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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: --Orchids--



got ur msg dear..
choo chwt of u to leave a cmmnt for me too.. ^_^
abhi enjoy wth ur brthr.. thn compi karna aayuu k sath.. i'm dying to see it.. lol..😆
t.c jenny.. <3

di I'll surely beat aayuu di don't worry
love u lots and u to take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
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see.. bhai.. i'm such an intelligent copy-cat..🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Jennifersg

what is this curious



baby.. it's nothing but UPDATE written in reverse or mirror image of UPDATE..😉😃😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

i don't know pri :( thats place is not the same i used to love...

i knw bhai that place is nt d same.. Bt fr ur silent readers u shud post there.. Bahut sare readers IF pe nhi hai na..that's why
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Do inform me when you update the new thread..
I mean story where you left at blog
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Originally posted by: --Orchids--



baby.. it's nothing but UPDATE written in reverse or mirror image of UPDATE..😉😃😆



Oh like that

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Part 7

Ar:tum???
Person:haan,main sapna..bhul gaye kya tumhare sath sanjevani mein intern thi..
Ar:oye..how can i forgot you?..lekin yakin nahi ho raha hain ke 15 saal bad tumhe dekh raha hun..to batao kaise ho..amit kaisa hain?

Sapna:haan..mujhe bhi ..aur sab kuch thik hain..waise amit ki transfer u.s.a main hone ki vajah se maine tumlogoke sath apna link kho dia..sry!!
Armaan haste hue.'thik hain jao maf kia'
Sa:thnx..waise tum yaha kaise ..racing ki bhut abhi bhi sawar hain..
Ar:nahi yar..yahato maine apne beti ki liye gift lene aya tha...
Sa:teri beti ..omg..mai to bhul hi gayi ..baki ki gang members kaise hain..aur teri wife i mean ridhima kaisi hain.?
hearing ridhima's name armaan's face lost colour but he recovered in the next moment..
Ar:actually sapna..rahul aur atul ke sibah mere kisike sath koi contact nahi hain..main last 13 year se England main hun..aur ridhima meri wife nahi hain..woh ab kisi aur ke sath hain..and yar plz uski bat mat kar..
Sa:oh my god..yeh sab kaise hua?maine to socha tha ke tujhe aur ridhima ko koi alag nahi kar sakta..phir yeh sab..
Ar:maine jis ridhima se pyar kia tha woh yeh ridhima nahi hain...aur woh apne zindagi main khush hain toh mai kaun hota hun uske life main enterfare karne wala..rehne de yeh sab..
Sa:toh tera wife kaun hain?
Ar:I AM NOT MARRIED
sa:toh phir tera beti???
Ar:woh mera hi khun hain..aur plz uske ma kaun hain yeh mat phuch na..mujhe us aurat ke nam se hi nafrat ho chuka hain...
Sa:mai samaj gaya..RIDHIMA
Ar:haan..chor na yeh sab bate?aur tum log yaha kab aye? aur kitne din ke lie? aur tu is car shop main kya kar raha hain?
Sa:relax..dhire sawal kar ..hum log yaha kal aye hain..amit ek hafte ke leave mein hain..aur is car shop main ek car rent karne ayi thi..manchester bhi toh ghumna hain..
Ar:oh...yeh batao aj sham ka kya plan hain?
Sa:kuch nahi..
Ar:toh phir aj sham ko mere ghar pe tumlogo ko dinner karna hoga..aur aj toh special occation hain..today is the birthday of my princess..toh tumlogo ko ana toh padega..waha rahul aur atul se bhi mulakat ho jayega..yeh lo mera address..
sapna after seeing the address..
Sa:oh my god tu england ka most famous dr. malik hain???
Ar:famous hun ya nahi yeh to nahi pata..par yaha par sab mujhe dr. malik ke nam se hi jante hain..tere sath bat karte karte main to bhul hi gaya?
Sa:kya bhul gaya?
Ar:mujhe princess ke liye car lena hain..chalta hun..see you in the evening..bye!
Sapna surprised'tere beti car chalata hai?
Ar:nahi re..but she loves car a lot..akhir beti kiska hain..ARMAAN MALIK ki beti thora diffrent hona chahiye..
and he winks at sapna











Part 8


In MALIK MANSION,
All the servants are busy..not busy too busy because they are arranging the birthday party of the princess of this mansion and Armaan is controlling all the arangement...

