Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Twiggy 🤗
Can i start with saying just how perfectly well Arnav and Khushi are there for each other every step of the way.
I can understand Arnav's immense sorrow in thinking that he is responsible for a life lost. My sympathise with him.

Well at the same time i can also understand khushi's frustration in not being able to get through to Arnav but she clearly needs to give him some time to get over this attack of guilt. She endeared herself to me with her slight hesitation in sharing her piece of good news with arnav.

Arnav has a very challenging task ahead of him...aman just might refuse all his help.

Looking forward to read how the road ahead is for Arnav & Khushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am absolutely in love with the way you write... I am not just talking about the story here but also the emotions and the thought process of the various characters... Not only do you describe them beautifully but also make it seem so real that its not difficult to imagine the whole scene in my head... 👏
Coming to the update I happen to agree with both Arnav and Khushi but in parts... Arnav feeling guilty about Lavanya's death is completely natural... Whether he could have done anything to prevent it involves a lot of 'what ifs' and questions , the answers to which we will never know... So its okie for Arnav to take his time and accept what has happened and let his feelings sink in...

At the same time I also agree with Khushi... These feelings of guilt and helplessness are like a abyss in which he will sink deeper and deeper if he doesnt fight it... As much as Arnav needs to take his time and accept everything, at some point he will have to fight all this and focus on making things better and doing what he can about the situation... So in my head its a process which may take a day, a week or a month, all that depends on Arnav...
Okay I am not sure if I am making too much sense now... In any case I am just glad Arnav has Khushi to help him get back on track...

Loved the update😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very few men and I say very few have the capacity to truly feel proud and happy at their woman's success, if they are not successful themselves...Truly love Arnav !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Howlong do we have to wait for the next update?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Next update coming up on Friday night 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all tge parts n its awesome
Wen i started reading in bween i thot shashi
N garima hav given khushi n payal enough
Liberty being out with arnav or akash comin home
Y dnt they get thm married
N thn nxt i saw ur update on their past n
Discussion it was fabulous.
Arnav is sooo giving out here. He can giv his life
For the ppl. I truly feel sad for him. I hope
He is able to get his confidence back n fight.
Continue soon n plz pm me the nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago


I am not blaming myself for their choices, Khushi. I am guilty of my own.

and

Its convenient to allow yourself to drown in guilt and give up. To allow yourself to be soothed by the balm that is self pity. I am telling you... this guilt, the pity, this.. dark place - its a drug. It is inviting and it will give you the release you so need. Don't give in to it, Arnav.


Above two quoted lines are the ones which stood out in this whole update for me. Are you by any chance a shrink? Because your approach towards human psyche is so positive and understanding that I might want to sign up with you. Seriously :)


Guilt, how the guilty perceives it and guilt how it is perceived by people around them. These two quotes are wonderful examples of it. Arnav is right in his place and Khushi is trying her best to pull him from drowning in that dark place. But however strong and valid her arguments are, I can not fault Arnav. He will need time to recover.


From the way this story is moving, I am getting a hope that the tigress that Khushi is, she will not let Arnav ruin his life in self doubt. She will fight with him, for him. Can it get any better? Nah.


One thing I want to mention is that I love your Arnav and Khushi. They are different from the rest. Arnav though a sweetheart, is the weaker one here. Not just emotionally, but career wise too. And as a person too. It takes a strong woman to stand by a man like this. A woman deeply in love and confident in her skin. I admire you for creating a Khushi like that.

Waiting for the next part :)


Edited by Anony_mous - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love your story...😃
...read all the chapters in one go and had my momma running after me with a chappal because I wouldn't get off my computer chair 🤔 never-mind that loved it 😉.

Do update soon.



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Edited by fortuna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's Friday!!! The 13th to top. Where is Twiggy?
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Posted: 11 years ago


No gifs for me ? 😔

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