Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#611

With khushi around happiness is bound to be there...

"Her presence had the ability to comfort those around her, not always with words, but with her positivity and the contagious smile. "... Superb.

Payal has opened up about what's eating up her and what transpired between Akash and herself.Khushi has to deal at the same time three people Arnav ,Payal and Akash .

There is a stark contrast between he characters of khushi and Payal.khushi has put herself in others shoes and thinking from their point of view and Payal always express her opinions of others not thinking about the others perception .

One question that pops up in my mind is Akash till now seemed to be immersed in his own world and now he seems to shield Arnav .why?what has triggered this?

Arnav ,if he is avoiding to face Payal because of what transpired between them,then why is he not picking up khushi's calls.something fishy?

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cosmina

@cosmina

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#612

this is one of the most interesting,intelligent, mirroring reality and heart touching story i ever read! thank you!

i love Akash ,he is my favorite ! let the story,amazing like i said,but the comments are themselves worth to read!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

wow so kushi is back...wonder what is really up with arnav...and hope payal and akash can solve their problems...awesome story...keep it up...

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

It's so good to have Khushi back. It seriously feels like that positivity has returned.
I'm not liking it. Why didn't Arnav pick her up? Was it because of Payal? But he should have called her or at least could have taken her calls. This is just not done. Is he really that busy? I think there is something more to it.
Khushi is right. Arnav isn't a child who needs Payal to lead/advise him or Akash to protect him. He may speak less or may not be as passionate as everyone else around him is but he has a mind of his own and he actually has a sane mind.
I love the sisterly bond where one knows when the other is troubled. I guess every pair of sibling has that one person with an intuitive power to know that the other is upset. Here that person is Khushi. Or may be Payal could have known that Khushi herself was upset if she was less self absorbed in her own problem and grief. I'm sure if Payal had been happy, her normal self she could have seen Khushi's despair. Sometimes we are so self absorbed in our miseries and problems that we tend to forget that others could be hurt too.
It's good that they had this conversation and now Khushi has some idea regarding what could have led to such behavior from Arnav. It's interesting to see Payal now thinking what she would have done, it's time for some self analysis. Analysing situation of someone else is still easy but one's own is difficult because we are binded with emotions.
I hope this is just a difficult phase and nothing irreparable has been done to the relationships between them all.

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Twiggu, I really dont know how to comment on this update.

Darr lag raha hain. I get the feeling that things will take a turn for the worse for either PayAsh or ArHi...

This update was full of questions... About what is currently happening and the what ifs for the future...

A sister's concern and a lover's worry...

I dont know what to make of it...

Btw, it is true. Talking to your sister, or just being around them HELPS. You sure you dont have a sister????

PS: I do this... Rush to the washroom when I return from a trip everytime😛

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

One folly and there is tension in two relationships...but why arnav avoiding khushi shouldn't he talk to her it is not her fault...I am afraid about cracks happening ...but may be khushi now aware about this talk some sense into Arnav...

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napk

@napk

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Khushi is back and I am very happy... there is a lot of mess and its sad that she has to clean most of it even though shes not the one causing it...

Payal is guilty... because Akash made her realize her mistake... she was not even guilty when she made Arnav mad with her opinions about him and thought what she did was not wrong... I feel with 2 incidents in their life Akash and Payal have seen the other side of each other... it was all happy going so far... but now its the test for their relationship... especially with Payal not thinking before speaking... even with so many situations where she knew she was harsh on him (even her parents said that) she never learned... this situation had to happen for her to realize what her words do to other people... it is fine if she says those to her family but she doesn't stop there... glad khushi showed her, her mirror... would she atleast realize how much damage she has done with her words... its also very sad that payal was tied up in her own guilt that she didn't even look at her sister's dissapointment about missing Arnav... Payal just thinks about herself and for herself... hope she realizes that as well... she seems to think she cares for others but not really

Poor thing is back and happy and everyone is acting weird with her... I'm not sure why arnav is not in contact with her... but I hope he keeps his promise to meet her in the evening... khushi has some idea about his behaviour but not completely... hope they meet soon and atleast clear any misundertanding among themselves... payal and akash can wait

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

lovely chapter...

kushi is back hoping things will turn out the way they are...glad that payal told kushi about everything,her conversation with arnav and akash...

hoping least kushi and arnav will talk nicely not like aksh and payal...

can not wait for next chapter...

thanks for the update and pm...

cheers..

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Amazing update! Thanks for the pm.

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#620

Great update! Aww khushi is back! I feel happy for garimA! She was a shoulder to cry on for her sister. She really did act very mature considering the argument may have been because of her boyfriend.

I'm glad that khuhsi was able to make Payal think about her own situation rather than thinking about others. Payal has to sit down and talk to akash properly.

Do continue soon