Armaan to a servant'are vai yeh vase idhar kya kar raha hain,ise side pe rakho yeh vase to jarur kisike sar todega'
suddenly armaan remembered something and he quickly dialled rahul's number...
Ar:oye rahul jaldi tere khatara car lekar princess ke school ja..aur waha se use pick up kar lena nahi to woh jarur ghar aa jayega..use lekar kahi se ghum aa aur 6 baje ke bad ghar le ana..
Rahul in phone:lekin mein use le kar jaunga kaha..woh teri beti hain the great ARMAAN MALIK ka beti..woh kuch der mein samaj jayega..
Ar:woh ab teri problem hai..
Ra:oye kya meri problem..tujhe yeh bat kamse kam 2 ghante pehle bolna tha..koi plan bana leta..oye , idea!
Ar:kya idea?
Ra:use atul ke enviournment meeting par le jata hun..
Ar:kyaaa! pagal hain kya? woh tujhe aur atul dono ko kacha chaba jayegi..
Ra:haan woh bhi hain..acha ek kam karte hain main use movie dikhane le jata hun..kya kehta hain?
Ar:haan..yeh thik rahega par teri fav. woh sad movie nahi..koi action flim dekhlena..
Ra:ok.. rakhta hun..
Ar:thik hain..bye!
and he hang up the phone but to his ultmate surprise he find himself stairing at anamika..
Ar:ana beta tum itni jaldi..
Anm:haan..kyun papa kya hua apke surprise party ka plan jan liya is liye shocked koi bat nahi..
Ar:tu jan gaya..this is not fair..this is so not fair..
Anm:haan haan papa..apko agar surprise party dena hi tha to atul chachu ko mujhe lane ke liye bhejna nahi chahiyen tha?
Ar:kya atul tujhe lane gaya? yeh atul bhi na ise mene kaha tha..aj iski khyar nahi?..kaha hain yeh idiot?
Ar:are papa chodiyen na..papa pata hain uncle ne mujhe kya gift dia?
Ar:kya? koi naya enviournment ke upar kitab..
Anm:are nahi,..agar koi enviournment wala kitab deta to unka mein khabar kar deta ..unhone aur rahul chachu ne milkar mujhe ek ferari gift kia..
Ar:kya un dono ne bhi!
Anm:undono ne bhi matlab..oh my god..papa apne bhi ferari laya..yipeee mera ab 2 ferari hain...yipeee thank u papa...
and she hugs Armaan..armaan smiles seeing anamika's childness...anamika's childness always bring back memory of someone ...a girl that change his life..
Ar:ek bat batao princess tum itne sare cars ka karoge kya..mere khyal se dunia ke well known har brand ka car hain tumhare pas..tujhe cars itne pasand hai

Anm:haan papa..i just luv cars..soch raha hun ke bade hokar ek F1 team kharid lu..ap kya kehte hain?
Ar:kyaaa! mujhe lutna hain kya..ek F1 team beta manta hun ke main rich hum par itna ..
Anm:ha ha very funny!!...chodo yeh sab papa mujhe car ki chabi do..
Ar:kaunsa? audi,jaguar ya kuch aur?
Anm:are nahi papa apne jo naya ferari laya woh..mujhe uski sawari karna hain..aur haan charlie ko bhi bhejo..
Armaan took the kyes from his pocket and give it to his princess and said 'le meri nanima tera hi raj hain'
Anamika pouted 'papa! mujhe nanima mat bulao..main old nahi hun'
and she went from there but before she goes she remembered something and turned towards ARMAAN ..
Anm:waise papa..ap ridhima gupta nam ke kisiko jante hain kya?
armaan shocked beyond limits and nervously said.'k-y-a!!'









Part 9

Armaan was shocked to hear that name from Anamika .he nervously asked her 'kya?tumhe yeh nam kaise pata chala?'
Anm:kaise pata chala! matlab ap jante hai Ridhima gupta ko .kaun hai yeh papa?
Ar:batata hun princess pehle tum mujhe yeh batao tumhe yeh nam kisne kaha..
Anm:koi nahi pappa..actually yesterday i went to storeroom to find something..waha par jakar na maine ek page pada hua paya aur us page par likha tha'just 4 you,only you Ridhima basket gupta' kaun hai yeh Ridhima basket Gupta ,papa?

Ar:woh..na
But before Armaan speaks anything a voice from back stops him.'main batati hun'
Armaan and Anamika both turn toward the voice..first they were surprise to see the persoon but soon their surprised face turns into a smiling one...
Anm:'dadi..ap!(yes,this is Armaan's mom ananya malik)
saying this anamika went towards ananya and hug her..ananya also hug her back ..Armaan goes to her and took her blessing..he said to her mom 'mom,ap achanak yaha! ap aur dad to U.S.A mein the aur yaha kaise ana hua?aur ane se pehle call kyun nahi kia mein ek car bhej deta..
Ananya:teri bak bak karne ki adat abhi tak gaya nahi Armaan..aur mujhe to ana hi tha..akhir kar mere one and only beautiful granddaughter ka birthday hai..
saying that she once again hugged Anamika .Anamika had a million dollar smile on her face..Ananya continued 'aur rahul gaya tha mujhe airport se recive karne ke liye..mujhe tum dono ko surprise jo dena tha'
Anm:woh bat to thik hai dadi..par billi dadu nahi aye
Ananya:woh bhi ana chahte the beta..par unka kuch business metting tha..isliye nahi aa paye..
Ar:acha mom rahul aur champ kaha hai?woh dono bhi to aye hai na...
Atul replied from the doorstep'apne bulaya aur hum chale aye'
Ar:oye nautanki chup kar..tujhe toh main chodunga nahi..tujhe princess ko school se ghar le ane ko kisne kaha tha..sara surprise waste kar dia..idiot!
At:oye..yeh bat to maine socha hi nahi..sry mere bhai!
Ar:chal thik hai maf kia..aur tujhe aur is dukhi atma(rahul) ko ferari kharid ne ke liye kisne kaha tha..maine bhi ek kharid liya hai princess ke liye..
At and Ra:kkyyaa??
and the three best friend started to laugh..
ananya looked at armaan affectionatly ..she thought ridhima ki us harkat ke bad armaan kahi phir se street fight aur racing ke dunia mein na laut jaye lekin thanks to armaan's best friend atul and rahul and her lovely grand daughter ke woh armaan ko change nahi hone dia..her chain of

