Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Garima was a typical mother waiting eagerly for her daughter who has been away

from home ... be it only for a week ... 😆

Her typical motherly concern for her daughter who had to put up with ...

"The heat, the work, the dust, - and no food! 😆

and trust Khushi to rush into the loo as soon as she reached home !!!

Ah ... there's nothing like home sweet home ...

What concerned me was the terse message sent to her by Arnav ...

"Shashi will pick you up from the station, I have given him the coach details.

I'll be busy then, will see you later in the evening." 😲

It was so unlike Arnav ... considering they have not met for a whole week ...

was he really that busy as he stated or was he just trying to keep away from another

face-off with Payal ... 😕

Khushi being the sensitive caring sister could make out immediately that all was

not well between Aakash and Payal ... and hoped that it was nothing connected to Arnav !

Payal's little talk with Khushi made her realise that she had been trying to show others the mirror

while she was herself in dire need of some introspection...

This Khushi is really very grounded ...

Thank you Twiggy ... 🤗

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago

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Aishaqaiser

@Aishaqaiser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Superb update!!!!!
Everything s mess now...hopefully khushi's presence sort dis out soon...n payal definitely needs some introspection!!!!

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Tan tana tana na na
I am first after sooo long!🥳

And not in hospital for a change, Twiggs!😆

You got me worried now, Twiggs.
Why didn't Arnav go to the station to pick up Khushi?
And why hasn't he called her yet?
I hope he is not so small minded that he blames Khushi for Payal's misdemeanour.
I just wish he comes to see her soon.

And Payal.
Good she came out clear with whatever happened while Khushi was away.
I'm still not too sure about her motives.
Or maybe she meant well but the way she went about talking to Arnav was wrong.
She needs to work hard at apologising to Aakash and Arnav.
Hope she can let go her ego and do so.
I'm anxiously waiting for the next update.
Waiting for answers to some serious questions raised here.

Thanks for the awesome chapter.

It's a good thing Payal told Khushi. Hopefully Khushi can go and talk to Arnav to sort things out.

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meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Updated my comment here

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

fabulous part

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

This chapter was much more refreshing. I must say that Khushi's return back to the place where things are now muddled definitely made a difference.

I have to give it to Khushi for the way she took it all. I know it is not easy to be good to all, to agree with each and every person yet that is exactly what Khushi did, albeit partially and in a way so as to ensure that there wouldn't be any additional friction. She was a sister to Payal and girlfriend to Arnav in equal sense. Of course her sentiments towards Akash were dubious to say the least. But my love for her stays. She seems, at present, the lone figure who is capable of salvaging every sinking ship around her.

Arnav's aloofness has me on high alert. Should I be worried?

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

What I keep wondering is, Arnav's text message was slightly off, ( have some work) and then his phone being switched off, he's been missing her so much and here the day she's back , it just seems odd, I hope he's having a crazy busy Sunday and nothing else!

Hope Khushi will bring some light by talking to Arnav about everything, things can get so confusing if not communicated!

Twiggy, amazing writing as always!

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namita11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Its great to have khushi back. I hope she changes the difference s between tbem

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Sonaparam29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

I hate payal very much..to which extent uska koi limit hii ni hai..she is such a selfish gal..usse khushi ki kuch ni padi hai..nly me me n me!!Such a disgusting gal!! 😡
Khushi ill nw do evrythng perfect..in arnav life!!
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shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#610

I'm happy Khushi is back.. Was i waiting for her to make the things better for all of them?? Despite being youngest of them all, with the thoughtfulness she shows, I'm unconsciously making her play the peacemaker, it's not good.

Fabulous update Twigs :) :)