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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
OMG, I don't know if saying I LOVE This Story would be enough to describe how much I love it or not. but really, kya likha hai. simply beautiful.
Ye story bohat hi pyari hai. I really love Armaan for taking care of Ana for 13 years. oer mujhe samajh nahi aya ke aisa kya hua k Ridz ne Ana ko orphanage mein chorna chaha?
Please is ko super fast update karna.
lots of love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bro update new parts soon
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Hey yaar,
plz update kar do na, pleazeee.. 😔
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Part 15

Ridhima is totally confused(waise yeh pehle si hi confused hai)..the reason of her confusion is the mobile screen infront of her..and the screen showing a address..woh address jo ridhima kisi bhi waqt pehchan sakti hai..but use yad hai ke Armaan ke yeh mumbai wala ghar mein koi nahi rehta..phir yeh dr. malik kaise?? kahi yeh armaan ka koi relative toh nahi..
Ri(in mind):yeh sab kya ho raha hai?? mujhe toh kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hai?? yeh address..kaise?? mujhe pata lagana hoga...lekin kiske pas jaungi..
Suddenly nikki entered the room while mumbling something under her breath.

Ni:use main chodungi nahi..mere sath majak..modi ke bache..

Ri(in mind):mil gayi
Ri:oye,kya hua?? kise gali de rahi hai??
Ni:puch mat,yar..mere kanjush pati ko..
Ri:kyun?? ab kya kia hai usne..
Ni:aree mai use aj mujhe shopping le jane ke liye bola tha..but kanjush shopping ka nam sunte hi bhag gaya..IDIOT..MORON...main to usse aj bat hi nahi karungi..
Ri:kyaa??
and the next moment she start laughing...
Ni:oye tu has kyun rahi hai..
Ridhima stop her laughing..
Ri:tum dono na too much ho..
Ni:pata hai,lekin yeh bata tu itna pareshan kyun dekh rahi hai?? kya hua??
suddenly ridhima remembered her task..
Ri:nikki..mujhe tera help cahiye??
Ni:kyun?? kya hua??
so ridhima told her everything from her talking to dr. malik's daughter...
Ni:so yeh bat hai?? but mujhe jahatak yad hai..armaan ka aur koi relative doctor nahi hai..infact tujhe pata hai woh idiot toh rockstar banna chahta tha...but phir use is medical proffession se pyar ho gaya..aur humara rockstar armaan ban gaya dr. Armaan..
Ri:pata hai..yar...mera Armaan to hai hi best..mera dil ka doctor
Ni:oye hoyee..mam apne dream se bahar niklo aur chalo ab is dr. Malik ka khabar lete hai..
Ri:han chal..lekin kaise tu agar soch rahi hai ke dr. kriti or dr. shubhankar ke pas jake information nikal legi..toh mam for kind information unke muh se kuch niklega nahi..
Ni:are hitler ki kaun bat kar raha hai..mai toh mere idiot bete ki bat kar raha hun..waise bhi sara din computer ke samne pada rehata hai..kab kam ayega..
Ri:oye tu use idiot kyun bulata hai kitna cute hai..lekin use manane ke liye hume anji di ko lejana hoga...
Ni:han..kyunki anji hi us se bohot ache kam karoa sakta hai..chal
and they went to search for anjali ..

In England,

the birthday party of Anamika went well..now all the guest left except Sapna and Amit..kyunki armaan ne unhe convince kar liya hai ke jabtak woh
log yaha England main hai tabtak woh dono unke sath rukenge...pehle to amit aur sapna man nahi rahe the but phir jab anamika ne unhe request ki tab woh log man gaye..
At:dekh armaan,hum logo ki koi kadar hi nahi hai hum log itna in dono ko request kia nahi mane..but jab ana ne request kia man gaye..
and he starts to sing
'dost , dost na raha
pyar , pyar na
raha'
sa:shut up,atul!!
Ra:oye ise shut up..kyun bol rahe ho..thik hi to kaha..hai na Armaan
Ar:han buddy..this is so not fair..
Anamika glared at her father and said 'papa,ap mujhe chida kyun rahe ho?'
Ar:sry princess!!
At and Ra:sry ana!!
Ananya:chalo chalo bacho ab sab apne kamre mein..and armaan aur rahul tum dono ka kal subah flight hai...
Anm:han papa..go to bed
Armaan to ananya and anamika'Ok, mere ma and nani ma'