thought broked by anamika's question.'dadi apne mujhe abhi tak ye nahi bataya ke yeh ridhima gupta kaun hai?
atul and rahul looked at each other in shock..then they turn their head to armaan who is standing beside them with a unreadable expression on his face,
anamika knew she had to answer this question one day..but she didn't know that the day will come so soon..ananya khud ye nahi chahti ke anamika ko ridhima ke bare mein pata chale..kyunki anamika will be very hurt after knowing what her own mom wanted to do with her self..but now the moment is here ..she finally gained courage to say that.'ANAMIKA beta RIDHIMA GUPTA IS YOUR MOM'
Anamika:what??








Part 10


In India,
sanjeevani hospital

everybody is busy in their daily hospital work..but today their amount of work crosses all the limit..so when they got a break...all of them run to the cafeteria..

Mu:aj to maine itna kam kia ke agar 2 saal kuch kam na karu to bhi chal jayega..
Ni:oye chup kar drama queen...waise aj ka din tha bada hi hectic..
An:sahi kaha...aisa hectic schedule woh award function khatam na hone tak rahega...matlab aur do din...
Mu & Ni:kya?? aur do din..
Ri:tum dono chillao mat bhul gaye kya ke abhi hospita mein hai tu..aur nikki aise chill mat nahi to tera pati woh khadus aur kanjoos modi dour te hue chale ayega..samjhi??
Ni:Oye ridzi meri pati ko kanjus mat bulao..oh tedha hai par mera hai..
Mu & An & Ri :ooohhh!!! itna pyar!
suddenly there's an anouncement in the speaker of the hospital..
Voice:'dr. Anjali , dr. Ridhima , dr. Muskaan and dr. Nikita plz kindly report to dr. kriti..
Mu:oye chal bulaoa aa gaya..
An:itni jaldi...maine to abhi tak khana hi nahi khaya..
Mu:oye chal nahi to hitlar ke dant. khani padegi..aur yakin man use khane mein maja nahi ayega..
An:haan main janta hun..ab chalegi bhi ya bak bak continue karegi..

and they left cafeteria and went to dr. kriti...they were expecting a furious dr. kriti but they were shocked to find a very happy dr. kriti..
kr:doctors!!
All:yes mam!!
kr:ap sab to jante hai ke is sak humara hospital world ke most respectful medical award organize kar ne ja raha hai..so isiliye ap logo kuch aur kam diye ja rahe hain...
Muskaan slowly speak to herself 'Aur kam'
but her badluck dr. kriti heard that
Kr:apne kuch kaha dr. muskaan??
Mu:no...no mam!!
Kr:gud..now about your extra work...dr. Muskaan ap sare V.I.P ko wellcome karenge with dr. Shubhankar...dr. Anjali ap sare decorations sambhalenge...dr. Nikki ap humare india aur overseas guests ko call karenge aur unhe ask karna ke woh log kitne der mein india pouchenge...and dr. ridhima ap isbar jisne award jita hai unhe phone karenge...Am I clear??
All:Yes mam!!
Kr:now get back to your work..
everyone hurried to their work...
Mu:dr. kriti saradin bas kam kam kyun karte rahte hain...i am sure ke pichle janam mein woh bohut kamchor thi...
Ri:Really??
and all of them brust out of laughing ..
An:muskaan u are too much..
Ni:i agree with you anji..she is too much..
Mu:oye ab mere burai choro..chal nahi.
hitler bohot kam dia hai..waise mera kam tum teno mein se thoda easy hai...but mujhe thoda bak bak karna hoga...koi bat nahi..yeh to mera favourite kam hai..waise nikki aur ridzi tum dono to gaye..tumhe to un good for nothing foreigners se bak bak karna hoga..mai to bach gayi...
Ni:koi bat nahi bachu ek din tera number bhi ayega...chal ridzi kam mein lag jate hai..
Ri:haan...chal ..muski tujhe hum bad mein dekhlenge..
and all of them went to their respective duties..

Nikki and Ridhima...

both girls made a list of foreign guests..and starts to call them..

After 1 hour..around 8 pm..

