The Bride With A Doll...Epilogue UPDATED ON PAGE 9 :) - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago

To have read about the early twentieth century through history books is one thing; to have it come alive before your eyes through a story is another. And after reading The bride with the doll' I think I preferred the latter one very much.


The story is enticing right from the title itself. Even before getting introduced to Khushi you have already endeared yourself to her. Yet when she was brought into the picture, I couldn't help but be smitten by the child bride. Her thoughts, her insecurities over being accepted by Arnav, the conversations between her and Thammi and the doll she brought along with her symbolizing the childhood which she never had owing to the customs in India of those times...you are already in love with her. This Khushi is the personification of Mishti doi.


I loved the various layers that this Arnav possessed. From being the person whose internal conflicts made living so difficult for him; the choices that he made and then regretted making with the change in ideologies with the passage of time and a glimpse into the thoughts of Arnav as a person through the journal entries was just so beautifully portrayed!


History fascinates me and that you entwined this story with a very importance time period in Indian history calls for an applause. Also, you incorporated things of that time period so effortlessly that transporting back to that time was an experience nothing short of gratifying.


The story is a heart stealer for many reasons, the leads with the alterations in their lives, thoughts that they undergo and the discovery of love for each other throughout the span of eight years, the inherent sweetness that there is to the tale and the perfect delineation of the life and times of 1920s.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Are you from calcutta dear, I mean the flavour u added in thid is not at al posibl if u wud nt have been frm the city of joy n also if u hvnt luvd it with all ur heart...along with the story, the way u molded it with diffrent poems by renowned bengali writers of that period simply mesmerised me. It is indeed a marvelous piece of art that u have penned down.
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was fantastic!! loved it so much.. the epilogue couldnt have been more better. brought me happy tears to see the the love growing in the small happy family of arnab n khushi. and arnav reading the news abt declaration of poorna swaraj was the perfect ending.
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is such a wonderful and beautiful story
hats off to you yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi jenny...just stumbled upon ur index n i can't thank my luck more...all fabulous writing.
I love this one n read it in a go ...n superb work, initially some things like 'b' in arnav n the age gap of 13 disturbed me but as the story progressed i found out that nothing could be more justified than that...it makes it all more conjuring. I dreaded that u might end this with some tragedy or something but u gave such a beautiful ending it was perfect.
Thanx again, will be reading ir other works too.
I know u know this but still to let u know from my side 'u are an awesome writer.'
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Posted: 11 years ago
completely njyd t
diff genre n diff stry
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome lovestory of arnav and khushi in pre-independence period
superb narration
fantastic story line
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm.. I don't remember how I landed up here, but I did yesterday. The title didn't really catch my attention first, but the prologue did - the time in which the story is set mainly. And I kept on reading it as and I when I found time. From chapter 2, the story actually started moving and capturing all my attention. It evolved and unwrapped beautifully. 👏

Khushi's journey from a child to teen to a woman is of course the main essence, but Arnab's character is what I liked the most.

Honestly at this point of time I am too overwhelmed with emotions. Probably the only time I have felt like this was after watching 'Pinjar'. And though your story also has the backdrop of India's freedom fight it's not why I am comparing the two. It's just the art of story telling and touching multiple issues while building emotions that are similar. You didn't loose the hold on it while addressing the movement, the child marriage issue. I loved how only a small portion of the story is actually based on what happened in the show and the rest of it is all different.

Excuse me for my banter, I want to say lot of things, but I just get carried away when I am emotional and then it all seems too wordy and loose its meaning. All I want to do is just give you a tight hug for giving us the opportunity to read this wonderful story 🤗

Can't wait to read your other work..
Edited by ..Swapnali.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW 😊😃
u r an awesome writer JENNY⭐️
Ur work is sooo marvellous,amazing and beautifull that whenver i start any of ur story i am stickly hooked wih it and fall in love with it by evry part👏 👏

this story is totally a different historical concept with some old child marriage issues of society
and freedom movemnt going along👏⭐️
but the beautifull bonding of Arnab and Khushi😳 😳 was portrayed ssooo awesomely and lovely😃
the ending was amazing and mind blowing😃 with family reunion and addition of little version of arshi 😉😳
Thanks a lot for writing such a fab master piece on arshi
❤️🤗👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
magnificent story😊 i absolutely adored each and every part of the story😛 this has become one of my favorite fan-fictions😃 loved ur writings and thanku for giving us such a beautiful story 2 read😛 I would love 2 follow ur stories and so pls do accept my buddy request so that i can receive PMs from u😃

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