ILOR:RISHBALA & ARSHI-New take on contract mrg track *Part (6) up*

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Sajinabi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awsome chapter Neha Clapping Hands

. Awww loved der passionate kiss moments . Was wondering why didn't Khushi cry out her inner hurt becoz of his cold behaviour 2wards her . Well if she did also no use at d wrong time itself dat snalewa reached to spoil everything Grrr

Update soon, can't wait wen Anjali is going to do her investigation on her husband's irritated moods and anger. Thanks 4d pm.

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Arihiya-Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Continue soon!!

It's an amazing ff

I loved how u wrote Shyam's lines because not many people can write like that!!!

Please continue!

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: saj111

Awsome chapter Neha . Awww loved der passionate kiss moments . Well if she did also no use at d wrong time itself dat snalewa reached to spoil everything .
Update soon, can't wait wen Anjali is going to do her investigation on her husband's irritated moods and anger. Thanks 4d pm.

First of all, I love the cutey-cutey emoticons.
And yea, me also excited for writing Anjali's part which will be in next to next part.

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Arihiya-Raizada
Continue soon!!
It's an amazing ff
I loved how u wrote Shyam's lines because not many people can write like that!!!
Please continue!

Awww.😃...Thanx for appreciation.

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Hey guys, sorry for the late update. Been busy. Will try to update next part soon.
Thanx for the response of last part.
Also this is a short update as its filler.

PART 3(A):- Sangeet

TRISHNA:- I don't think R.K. loves you. He might doing this just for revenge.

MADHU:- Didu, please. You know na I hate such jokes.

TRISHNA:- I'm speaking truth. Why can't you understand that?

MADHU:- Didu, listen...

TRISHNA (cutting her off):- Madhu, you forgot how he humiliated you when you're engaged to Mukund by saying you've an affair with him?

MADHU:- Didu, let's forget it. Y r u remembering those times?

TRISHNA:- At the time of engagement also, he came and apologized to ma. For what? To humiliate her further. Madhu, please, listen to me. For R.K., his life is also drama. You can't trust him.

MADHU:- Didu, he really love me..

TRISHNA:- For that you're even ready to forgive him for what he did to Malik?

MADHU:- He only gave money for his treatment..

TRISNA- It had a COST. At COST of ur HUMILIATION. By making you his HALF WIFE, THEN SERVANT. SPOT AND SO ON.

MADHU- Didu every human being makes mistakes. But he's accepting them and ready to rectify his mistakes. He also agreed for 7 phere marriage. He wants to give me back the respect, right Didu? That's y he's doing this, isn't it?

TRISNA(Hopefully)-Really??

MADHU- Yes Didu. Are you happy now? Any doubt? (Cell phone rings "R.K." calling) Didu xcuse me.

TRISNA(st)- Hopefully u r r8 MADHU...
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(This is their phone conversation)
R.K.:- Kaha ho biwi? Tumhe yad to hai na ki aaj koi sangeet nhi, par hamare liye sangeet honewala hai..

MADHU (remembers Trishna's conversation, then brushes it off):- Are mein kitchen mein thi. Didu ke sath baat kr rhi thi. Waise tum kya kr rhe the?

R.K.:- T.V. dekh raha tha.(Still continues gazing at the T.V. screen.)

Ma-Malik ki kafi yad aa rahi hai. Mein Didu ke sath ghar hokr aati hu.

R.K.:- Kya yar biwi? Apne pati ko chhodke apne mayke jaa rhi ho?

MADHU:- R.K. stop. Tum mere pati nahi, honewale pati ho. KAL hamari shadi ho jayegi.. Phir to hum humesha sath hi rahenge..(saddens remembering her family.)
(Speaks in a low tone) R.K., mein sabko bahot miss karungi..

R.K.:- Mein tumko miss krne hi nhi dunga..

MADHU:- hmmm. Mujhe tum par pura vishwas hai.. Bye.

R.K.:- Bye.. luv u..(cuts call)

R.K. (st):- Ahaan. I Promise biwi mein kabhi tumhe apni family miss krne hi nahi dunga.

(R.K. goes to change by putting the remote down. Current Scenario near gates of R.K. mansion was going on the screen.)
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"Welcome to everyone. Today, we're celebrating sangeet of my chief, The Superstar R.K.. Let's start with our first performance by none other than sister-in-law of the groom, aka , Dipali Sikander Bhatia. Give a big hand to her." Announced Bittuji.

All the family members present there were shocked at this announcement. Soon after, happy atmosphere took place. They were happy for their kids. But the one who had to perform was fuming with anger, "Oh, so this is the special party for which we prepared dance. No. I can't let this happen. I won't let this wedding take place."

Lights were dimmed... Dipali's back ws turned towards stage. Slowly, she starts moving her body to the tunes of ""

R.K. purposefully kept his eyes only on dance floor. As expected Madhu's temper started raising. "What does he thinks of himself? Huh.. I'll show him. See. Even now he's oogling at dance e floor."

R.K.:- Madhu, u said something?

MADHU(says smiling fakely):- nahi, nothing.

R.K.:- You know Madhu, the more you try to show you're strong, the more you're soft from inside.

MADHU:- No. Its not. I'm strong and I can do anything.

R.K.: - Well then, today is our sangeet. Say you love me in front of everyone.

MADHU(shocked):- What??

R.K.:- What happened? Can't do it? Right??

MADHU:- No. I can. And as I'm fulfilling your condition, you HAVE to fulfill my condition, that is, I'm going to.stay with ma-malik tonight..

R.K.:- But Madhu, listen...

(Madhu does not hear him. She goes towards Bittuji & whispers something. After that, she moves towards back stage. Bittuji also moves from there.)
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"Now, there's a special performance for someone special by Mrs. see it urself
Madhu comes on the stage and starts dancing on the tunes of:

Kate nahi kat te ye din ye raat
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Lo aaj mein kehti hu
I LUV U. I LUV U. ILUV U. I LUV U.
(She sings the last line directly looking in R.K.'s eyes.)

As the song ended, there came a loud applause from the crowd. Madhu beamed happily at the family.
No sooner did she moved a step towards, them, than she felt a tug at her wrist. She turned back to see her dear husbd holding her hand. He twirled her and pulled her into himself. He danced with her on a romantic number.

Dipali was fuming with anger at their proximity. On the other hand, Trishna, not able to understand what's going on in his mind against her innocent little sis, called Madhu to talk with her.

Madhu moved towards Trishna while R.K. towards his room.
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Guys comment.
I didn't describe songs here as its not necessary in this part.

Edited by Jenn1 - 11 years ago

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

awesome update sorry for d late comment

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

i seee a res thr is a upating w8ing

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: AzraZaidi
i seee a res thr is a upating w8ing

I've drafted the next part of ILOR. But as I'm participating in os competition, I got late.
And I thought to update the Madhubala part as it'll play a very, very important role in Khushi's life as after 3-4 more updates, Khushi will meet them.