Ni:haan...almost done..sirf ek call karna baki hai??
Ri:aur ek mai to bak bak karte karte thak gaya...yeh call kaha karni hai??
Ni:ruk ek min. list dekh ke bolta hun.. haan..yeh raha..manchester,england mein...kisi dr. malik ko??
Ridhima exited after hearing that name'dr. Malik?? kahi Armaan to nahi...
Ni:are nahi billy uncle ka england mein koi property nahi tha...
Ri:ok..chal call karte hai aur kam khatam karte hai..
and ridhima dialled the number...

while in that particular moment,let's see what is happening in England..

Ananya:ANAMIKA BETA..RIDHIMA GUPTA IS YOUR MOTHER..
Anm:what??my mumma??
Ananya:haan...beta..tumhara mom ka nam hai Ridhima gupta...
Anm:Nooo...i don't have a mother...i don't need one...my pappa is both my mom and dad...i hate her...he left me and pappa...i hate her...
and she went to her room..crying...
after that there is a pin drop silence..no body dare to talk..suddenly Armaan break the silence...
Ar:main janta tha aisa hi hoga...mom ap aur atul plz princess ke pas jao...use samalo...
atul and ananya goes to anamika's room..
suddenly the phone rings..
Ra:ab kaun hai??
Ar:ruk mai dekhta hun..sayad hospital se hoga..
and armaan took the call..
Ar:hello?? who is this??
on the other side of the phone..
Ri:hello..is there dr. Malik??
Ar:yes..dr. Malik speaking..
Ri:hello dr. Malik this is dr. Ridhima gupta from sanjeevani...sir when are you coming to India??

and the next moment the phone fall from Armaan's hand...



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Part 11

And the next moment the phone fall from Armaan's hand...Rahul who was busy with his cellphone saw all this..so without saying anything he quickly rushed towards armaan and take the phone...
Ra:hello,who is this??
on the other side of the phone...
ridhima ko kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha..kyunki thodi der pehle hi usne apna nam bataya aur itni jaldi yeh admi bhul gaya...
Ri(in mind):yeh kaisa admi hai..itni jaldi bhul gaya...ghajni hai kya?? khair mujhe kya...mujhe to bas mera kam se matlab hai..

so she speaks the same thing again...
Ri:dr. Malik, I am dr. Ridhima gupta from sanjeevani ,india..sir,when are you coming to india??
like Armaan ..rahul is shocked and surprised ..he didn't expect any one to call from sanjeevani..aur ridhima ka call to kabhi bhi nahi..isiliye use bhi samaj mein nahi aa raha tha ke woh kya kahe..but some how he manage to say...
Ra:how ...how do you get this number??
on the other side...
ridhima once again confused...
Ri:sir,we have ur hospital's number..so when we call there..they give us this number...this is how i got this number..
Ra(in mind):so ridhima ko yeh number aise mila...matlab use abhitak armaan ke bare mein nahi pata...mujhe kuch karna hoga...
on the other side ridhima is getting impatient.. Ri:hello,dr. Malik are u there?? Ra:yes,dr. ridhima..we will fly for india tomorow...now please i have some important work...so if u don't mind.. Ri:yah..sure...
and rahul disconnected the phone ...next moment rahul looked at armaan..and found him stareing in the space with a pale face...rahul ki himmat nahi hua use kuch bhi kehne ko...both remain silent..tabhi atul aa jata hai..he is looking happy..

At:guys,mission complete..ana baby man gayi hai...maine aur ananya aunty ne milkar use mana lia hai...abhi woh ananya aunty ke sath hai..aunty use kahi shopping mein le ja rahe hai ..cool na..
lekin rahul aur armaan uska yeh news ka koi jawab nahi dia..they both remain silent...atul bohot worried ho gaya..
At:guys,kya hua??tum log itna chup kyun ho??rahul tera manchester united har gaya kya?? kya hua??
Ra:Atul...
At:kya??
Ra:kuch der pehle ridhima ka phone aya tha...
At:kyaaa?? u mean ridhima ..ridhima gupta..
Ra:haan...lekin tu chinta mat kar...use hamare bare mein kuch bhi nahi pata...woh sanjeevani ke taraf se phone kia tha...aur woh jan na chahti thi ke hum india kab aa rahe hain...
lekin rahul aur kuch bolta usse pehle armaan ne use rok lia
...
Ar:stop it, Rahul...mujhe us aurat ke bare mein kuch bhi nahi sun na...is ghar mein uske bare mein koi bhi bat nahi karega..waise bhi aj princess ka janamdin hai mai nahi chahta ke uska birthday is reason se kharab ho..so plz ..aur ek bat tum dono ka hospital mein kuch kam hai??
Ra and At:nahi..
Ar:nice...toh tum dono party ke sare arrangement karo..waise hospital mein ab duty pe kaun hai??
Ra:dr. gunjan and dr. richa...
Ar:fine...tum dono sare arrangement dekho..main thodi der mein ata hun..
Ra:lekin tu ja kaha raha hai...
Ar:mere kamre mein...
before rahul speaks again armaan uske kamre mein chala jata hai...

IN ARMAAN'S ROOM...

