TASTE OF FREEDOM- A ASTHA-SHLOK FF(ch 17 Part 2 updated ON Page 47)

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

YOU ARE ROCKING DEAR!

accept my buddy request and may i know your name?

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Soujanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

whoa new guy? Wonder what role he plays, hopefully of a brother! lol 😆 but I am happy to see Shlok like this, yea Shlokie boy suffer, its your turn now.!

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Wooow awesome! I like those 2 parallel stories in your FF

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priyavin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Wow, jealous Shlok arrested for assault.

But feel so sorry for Sojal, coz her anniversary was ruined bcoz of Shlok. Atleast Varad has started noticing her now

Waiting for next update, but take your time😊

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

awesome update
loved it
its getting interesting update to update
jealous shlok
he is thinking he could fall for the doctor if he is not his enemy😆
loved sorad part
now shlok in jail
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Operaqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Great update! Thanks for the PM. Totally loving the jealously angle, and love that Sojal is more dignified than she is in the actual serial, you write well!

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537048

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

oh so mr shlok agnihotri was jealous of mr vishvas deshmukh

and nw he is in jail

bt y was astha in the blind school and who is mr deshmukh

do update soon

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Munni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Dear Member,

Your FF has reached 15 pages, which automatically triggers the new FF rules posted in the forum, IMP: Regarding Fan Fictions - NEW RULE, based on which, we have to move this FF from IPKKND...EBP Forum to the Fan Fiction Forum.

Thank you for understanding

Please feel free to PM for any further questions

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IPKKND...EBP Dev Team

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Wandering about

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: khuwahish
Nice update...
Thnx for pm

thanks dear and u r welcome for the pm...keep reading and commenting😊😊

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Wandering about

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Aishaa3
First whn u mentioned the doc I thought astha ws pregnant n wanted it to hide it frm shlok😆anyways...litle jealousy is good for ashlok relationship😳
keep it going wid sorad! cont soon😊

well dear then it would be too predictable and cliched wouldn't it???i know what you mean but it will be interesting to see how will this incident change their dynamics?i thank you for appreciating SORAD so keep reading and commenting😊😊