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srilathas

@srilathas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

beautiful story dear...you are too good a writer...even though i wanted to write more about the dialogues i fell in love with, right now i am hard pressed for time...may be after few days...but i couldn't stop from appreciating a wonderful piece of work...

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supriya

@Dreamy123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

What an amazing story...read the story all in one go... lovely characters, and heart touching emotions. amazing

Thanks for sharing the story with us...

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Hira

@hira_arnie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Wow...
Amazing story...
Just read it in one go...
Beautiful tale of arhi...emotional superbbb job dear...
I really loved it alot

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napk

@napk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Jenny - Beautiful story!!

Very well written... I loved the setting and the concept you choose... Child marriage

Arnav a grown up with his own ideals and Khushi a child loosing everything and happy that she has her husband... I loved how Arnav changed himself for Khushi... thinking she was just a child to a beautiful woman he desired... I also loved how he stopped himself on that dark night when he saw a child who was the same age as his wife... Khushi changing herself to become a woman for Arnav so that she can be with him and have a baby... :)

Little Khushi is so cute and innocent... I laughed, cried and went through all the emotions they were going through... each character had its own significance... even though we didn't get much of pranab... its so natural for him to have feelings for khushi as she became a beautiful woman... he was also a child like her... it was heartbreaking for khushi to know he had feelings for her... I hope his future was happy with his wife...

The hut romance.. loved it... something which was left incomplete in the actual show... the determination khushi had to not leave her husband after their separation and how they were there for each other through the tough times... the way arnav let khushi be herself and gave her, her childhood and freedom... everything is beautiful.

The epilogue answered many questions... how arnav realized how much he missed his family and said he loved them... however stubborn his dad was he realized what he lost when his son left... how they aged so soon... Khushi's letter made so much sense... what she learned from her mother in law and how she missed thammi... they have a beautiful family 😊

Thanks for writing... I couldn't follow it when you were writing it... but I finally read it and I am so happy that I got a chance to read.

Thank you once again.

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

A beautiful end to a beautiful story.

I think no one can write period dramas better than you on the forum. All the details, the settings, the characterizations (of every character and not only Arnab and his Khushu) were authentic of the era in which you had setup the story. Are you some history professor or lecturer. If not, then I must commend you for your research skills. Never even once in so many chapters did I find myself frowning that ... ummm can something like this happen in 1920's? NOT even once. Specially the ending, I loved that. Brilliant.

Coming to the emotional aspect of the story, it was a beautiful experience. A man and a girl bound in holy matrimony. Both loving their partner with what they think is the best. Him with constraint and caution and her with abundant love and utmost faith. This was coming of age story of khushi and boy what a beautiful woman she turned out to be. Not only physically but from inside too. She gave up every comfort of a rich house so that she can stay near her husband in a small rented place. She gave up the comfort of servants so she can cook meals for him. Arnav is indeed the lucky one here. His patience paid off.

Once again, I am in love with this story of yours. For me it has tremendous repeat value and I am going to come and read it again sometime. Please keep writing period pieces. I think Bride with a Doll is first of many installments that you have planned under Unending Love series, right? So waiting for other stories impatiently :)

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myriads

@myriads

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Loved it & a big thanks

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

loved the epilogue... the ending was beautiful... thanks for writing such an amazing story of arhi's journey :)

Edited by neha2013g - 11 years ago

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binimoti

@binimoti

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Wow, Amazing, any amount of words is not enough to describe what you have written made me take the journey with your story, superb I am thrilled with the kind of story yo write, they are marvelous, keep on writing, I know you are on leave from if, you have your own life but be back soon...

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Wow such a happy ending
Loved how their relation grew including Arnab becomin more intoxicated with his wife
N how both were so eager to see each other at the end of the working day
looks like both managed to do quite well in their new life together
Glad Arnab left the note to tell his family both him n Khushi were ok
Then the fact they did reunite n even got to see their grandchild was so moving
Gonna miss this story
Thanks for pm n plz keep em comin my way

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Jenny, I don't know if you are still reading responses from your readers to your stories, but I wanted to let you know that I just finished reading Bride... and wanted to say it was absolutely the most amazing story I have read. You have written a historical romance in a most realistic manner.

The journey of love that Arnab and Kushi went through was heart wrenching and I just couldn't stop crying, in the beginning for Kushi but later on for Arnab. I think this is the first time that I have actually shed tears of anguish for Arnab in all my time as a reader of any stories concerning Kushi and Arnav!

You are one amazing writer! Thank-you, Jenny.

Hope all is going well with you.

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