Armaan room mein enter hokar darwaza band kar deta hai...
woh apne room ke taraf dekhta hai..puree room mein anamika,rahul,atul aur uske picture hai...tabhi uske najar room ke corner mein ek locked door ke taraf jata hai...aur woh us door ko open karke us room mein dakhil hota hai...is room ke sare wall pe ridhima ke pic hai..
armaan goes to the biggest pic on the wall...and start talking with the pic...
Ar:13 saal..13 saal bad aj maine phir se tumhara awaz suna hun basket..but tumhe kya??...tum to mujhe kab ka bhul gaye ho..lekin main..main kyun tumhe nahi bhul pata...kyun mujhe aj bhi tumhare har ek bat yad hai...tumse juda hua har ek yad aj bhi mere dil mein kaid(prisoned)...main na tumhe 13 sal pehle bhul paya tha..jab tumne mujhse kaha tha tumhe bhul jane ko...kyunki..(starts crying)..kyunki tum tumhari beti ko apnana nahi chahte the...kyun?? akhir kyun??...main to usdin hi apna jan de deti...jis din tumne us sid se shadi ke liye han kia tha...lekin mera princess mujhe jeene ka himmat dia...atul ne mujhe sahara dia..mujhe tumhe bhul jana chahiye tha..lekin nahi bhul paya...kyunki main aj bhi tumse pyar kar ta hun...aj bhi...aur sayad karta rahunga..lekin main mere yeh feelings ko kabhi bahar nahi ane dunga...dunia ke liye aj main ek aur armaan hun...aur tumhare liye main sirf dr. Malik hun...jo is dunia ab zinda hai bas apne beti ke liye...so ridhima gupta..nahi nahi ab to tum sayad ridhima modi ho..tumhare hone ya na hone so mujhe koi farak nahi padta...main nahi darta ab india ane se...main aa raha hun...be ready..to meat the new armaan...





Part 12
In India,


Muskan and Ridhima are working in path lab for past 4 hours..suddenly ridhima spoke something..
Ri:Muski,tujhse ek bat pucho??
Mu:oye tujhe kabse puchne ki jarurat par gayi..dill khulke puch...
Ri:muski..nautanki bandh kar..i am serious...
Mu:oye,kya hua?? everything is ok na..

Ri:muski..tu kya abhi bhi rahul se..
Mu:dekh ridzi..tu us khote da puttar ka nam mere samne mat le...agar woh khankajoree ko maine phir kahi dekha to main use..to main use..khair chor...aur ab tu mujhe bata ke tu us gadhe ke bare mein kya bol rahi thi...kahi tujhe us se shadi to nahi karni hai na..
and muskan start laughing in her typical style...
Ri:muski ki bachi...main sirf Armaan ki hun samjhi..sirf mere Armaan ki...
Mu:huh...soon to be Mrs. Armaan Malik apne dream se bahar aao..aur kam karo..nahi to hitler hume kacha chaba jayegi...chal..
Ri:haan..chal..
soon they both start their work again..suddenly there is an anouncment in the speaker...
speaker:dr. ridhima gupta plz kindly report to dr. kriti mehra..
Muskaan and Ridhima heard the announcment..
Mu:oye ridzi,hitler tujhe kyun bula rahi hai?
Ri:mujhe nahi pata..ho sakta hai kuch kam ho..tu tera work continue kar main dekh ke ati hun..
and ridhima went to dr. kriti's cabin..

In dr. kriti's cabin,
Ridhima knocked the door..
dr. kriti:come in..
Ri:mam,apne mujhe bulaya..
dr. kriti:oh..dr. Ridhima...yes..mai ne apko bulaya hai..plz. sit down..
ridhima sat down after the order of dr. kriti...
dr. kriti:dr. ridhima apke liye ek kam hai..
Ri:kaunsa kam, mam??
Dr. kriti:ap to jante hi hai ke next week yaha kitne bare award show hone wala hai..aur uske liye bohot sare foreign guests ayenge..mai janta hu apne aur dr. nikita ne milkar sare guests ke sath bat kar chuke hai..par main cahta hu ke ap isbar award winner ko ek baar phir call kare..
Ri:ek baar..phir par kyun mam??
dr. kriti:kyun sanjeevani ka duty hai ke pata kare woh log india mein kaha rahenge ..unhone agar rehne ka intejam kar liya hai to thik hai..agar nahi to hume unke liye koi rehne ka intejam karna hoga..
Ri:thik hai mam..main call karti hun...ok mam..main chalta hun..
and ridhima goes to call the award winner ..i mean dr. malik..dr. Armaan Malik...

NOW LET'S GO BACK TO ENGLAND AND SEE WHAT'S HAPPENING THERE...

