the room as she felt his gaze on her for quite some time when the hair on the back of her neck pricked and she anticipated this confrontation. She dreaded this conversation with him and the fateful meet between Shlok and Vishwas hoping he would never find out about the relation between them. He dragged Astha by her wrist hardly controlling his anger making both Astha and Vishwas gasp as he took them by surprise. He kept on walking towards his car dragging a resisting Astha when she tried to dug her feet to the ground he simply put her on his shoulder. "Hey, what the hell Slok? Let me go. Put me down. Damn you." Astha kept on beating Shlok's shoulder and back cursing him to hell but he looked like a devil with his face set in hard lines and the grim of his lips tightened as to show the hard control he was showing in the public. Suddenly a figure appeared in front of them whom Astha guessed was Vishwas stopping Shlok in his track and said in a deadly voice, "Let Astha go right this moment. You have no right to carry her like this. Put her down or else I will call security." Shlok said in a voice scarier than she ever heard like the voice of death itself "Who the hell do you think you are coming in between matters of a husband and wife? And don't dare teach me about my rights on my own wife. Call all the security you want no one will want to interfere in someone's personal tiffs. Don't try to goad me boy because then I will teach you not to bite more than you can chew so get lost. One more thing leave my wife alone or else you will have to treat yourself with broken bones". "First, you are Astha's ex- husband as she left you. Second she is my friend so I won't tolerate her bully of ex- husband misbehaving with her. Third I won't leave her alone with you for a second even if I will have to fight you." Said Vishwas in a very calm voice riling up Shlok as he put Astha down on her feet gently and pounced on Vishwas taking him by his collar and punched him twice, first on the cheek and second on the gut making him wince in pain. When he was about to hit him the third time Astha came towards Shlok shouted at him to stop this madness and let him go then started crying and calling him names "You are a monster Shlok. You can't be even called human." As her words registered his brain Shlok stopped to see the Doctor collapsing in front of him on the groung and a scared and worried Astha hurrying besides him to comfort him. This made Shlok curse himself for losing his control and making Astha so terrified. Of him. The thought made Shlok's stomach churn with disgust and deep down some fear. Fear of loosing her forever.

As Varad made his way towards his room he saw Sojal peacefully passed out on the dining table which was beautifully lit up with candles and intimately set up for two. He went towards the table and woke Sojal up from her deep slumber. She woke up groggily and started fidgeting her clothes in which she looked oddly beautiful. She mostly only wore her hair up in a bun or pony tail, sarees with long sleeves and long pallus and was heavily claded in big heavy jewelery worthy of the Agnihotri name which always hid her beauty as people only noticed her makeup, clothes and jewelery. But tonight she was looking breathtakingly beautiful wearing a halter neck white blouse with V shaped front which slightly hinted her cleavage and a red colored net sarees with slight white colored flowers with minimal makeup and no jewels enhancing and emphasizing her generous womanly curves. For a minute Varad only looked at her unable to say anything with his mouth slightly ajar which made Sojal blush furiously as she was receiving her husband's attention and appreciation openly for the first time. When Varad didn't say anything for some time an uncomfortable Sojal asked shyly "Should I serve dinner now or would you like to freshen up?" "No I already ate dinner with my colleagues today when we went out celebrating" said Varad making Sojal sad as tears welled up her eyes and she turned around to hide them as her own husband couldn't bear to have a anniversary dinner with her. "Okay then I will clear up the table." Said Sojal in a neural voice hiding her pain and disappointment making Varad fell like a bas***d "I guess I have some room for dessert." Making Sojal's face lit up 1,000watts as she smiled up at him "Dessert coming right up. I have made your favorite Chocolate Dutch Truffle. I read up the recipe online." leaving Varad slightly shocked to digest the fact that his wife was making any effort to make something only for him and not just to show his parents and rest of his family for the first time in seven years. "Bring out the other dishes. I know you didn't eat anything yourself." Shouted Varad to kitchen where Sojal glowed at Varad's show of care for her. She carried all the dishes to the table shocking Varad even more to see his favorite Chinese Schewaan dumpling and Manchurian along with his favorite green salad with side dressing making him salivate slightly."I just realized I am still somewhat hungry that I can manage a few bits." That made Sojal smile and served him some that turned out to be all of it as he liked it too much. "Where is Kavya? Asked Varad to which Sojal replied "Varad its 11 pm. Its way past her bedtime. She is sleeping in her room". "So what were you celebrating out with your colleuges? Asked Sojal like she was really interested in knowing about Varad and his day to which Varad replied in a monotonous voice "I was made partner in the newpaper this morning along with my post as Editor-in- chief." "Oh my god Varad that's great news. Congratulations. I am so happy for you!"Exclaimed Sojal with utter joy and slight disappointment for Varad not celebrating this news with her first."Is there anything special about today?" asked Varad curious to know about Sojal's sudden interest in making him happy. "Today is our seventh marriage anniversary. So Happy Marriage Anniversary dear husband" Wished Sojal to Varad waiting for his reply. When Varad was about to say something his phone started ringing and he picked it up "Yes, speaking. What? From where? Yes I will be there. Yes, I am leaving right now." "Sojal Shlok has been arrested by Ahmedabad police for assault and he is in lock up right now so I have to leave. Take care of home and Kavya and I will be back by noon tomorrow" Said Varad leaving the house in hurry.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Edited by skm95 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

nice update thank you

THANKS DEAR...KEEP READING AND COMMENTING
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Loved to read Sorad for a change😳 cont. soon!!😊

THANKS DEAR!!!KEEP READING AND COMMENTING😊
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Nice update



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