ILOR:RISHBALA & ARSHI-New take on contract mrg track *Part (6) up*

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

nice part

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Awesome update !!!!!!!!!

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katj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

It's a nice update..
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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

This teaser is for future updates. Only ARSHI readers, read the next part of Madhu bala, coz, it'll be related to ARSHI.
Guys, pls comment on it.. If we don't get enough response, it discourages to write further.

TEASER

"No, I won't cry anymore. At least not over him. I don't have any place to go. Where should I go? Whose help should I take? No, no, no no... The question is who'll help me except this drink?" Saying this to herself, she gulped down the entire bottle.
"What does he think of himself? I broke his promise for him. Him?? I never met such person in my life... (Shouts loudly) I HATE him. I HATE him. (Increases her volume) I HATE you Mr. ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA. (Voice slow downs due to tiredness) I HATE you.."
{My dear readers, you might have guessed who is she? Yea, you r right. Its none other than our dearest Khushi kumari Gupta.!}

She was coming to Ganpati bappa's temple to ask him questions that why did Bappa play such a cruel joke with her? Then she heard someone shouting, "I hate you Mr. ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA."
"Are, who is this? & why is she yelling like this?"
Then she sees Khushi sitting at Roadside, drinking.

"No, she doesn't look like a drinking girl. Maybe she is having some prblm. I should help her."-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------"You're too much drunk. Tell me where do u live? I'll drop u.."

Hearing this, all her wounds re-opened. She smiles sarcastically, "I've no place to live."

"Your hsbnd??" She asked looking at her mangalsuta.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------"But we both can stay together!!! Hmmm... How does it sound??"
"Tonight, let's stay here in temple only. Well think something tomorrow."
"I don't believe in God. Every bad thing happens in front of him only."---------------------------------------------------------"So, Khushi, you're up so early?"
"Ummm, I can't remember much of last night. What's ur name?"
"Madhubala Mallik"..
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Above teaser will come after 2-3 update. How's it??

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Sajinabi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Awsome Teaser Neha , guess it was Arnav's Dadi she met.

Update soon, can't wait 4d actual chapter to come soon . Thanks 4d pm.

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: saj111

Awsome Teaser Neha
Update soon, can't wait 4d actual chapter to come soon <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05185.gif" alt="" /> . Thanks 4d pm.

Madhubala Mallik is Madhubala of RKBALA pair.
Khushi & Madhu will meet at temple.

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome part...thanks for the PM

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Nice teaser...thanks for the PM

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Y u give such teasers which ll cme in next 2 or 3 parts... fr tht we have keep our hearts in our hands for waiting... anyways nice teaser KKG n drinks????? Tht too shouting in front of temple. ... somethn unusual... update soon...

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: marium-zamamii
Y u give such teasers which ll cme in next 2 or 3 parts... fr tht we have keep our hearts in our hands for waiting... anyways nice teaser KKG n drinks????? Tht too shouting in front of temple. ... somethn unusual... update soon...

Yup.. The teaser will come after 2-3 update, but will change the direction of the characters, followed by time leap.
Also, from there, RKBALA & ARSHI will merge. As u can see, changed Madhu meets a DRASTICALLY CHANGED KHUSHI.
Also, real story will start from there only.. The connection of title "IDENTITY- LOST OR MAYBE REGAINED?!!" with the story will be revealed..

Hence, posted Teaser..

Yup, KKG drinking, not believing in God, shouting & missing HIM.
Something unusual; but what? U'll know in upcoming update...