In manchester,England

Armaan,Rahul and Atul are busy in the preparation of the party..
Rahul:yaar armaan ..hume kal india ke liye nikal na hai tujhe yad hai na...
Ar:haan buddy mujhe yad hai aur tuh





Part 13
Ar:buddy,tuh tension mat le mujhe ab kisi ka dar nahi..mujhe ab kisi ke mere sath hone ya na hone se koi farak nahi parta..tum sab log mere sath ho yehi mere liye kafi hai..mujhe aur kisi ki jarurat nahi hai..i don't need anyone..aur daddu tu sayad bhul raha hai ke humlog waha sirf do din ke liye ja raha hai...isiliye tension mat le take a chill pill..aur chal ab jaldi se party ka preparation khatam karte hai nahi to mere nanima hume chodegi nahi...
Ra(In Mind):tu jo bhi bol armaan...main janta hu ke tuh ajbhi ridzi utna hi pyar karta hai jitna 13 saal pehle karta tha...mujhe dar hai ke tu waha ridzi ko dekh kar phir se kamjor na ho jaye...i hope ke tab mai tujhe samal sakunga...

Rahul chain of thought broke by our dear Atul's another shocking question..
At:Armaan mera bhai..
Ar:kya hua champ??
At:tune hume bataya nahi ke tera nani aa raha hai..hum unhe lane airport chale jate..isbahane unka ashirwaad bhi le lenge...
At first Armaan did not understand what atul is saying..but when his word click his mind then he manage to say..
Ar:pata hai rahul..aj na mai anjali ko bohot miss kar raha hun...
Aur aplogoko to pata hai humara dr. Atul ke liye Anjali ka nam bhi kya maine rakhta hai isiliye atul ke muh se yeh reply aya..
At:oye armaan tuh kyu anjali ko miss karne laga?? huh..answer me..
Ar:abhe dhakkhan mai anjali ko kyu miss karunga mai to bas uska tere silly question sunkar yeh 'shut up,atul' bolna miss kar raha hun...
At:oye maine silly question kab kaha...
Ar:kab kaha?? oye champ mere nani kaha se ayega...mai anamika ki bat kar raha tha..samjha ..
At:aree hah..maine to aise socha hi nahi..mai bhi kitna idiot huh na..
Ro:lo..ise ab pata chala..
Ar:oye chalo..bad mein majak -masti kar lena ..ab chal party ke tayyari khatam karte hai...aur hah tum dono ke liye ek surprise guest hai...
Ra:kaun?? tune man. utd. ka kisi player ko bulaya hai...
Ar:oye rahul..ab tu mat shuru ho jana...maine humare ek dost ko bulaya hai..
At:dost??
Ar:haan..dost
Ra:kaun hai??
Ar:aree surprise hai..aise kaise bata dun...wait karo bacho..sabr ka faal meetha ho ta hai...
At:oye mujhe meetha khana acha nahi lagta mujhe bata de..bata na mere bhai..plzzz...
Ra:haan...armaan bata bhi de...
Ar:NO
At:plz
Ar:NO
Ra:oye bolta hai ke mai angel ko bulaun...jab the great ANAMIKA MALIK ayega tab dekhta hun tu kaise humse bat chupata hai..
Suddenly a voice from the main door stops rahul ...
Voice:Armaan ab bata bhi do ke inlogoka surprise...
Hearing a female voice from back..both atul and rahul turn towards the source of the voice..and they were shocked to see that person...
At & Ra:tum??
Person:haan...main sapna..remember tum logoke sath intern thi..
At :oh my god sapna tum...tum kitne badal gaye ho...15 saal bad tumhe dekh raha hun...
Ra:mujhe toh yakin hi nahi ho raha hai ke sapna yaha hai...aur sapna ji apka patidev kaha hai...aur most imp. bat armaan ke bache tu sapna se kab mila ve...
and armaan rahul aur atul ko bata ta hai ke woh kaise sapna se mila..
At:woh toh yeh bat hai...
Ar:haah..champ
suddenly a voice disturbs them...
voice:maine kya kuch miss kar dia?
and four of them looked at the person who say this..
Rahul , atul and Armaan are looking very happy to see that person...
Atut ,Armaan and Rahul goes to that person and hugs hin...
At:kaise ho tum amit??
Am:i am fine..as usall tum log kaise ho??
At ,Ra and Ar:we are good...
Ra:aur saale tu mujhe bata ke tum log hum logo se itne saal tak dur kyun the...
Am:sorry..yar...kam mein busy ho gaya tha isiliye chahkar bhi tum logo se mil nahi paya...are mere bat chor yeh bata birthday girl kaha hai??
Ar:woh princess ki bat kar raha hai..
Sa:to aj aur kisiki birth day hai kya??
At:hah tujhe pata hai sapna world main ek din mein kitne insano ka birthday hai..toh surely aj toh bohot insaano ka birthday hoga..
Everybody together 'Shut up,atul'
Am:tera bat sahi hai atul bul armaan ka princess toh ek hi hai na...
Voice:kisi ne hume yad kia..
Ar:lo saytan ka nam lia aur saitan hazir ho gaya...
Anm:pappa...aj mera birthday hai..aur aj bhi ap mujhe chida rahe..aisa nahi chalega..
then she saw sapna and amit...
Ar:princess inse milo yeh hai mere one of the best frnds sapna aur amit...aur amit sapna yeh hai mere jaan..mera princess..Anamika Malik...
Sa:oh my god..armaan tera beti toh bohot khubsurat hai..yeh toh bilkul ek pari hai..
Anm:thanks..
Ar:princess apke dadi kaha hai??
Anm:pappa dadi bahar garden mein hai...party ka preparation dekh rahi hai...
Ar:chalo guys gardem mein chalte hai...amit aur sapna ke mom se mulakat bhi ho jayega...chalo...
Anm:pappa ap log waha jao..mai change karke ata hun..
Ar:haah princess jao tum change kar lo...aur jaldi karna...guest ane hi wale hai...
And Anamika went to her room...
In downstairs,

