Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great great update. Payal - this is the time of reckoning for you. I'm glad Khushi managed to make see things from a different perspective. I wonder how she will handle things with Arnav now. And Arnav did he really not want to drop everything and come and meet up. Something's cooking up on Arnav's side.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful conversation between sisters - so natural and realistic to the core, but please give the next update soon, that would definitely be between Arnav and Khsushi I take it - I want to see how Khushi is going to assure Arnav (about their relationship) and how Arnav is going to react when he sees Khushi (I want him to loose all control but it might end up other way round though), give us a long update with them please and one sooner as well please - I have to say its brilliant story, you choose very simple words but then give us perfect emotions with every line you write, beautiful way to progress the story!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...

Arnav didn't go pick khushi... What could be the reason?? He is not a type of person who would blame khushi for whatever Payal said... May be he didn't want to face Payal... But then he didn't call her either??

Payal told everything to Khushi... But still I think that she has no remorse for what she said to Arnav but is more worried about her and Akash relation... Hope things get sort out between them...

Loved the update.. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
What's up with Arnav? I can understand if he wants to avoid meeting Payal. But why is he not picking up Khushi's calls? I just hope its not because of what Payal said the other day.
Payal has made things complicated for the four of of them ,including herself,with her "showig the mirror" spree. And I'll be really happy if she realizes at least now that she needs to have a good look at one asap. She really needs it..
And looking forward to know more about Arnav's absence.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Twiggy !!! Sorry I am late but der se aaye par durust aaye !!
Finally Khushi is back... I love her and her bonding with the family !!!
Whats wrong with Arnav?? Why is he acting weird or am I reading too much between the lines...Hopefully will see them together in the next update...
Payal is all guilty and agonised over the past happenings and I adore it when Khushi acts all mature and gives a patient ear to Payal even though she is not happy the way people are treating her Arnav.. I just love the way she thinks the Arnav is more of worth than these silly worries...
Loved the update...
Thanks for the Pm...
Edited by headtotoe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So Khushi is back, I am so happy😊. In this story, Khushi is the only character who can bring smile on my face..
Now what is going on with Arnav 😲..when Aakash came to Payal about Arnav, I didn't think much about his sudden protectiveness towards Arnav but now I am just wondering if something is wrong with him. I understand that Payal was bad with him but its not the first time but he would never avoid Khushi... Khushi's worry for him seems genuinely worrisome.😲

I amazed with Payal..she has one time this bitter dose of her medicine, she was all worked up.. She still hasn't realized what happens with other people with her so called straightforward advises..I had assumed something like this from Khushi, very mature.. Khushi's question about Aakash has baffled Payal..She has no clue...

Brilliant writing as always Twiggy 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am so happy to have Khushi back ... but boy does she have her work cut out or what !
Its difficult to see Arnav running or shying away from his Khushi... setting apart his and Payal's equation ...he really should have been there when she came back... may be he had other reasons justifying his absence... well whatever it is i am surely looking forward to the next update.
These two couples really have created quite an entangled web around each other.


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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all sorry for the late comment!

So finally khushi is back, n with her it seems the khushi of gupta house is also back but it remains to be seen whether she will be able to bring khushi back in the lives of arnav payal n akash!
It was nice to see how payal shared all her woes with khushi! N to be honest though most of the times i dislike payal for her razor sharp tongue n thoughtlesness but fr the first time i really felt bad for her, specially seeing her sobbing like that. I guess this happens when you fail to take other's feelings into account others also fail to take yours in to account. If you are capable of dishing out advices in thr most brutal of ways then you should be able to take them also. I mean you cant go on telling the world what it needs to do n when someone tells you what u need to do , you unleash your temper on them.
Payal you may have good intentions of arnav n others at heart but they cant obviously peep in to it n get to know what you feel no?People will see what you will show them! I hope you will now start working on your tact!
Else what will you tell your patients' parents when their child is unwell or dying? That they can use some perspective as death is an inevitable event! Everyone has to die one day?"

But in all i really liked khushi's approach To this whole thing. She patiently listened to her sister. Didnt berate her for being wrong of encourage her for being right. She withheld her judgement n listened to her sister as that was the most important thing then. She gave credit n weightage to akash's opinion n didnt discredit it altogether coz it was against her sister. She didnt berate her sister for interfering in her relationship with arnav!
N she certainly gave payal something to chew on in the end!As payal too can use some perspective right now!
However hope arnav khushi relationship dsnt suffer in all this!
Loved the update!!!!
Waiting for the next part.
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Payal has long way to go and so does Akash
Edited by Pdrover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What is going on with everyone??
Is Arnav that upset? Is Payal that unable to take criticism herself?

It's like the world of Polemic Jackanapes has gone topsy turvy: I can't handle it! Please fix this Twiggy!! At least give us a scene of Arnav-Khushi mushiness!


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