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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Have send you a buddy request,please accept for future post pms.

Can you please give me the link to Intoxication.. I could not locate it on your index...

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ocean28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

I have always enjoyed reading your work, and this is absolutely your best thus far. I liked the seriousness of the main topic as well as the back ground of the story. Yes it is a love story between our favourite couple, but the backdrop is more than romance. I love history so may be that is why I found the era of the plot so engaging.

The characters, all of them have so much depth. Enjoyed the various relationships. The description of the river banks where they spent an evening and later the night were all so vivid. I really liked that even though the family lived apart they are still connected. To me this story is about arnav and khushi, but it is also so much more.

The topic and the historical plot of this story has illustrated what a versatile writer you are and that you are not only good at writing about romance, but also other serious subjects. Please please write some more along these lines.

Thank you for such a wonderful piece of fiction. Looking forward for more...

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Jenny, thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us. I enjoyed reading every single part and every small detail you provided of that time period was just astounding (even something as small as mentioning an angithi shows that you have really done your research and kept the backdrop of the story true to the time period).

The epilogue was beautiful ad there was so much hope that came about from it. Even though the times were bleak in the beginning and even towards the end, you left it off on such a high note.

I love the relationship that you portray between Arnvav and Khushi. Without their family, they have made a life of their own and have done well for themselves; I'm sure due to the fact that they are together and supporting one another. Khushi might have come into his life as a child, but she has shown that she is a strong woman now (even if she still plays with young children!).

The reunion with the rest of the family members was great. I'm glad that all of them got to meet the baby and they all know that Arnab and Khushi are doing fine.

I'm glad you brought back the independence movement in the end; it was a really fitting ending.

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prati_incept

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

beautiful..

beautiful...

perfect end of the perfect story..

very well done.. 👏 👏 👏

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mehak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

What an update ..i loved how u portrayed that arnav and his khushu are so happy and content in their life and with the arrival of the bundle of joy arjun.. its more heartwarming..
p.s sorry for late coments

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incandescent

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

updated my comment on pg 14.

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Anisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

That was one beautiful epilogue Jenny

the family reunion was lovely...

Thank you so much for writing this story dear

thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it

keep writing !

thanks for the PM

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pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

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IT WAS A REMARKABLE JOURNEY...

A young man with high values ...

An innocent ,naive child...

Their mutual ,instant attraction towards each other..

The man is trying hard to not do any harm to the child...

n the child is willing to grow up soon to have a baby...

I literally cried when Khushi's love broughr Arnav back from the dark,filthy area...

Arhi cute romance before they decided to start their life as a man n wife,followed by the mishap n their forced separatoin...

Then their passionate romance in the hut n khushi's detemination to not leave her husband's side...

Awww... Jenny !!!

U r such a sweetheart..

Thanx a lot ,buddy..for writing this heart touching story !!!

The family reunion was so touching..

ARNAV'S PARENTS,THAMMI,ARHI N LITTLE ANGEL,ARJUN..

UNDER ONE ROOF.ALBEIT FOR A SHORT TIME..

BUT IT DOESN'T MATTER NOW...THEY R ONE IN THE REAL SENSE OF THE WORD !!!

Sara ki mom... i love u !!!

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Unres:😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95344694

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Blondiexzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#250

Thanks Jenny for such a beautiful story with a happy epilogue with the whole family.

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