Sa:Armaan,agar bura na mano toh tumse ek bat kahu...
Ar:oye tu meri frnd hai mai kyun bura manunga..bol tu..
Sa:tera beti ka chehra bilkul ridzi par gaya hai..sirf uski
eyes tere jaise blue colour ki hai..
Ar:mai janta hun sapna..but ab sayad bohot der hogaya hai...ab kuch nahi ho sakta hai...khair chor in sab bato ko...chal garden mein jakar mom ki madad karte hai..
And all of them moved to the garden to help ananya..

Now let's go back to india and see what is happening there...
Ridhima is walking worriedly in her cabin and she is talking to herself...
Ri:kya karun..kya karun kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hain..waha par dr. malik jis hospital mein kam karta hai waha phone kia tha toh unhone kaha ke aj dr. Malik koi call attend nahi karenge..pata nahi kyun??..but mujhe to Apna kam karna hai..agar dr. kriti ko nahi bataya ke dr. Malik kaha rehne wala hai..to woh to mujhe mar hi dalenge..ek kam karti hun call kar hi leti hun..and ridhima start to dial dr. Malik's number...

aur waha manchester mein malik mansion mein koi nahi hai sab garden mein hai..isiliye kisi tak bhi phone ki ring ke awaz nahi pouchta..isiliye humare princess anamika malik distrub hoke phone uthati hai...lekin woh kuch bolne se pehle ridzi bolti hai..
Ri:hello..can i speak to dr. Malik please?
Anm:sorry...he is not in the house now..i am his daughter Anamika Malik...if u want u can leave a msg to me..
but dusre side se koi reply nahi aya kaise ata..anamika nam sunkar hi ridhima ki ek purani yad taza ho gayi...

*FLASHBACK*
Ridhima was walking aimlessly on the corridor of sanjeevani..suddenly one hand grab her shoulder and took her to the firescape..she was going to shout but stopped when she saw the person..
Ri:Armaan..pagal ho gaye ho kya??
but there is no reply bcuz Armaan was busy with his fav. work..ridhima ko dekhna...
Ri:Armaan...
Ar:bolo basket...
Ri:yeh kaisa pagal pan hai..tumne mujhe yaha kyun lekar aye ho..
Ar:maine..woh han vul hi gaya tha..sab tumhari galti hai..
Ridhima irritated'meri kaise'
Ar:tumhara nahi kaise jab bhi tumhe kuch bolne ja ta hun tumhara yeh angelic beautiful cute sa chehra dekhke sab bhul jata hun..u are such a distraction basket..but i love u..
Ridhima blushed when she heard his answer..but somehow she managed to say..
Ri:and i love u too..
Ar:oyee hoyee...acha basket yeh to batao humara first baby girl ka nam kya hoga??
Ridhima once again turned red..but she said..'tumhe kaise pata ke ladki hogi'
Ar:u know i am a genius..isiliye mujhe sab pata hai..ab bolo to..phir mujhe humare dusre bacho ka bhi nam decide karni hogi..
Ri:kya?? kitne bache honge humare...
Ar:3
Ri:kya?? tum
mujhe itna pain doge..
Ar:nahi basket sirf 2 bar..1st hoga humara baby gril...then twins ek ladka aur ek ladki...kya kehte ho..
Ri:tum pagal ho..
Ar:haan mai to pagal hu hi..tumhare pyar mein..ab mujhe batao bhi..
Ri:ok..batati hun..humare first beti ka nam hoga anamika..
And then she hugs him in shyness..
-FLASHBACK END-

Anm:hello..anyone there??
Ri:sorry..but can i know where will ur father stay in india..i am calling from india..
Anm:oh u can speak in hindi then..bcuz i know hindi too...waise ap jis phone se bat karrahi hai waha par maine address already sms kar dia..
Ri:thank u...ap se bat karke bohot acha laga...
Anm:mujhe bhi..waise main rakhti hun..kyunki aj meri birthday party hai..aur bahar sare guests sayad aa chuke honge..
Ri:oh..aj tumhara birthday hai..aj meri bhi beti ka birthday hai..happy birthday beta..
Anm:thank u..ab main rakhti hun..bye
Ri:bye, beta..
and they hang up the phone..then ridhima look at the phone to see the address..and she is shocked to see the address ..an address where ridhima almost went for thousand time...the address of Armaan's home..Malik Mansion...




