ArHi FF: The Same Coin#7 - Page 27

Res. Now off to brush my teeth.
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1. Part B is here!
2. And I am excited. This excitement has been clearly evidenced by the fact that I decided to res as soon as I woke up, instead of brushing my teeth.
3. But, the arrival of Part B means that I cannot "productively comment" anymore. I shall miss it. Very much.
4. What I shall miss even more than that, is of course, this story! I love it so much! And it's little hard for me to be able to digest that it is indeed over.
5. Ok. First, could you please find me an Arnav? God, that man sounds so sexy. I can imagine a frazzled, protective, angry and extremely sexy Arnav chasing a miniature version of himself. Or a miniature Khushi.
6. As much as I love happy endings, I know that not all stories can end happily, and that is the truth. In a perfect world Akash would be with Payal/Shahira, and NK would be with Lavanya. But, the world isn't perfect. And sometimes it's ok.
7. That being said, I really wanted NK and Lavanya to get together. Who knows, maybe some day they'll get together.
8. What number 7 actually means is continue writing about all of these people. Start a series of stories about Lavanya, Nk, Akash, Shahira, and of course Arnav and Khushi!
9. Did they dance to "Halo"?
10. I was reading this update and smiling like a goofball!
11. Arnav is right when he says that it isn't his place to tell his cousin's how to live their lives. They're old enough.
12. You have to start writing another story. Or continue this one. Or both. Preferably both.
13. TSC was one of the first stories I ever commented on. I've always been the stalk silently, read and never comment readers. Thank you for writing a story that literally made me want to comment on it. It was like I had no control over what my hands were doing. And I am so glad! :D
14. Thank you for creating such wonderful characters.
15. And thank you for not making college students look like a bunch of airheads. You are right when you say that most students are smart. Because it is true.
16. I refuse to believe that this is the last time I will get an update for TSC. Living in denial forever ki jay.
17. I don't think I need to say this, but brilliant update!
18. If it didn't look to strange, I would stand up and give you a standing ovation. But it would be weird. And fun. But still weird, so virtual standing ovation. *here*
19. I was right about what Preeto wanted to talk to Khushi about!
20. Akash and Payal's friendship was something that surprised me!
21. Arnav and Khushi's relationship. i want that. Pliss to be getting for me one number Arnav?
22. New story, ya? ok!
23. :D
24. Now i shall go and eat chocolate. It feels bad that I have been ignoring it.
25. I love TSC dammit. Hamesha.

S!
Cum the freak heer!
KBA?!

Why must u write A/Ns and make me want to go read the whole story paanchvi baar Phir?!

TSC is something I will cherish for hamesha and also for having a step in reality. So I can't help love primavera. Despite all the issues and ships that have been abandoned or broken. Much like what kate did to jack. Anyway. That's life and I like that's TSC too.

I know that Akash is out there making the lamest jokes that makes some girls giggle non-stop (exhibit A - SEMANTI)
That Nk will be out there strumming his guitar and being an awesome uncle to little "(name is NIC)" when the time comes.
And la well she will be out there being a freaking prodigy solving the worlds problems one at a time.

Thank you for preet and her little story. I enjoyed that very very much. Relationships don't always make sense, especially why 2 people are together. So a hugest pat on the back for successfully writing like a million (well like 5 or 6).

Ok now my coherence level is dropping.
So all I want to say is.

Best college story 5EVA.

And I am going to miss the TSC universe like I do the captains.
But I know that when I need them they will be back for a few short lines? ;)

Lots of love
Lulu
Ps. This is by no means an unres for page 1. Picture abhi Baki hai dost!

That was great. Now I wanna read it again. Ur writing is fabulous.

Finally closure on a great story. I have to admit that I am not a fan of the college scene as maybe I am one of those brainwashed by the wrong depiction of the college scene on large screens or televisions. You depicted them in a very mature but funny way and for that reason I quite enjoyed this story. You threw in a little bit of ballet and Byonce and the ever sexy football playing a Arnav Singh Raizada and I was hooked. I am happy to see where they are in their lives now. It is perfectly natural for people to move apart after college like NK and La, especially since they both were in very demanding fields. NK is right, if she can't commit, he cannot be bending backwards all the time. I am sure she would get bored of him doing this anyway and resentment will settle in eventually. So going their own separate way however sad it maybe is for the best. Poor Akash wishing he was not that quick in splitting up with Shahira (?). Well she is not married yet, maybe it is not too late. Payaliya put her foot down and won her man. Good for her. Now coming to our favorite couple, they are still in their bickering at each other relationship but with a commitment to each other. They worked hard on this relationship, showing the commitment to each other while doing everything that they wanted to achieve. They truly deserve the place where they are at at this stage in their lives. She is not being selfish by saying no baby yet, it is their lives and they decide when they are ready. I just hope that when they are, things will happen accordingly for them. Love the ending with her diary as truly this is who she was from the beginning, glad that he became a part of it too whether by force or by invitation. They do know how to spice their relationship . . .well done Semanti, I think you have achieved what you set out to do . . .

Part B was really good
I was guessing that babies was the subject that Khushi's mother wanted Preeto to discuss with Khushi
I liked their talk where they can freely discuss anything

Poor Payal
Worrying about Akash and Shabira
She needs to be relax since its her engagement

Arnav calmed Khushi down with a dance
Nice
The diary entry at the end was really good
Your points make sense
Life is very unpredictable

Semantic, I must say it was worth the wait!..beautiful ending and yes life is not always how we plan it...your story depicted that more than ever..I hope you will write more..

awesome...loved the end was sad for a nk and lavanya but was a great ending loved it..well worth the wait

Wonderful story, beautiful ending and fabulous epilogue!

Khattam? Can I shed a few tears over this and not come across as a drama queen? No? No? Ok.