The Bride With A Doll...Epilogue UPDATED ON PAGE 9 :) - Page 28

I came across this story of yours today and read it in one sitting. It's amazing. I loved it. Hope you write more quality stories like this with arshi. I had read late spring too few months back.

Such a beautiful story this is Jenny!
I was a little apprehensive of the concept when I started reading it but you have handled it so wonderfully...Loved it so much!!
Loved your Arnab and Khushi.
Loved the tender love they share with each other.
Loved how Arnab calls her Khushu...soo endearing and sweet.
Loved how Arnab patiently waited for her to naturally mature into a woman.
Loved how Khushi wanted to be good wife even though she doesn't actually know what that means.
Loved how their relationship progressed.

I must appreciate you for your insight into the happenings in India during the freedom struggle. Kudos to you for that.

I just found ur story & its' very nice one.

Some 1 asked about this FF on ''Finding an incomplete FF'' thread and I was tempted to read it...Now I have started reading it,,I m totally lost in it...Jenny U have some magic because I m finding myself completely engrossed in story and Living in that era...Uuufff This is amazing...Uptill Now I m loving both Arnab n Khushi...I also like Thammi for her kind and loving behavior...Arnab's mother has her own share of life and thats why she is the she is...

Just read the chapter 11...Magical...I felt like those emotions inside me on seeing ur lover ur husband after two painful years...I cried with their grief and Loved their lovemaking...Such a beautiful update...N Khushi is too stubborn..I am with her that she is not letiing Arnav go again all alone...going to reaD epilogue now...

Beautiful!

Beautiful Epilogue...A heart warming and heart touching story it was...awwessome Jeny...

This is a sweet touching story line. Love you for setting the story in pre independence era. The story was aptly handled given the age factor found here. Love the evolution of love how is acquires meaning over time. I was expecting a sad ending given how the story was progressing but thankfully you did not divulge much into the freedom struggle. During war crimes are committed one both sides, for our state of illusion at least we need to feel we have an iota of humanity remaining in us after all. Arnav was clearly a disillusioned man when he though he could participate in freedom moment with loss of blood or simply riding high on principles.

Aw axing amazing story just loved every bit of it :)

hey i'm a kind of becomin an addict...

AN ADDICT TO U'RE FICTIONAL WORLD...ND I'VE NO PROBS BOUT ADMITTIN MAH ADDICTION...:):)

i love d way dis stry was written..:) nd spread over a tym of wich we have lil knowledge..knowledge bout d common man struggle..nd how dere family survived wid dem..was it selfish of me..wen i wantd to not go and fite..nd stay wid khushi enjoyin his life nd + d security it offered...;)

nd dere were other instances as well wich were so beautiful...

two different stries went by..one of a child marriage nd d other of freedom struggle...nd u justified both of dem beautifully...arnav's charcter despite bein flawed was d best in d stry...
khushi's transition was beautiful..from a doll clad 12 yr old to feedin arjun..she came a long way ...

i loved d most wen arnav finally relentd to take her along...separation of any kind is very hard...who bettr to know den dese two parchd souls..

WHO WERE MEANT TO B..!

nd den others chaarcater...i lobed d way dey contributed to d stry...:)