Part 14

Malik Mansion
Manchester
England

Armaan,rahul,atul sapna and amit are sitting with Ananya...and chatting about the preparation of the party of Anamika Malik..which will take place in 3 hours..so they are arrangeing the final arrangement of the much awaited party of the town...
Ananya:ammy beta...tu ne music ka kya kia hai??
Ar:mom..surprise hai...lekin ap sure ho sakte hai ke princess ko pasand ayega..waise rahul..tu ne khane ka kya intejam kia hai??

Ra:bohot..but unmein se almost 90 percant eco-friendly food hai??
Ar:what?? eco friendly food kya hota hai...
Suddenly a voice from behind answers Armaan's question...
Voice:aree papa..yeh baat ap rahul chachu ko kyun puch rahe ho atul chachu ko puchlo...hai na buddy...
Atul:ha ha..ana thik keh raha hai...
Sapna:atul tu aur tera eco friendly ko rehne de..
Amit:waise sapna to kabhi kuch dhang ka nehi bakti but this time i am agree with my wife..
Sapna glared at amit..all of them laugh at this..
Ananya:bacho ab rehne do..
And then she looked at anamika who is looking like an angel...
Ananya:waise mere granddaughter aj bohot pyari lag rahi hai...haina armaan...
Armaan know that his daughter is more beautiful than any other girl..but he thought to tease her..
Ar:kaha mom...mujhe to nahi dikh raha...
Anm:papa..mai gussa ho jaungi..
Sa:oye Armaan..tu kyun ise chida raha hai..kitna khubsurat lag raha hai hamara anamika..hai na amit..
Am:haan..sapna..
Anm:thank u sapna mossi..dekha papa sapna mossi mere side pe hai..
Ar:are mai bhi to hu na mere princess ke side main main to bas tumhe chida raha tha..
Anm:i knw papa..waise papa ap ke liye ek call aya tha??
Armaan's mood went serious when he heard about call..
Ar:call??..kaha se..??
Anm:from india ..papa ap jis hospital mai award lene ja rahe ho us hospital se call aya tha...
Armaan,atul and rahul went numb after hearing this..
Armaan with a trembling voice'kisne call kia tha?'
Anm:wo toh nahi pata..par jo aunty ne phone kia tha unke baat karne ka style bilkul mere tara hai...how strange??
Armaan is now angry very angry and for the first he shouted at anamika'ANAMIKA,,KHABARDAR AGAR TUMNE PHIR INDIA SE KOI CALL RECEIVE KIA TO..THIS IS YOUR FIRST AND LAST WARNING..DO U UNDERSTAND??

atul , rahul , and ananya are shocked beyond limits because they are first time seeing armaan's anger towards anamika..but the most shocked person is anamika because her papa never shouted at her..so she got scared and left the place

crying... At:armaan yeh tune kya kar dia?? jis ladki ko tune gusse se dekha bhi nahi aj tu uspar chillaya..armaan aj uska birthday hai..aur aj hi ke din..ab ja tu hi use mana ke le aa...agar tu nahi gaya to mai tujhse kabhi bat nahi karunga.. Ra:mai bhi Ananya:mai bhi Sa and Am:aur hum bhi... Ar:easy Guys..mera beti hai mujhe hi mana na padega..tum log bas mere liye pray karo aj mera khair nahi...bhagwan zi aj is Armaan Malik ko bacha lena... All:Amen!!! Armaan goes to her daughter dearest room..he open the door and find her sitting in the rocking chair..crying silently..armaan goes towards her and bring a kitkat from her pocket and slowly brings it towards anamika..anamika saw this but she moves her head to another direction... Ar:sorry princess.. Anamika stay silent armaan hold her ear and come infront of anamika and he cutely said 'sorry my princess..kya anamika apne papa ko maf nahi karegi??..plz beta forgive me.. ap kaho to main murga ban jau..yah phir kuch aur.. anamika smiles at armaan's antics and said that.'It's ok papa..but i am hurt today..u never shouted at me..but then why today?? Ar:i am sorry beta..but papa dar gaye thein.. Anm:kyun pappa..kya hai india mein.. Ar:beta..india mein kuch aise log hain jo apke papa ko 13 saal pehle bohot hur kia tha..mujhe daar hai ke woh log apko bhi dard dein isiliyen beta main nahi chahta ke tum waha ke kisi bhi admi se bat karo.. Anm:ok papa..mai arinda se apke bat manungi.. and she hug armaan ..at first he is surprise at her behaviour but he hug her back.. Anm: i love u papa Ar:love u too beta.. Ar(in mind):ridhima aj sayad tumne pehli bar apne beti se bat ki..but mai nahi chahti ke use tumhare bare mein pata chale..woh mujhse bhi zyada hurt hoga agar use pata chala ke uske apne mom ne use orphanage mein de na cha..aur woh bhi ek behuda admi ki jhut ke vajah se...i hate u for this ridhima..i hate u...


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yeayy... i'm 1st...

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Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago
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aayuu.. thnkx for posting d parts swthrt...😊

nd bhai... stock mein likh ke rakho new wala part..
i want it as soon as old parts get posted..😃



Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago

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