next morning,
In Airport

ananya , anamika ,atul and sapna ..armaan aur rahul ko see of karne ke liye aye hain..and anamika as usual armaan ko advise aur order de raha hai ...
for example...
1.waha plane land karte hi use call karna hoga.
2.har 2 ghante mein anamika yaha se call karegi so armaan use call karne se mana nahi karega..
3.waha jake apna khyal rakhega
4.khana time pe khayega..
5.award lete waqt uske chehre par dimple wala smile hona cahiye
and the list goes on and on...
Ar:ok madam apke har hukum pura hoga..
Ra:mam mere liye kuch hai..
Anm:han apke liye bhi hai..apbhi apna khyal rakhna..jyada football match mat dekhna..aur mere chachi ko leke ana...
Ra:what??
all of them start laughing when they saw rahul's shocked face..
Ar:acha princess apto mujhe order de diye ab ap suniye..apbhi apna khyal rakhenge..no masti..frnds ko lekar no outgoing..koi car race nahi..no diet control..aur padai pe dhyan dena..exam samne hai aur rahul chachu aur dadi ko pareshan mat karna..ok
Anm:yes,boss!!
after bidding bye to sapna , atul and ananya ..armaan enter the airport to go to her motherland after 13 years but kya woh janta hai ke india main koi uska intejar kar raha hai..besabri se..






Part 16

sanjeevani,mumbai
India..



Anjali gupta is sitting in her cabin..and may be missing someone who was close to her heart..who pampered her..who always care for her..cahe woh use jitna bhi shut up bole woh us khas insaan jab uske pas ati thi tab ek alag si sukoon mehsoos karti thi..but ek pal mein usne us khas insaan ko apne se dur kar dia...uski galti yeh thi ke woh apne dost ki sath khada tha...
she took out a photo from her drawer ..photo oe a cute man...
An:(while looking at the photo) love u ATUL..and miss u...

But her chain of thoughts broke by her little sisters voice.,

Ri:di..di..

Anjali quickly kept the photo in the drawer...

An:kya hai ridzi...yeh hospita hai..
Ri:pata hai..but ap mere sath chalo..
An:kaha?? aur teri duty nahi hai kya??
Ri:nahi maine leave le liya hai aur apka bhi..
An:kya?? but kyun aur hum log ja kaha raha hai..
Nikki while entering.'mere ghar'
An:oh tere ghar..chal bohot din soham se mila nahi hun..but hum kyun ja rahe hain??
Ri:dii..pehle chalo toh..bad mein batati hun...

In Abhi-nikki's house..
we see a boy is watching match in a big LCD tv..and cheering his team..

boy:come on rooney..come on rio..show them what is football ..

some moments later..

boy:gooaaalll!! that's the class robin..brilliant goal..

he is too much busy in the match that he did not notice that his mom is glaring at him from the door..

Ni:soham!!!

soham was shocked to hear her moms voice so he quickly looked back and found her mom glaring at her..

So:mo..mom..ap
Ni:han main..tu phir match dekh raha hai...maine tujhe mana kia tha na...aise hi tere akho mai chashme nahi lage he..
So:sorry mom..apko toh pata hai na...

suddenly anjali entered..

An:kya pata hai..

soham is very happy to see anajali because he is very close to her..

So:anjali..masi ap...
An:haan..mai
So:I am so happy..but ap ajanak kaise..

Ridzi also entered..
Ri:kyun hum apne soham se milne aa nahi sakte kya??
So:ridhima masi ap bhi...omg!! i am so happy...
Ri:we are happy too beta..but i am angry with u..doctor ne apko jyada t.v dekhne se mana kia tha na..
So:sry masi..
An:its ok soham ..

suddenly anjali remembered their task..

An:waise soham niki keh rahi thi ke tu computer main bada fast hai..
Soham with attitude.'koi shaq?'
An:no no..but mujhe ek hospital ke bare mein enquiry karni hai..woh hospital ke web page ke securitiy bohot tight hai..mujhse us page khul hi nahi raha..kya karun?? kiske pas jaun?? ..
So:bas itne si bat..
ap bas 2 min. ruko mai apna lappy leke ata hun...

after 2 min..

So:masi ab chalo apke webpage ka khabar lete hain..
An:chal dekhte hai..
So:masi hospital ka nam aur website bolo...

anjali tells..and soham starts his work..after 7-8 min..

So:lo masi..yeh raha us hospital ka website...well is hospital ka history bhi hai..yeh hospital bohot purana hai..but kuch sal pehle yeh bohot loss mein chal raha tha..tabhi ek indian ne ise kharid li..and after that now it is the most famous hospital in whole U.K.. doctors is hospital mein kam karne ke liye taras jate hai..but the authority sirf selected kuch doctors ko hi chance dete hai..is hospital ke head aur owner isbar best doctor ka award pane wala hai..aur is hospital ka owner hai dr. malik ...pehle sal is hospital mein sirf 3 doctors thein...woh 3 doctors aj bhi is hospital se jure hue hain..
Ri:soham un 3 doctors ke photo kya tum is website se dhund sakte ho??
So:han..kyun nahi??..give me 5 seconds...

(just imagin ke aplogo ke lappy mein kuch pic ane wala hai..aur loading dikha raha hai..half pic aa gaya tabhi..)

So:oh..no!!!
Ni:oye screen kyun black ho gayi..
Ri:bas half pic aya tha..
So:sorry masi..sorry mom ..main laptop charge karna bhul gaya tha..
Ni:gadhe..bilkul ullu hai tu..fully apne bap pe gaya hai...woh ek gadha hai aur yaha pe hai tu..
So:mom ..dad ko kuch mat bolo..
Ni:kyun na bolu..bada aya dad ka chamcha..hai na anji??

but there is no reply because anjali was too lost in her thoughts..what she just saw in that half picture made her shocked..let's read what she is thinking...

An(in mind):oh my god!! Armaan ...dr. malik armaan hai?? but how?? lekin soham ne jo info dia us se toh mera guess mujhe sahi lag raha hai..13 saal pehle is hospital ek indian ne kharid liya..armaan 13 saal pehle gaya tha...is hospital ka owner ka nam dr. malik hai..Armaan ka full name hai dr. Armaan Malik...kya armaan aa raha hai?? kya isbaar AR milenge??


PRECAP:Armaan and rahul in india...
Ar:i don't need her nikki..
Ni:but why?




Part 17


Sanjeevani,

Mumbai,
India


Muskaan chadda is very tired with two back to back surgery..so she just wants to take some rest and may be do some little chit chat with her friends..so she goes to anjali's cabin but koi nahi hai waha..she is very surprised because anjali never leave her cabin in duty hour...so she decided to ask ridhima but there is no sign of ridhima too...so after her failed attempt to find the two gupta sister's she decided to ask about them in reception..so she goes to the reception..

muskaan is happy to find sister lovely in the reception..

Mu:hello lovely ji..kaise ho ap?
lovly:oh dr. Muskaan thik hun..ap kaise hain..
Mu:thik hun..but lovely ji kya apne dr. ridhima aur dr. anjali main se kisiko dekha hain?
Lovly:haan dekha haina..dr. ridhima ji,dr. anjali ji aur dr. nikita ji ne 2 hour pehle to yaha se chale gaye..
Mu:chale gaye..itni jaldi aur kaha?
Lovly:kaha woh to mujhe pata nahi..aur dr. ridhima ,dr. anjali ne aj half day liya hai ..and dr. nikita ki aj night duty hai..
Mu:what?? jarur 3no ne kisi kam pe gayi hai..aur mujhe nahi bataya main unhe chodungi nahi?

suddenly she heard a voice from back..

voice:kise nahi chodegenge dr. muskaan?

muskaan was shocked to hear hitler's voice..

Mu:maa..maa..maam kise bhi nahi..
Dr. kriti:gud..ap to ab free hai na..

Muskaan wanted to say ab kya kam reh gaya hai karne ke liye..itna kam to kara liya phir bhi chain nahi ayi..hitler kahiki'' but these word never left her mouth ..she just said..

Mu:yes mam..i am fully free..
Kr:gud to 2 hour bad ap , main aur dr. Shubhankar airport jayenge..
Mu:kyun mam..hum kya chutti pe ja rahe hai..
Kr:shut up !! we are going to receive the guests..waise dr. ridhima bhi hamare sath guests ko receive karne jane wali thi..but unhone aj half day li hai isiliye unhe to nahi le ja sakta..ap ready rahiye ga..
Mu(in mind):oh no!! yeh hitler ko kya sirf mai hi mili thi un good for nothing foreigners ko receive karne ke liye..why always me??
Mu:ok mam ..i will be there on time..
kr:thik hai..mai chalti hun..

and dr. kriti went to her cabin and here muskaan is cursing her futi kismat and her friends...

Mu:hayee meri kismat ab mujhe hitler ke sath jana pad raha hai..yeh sab un 3 kamini ki vajah se hai..ruko abhi un logo ki khabad leti hun..

so she called anali to scold them..

HERE IN NIKKI'S HOISE


anjali was still in her thoughts when she heard the loud ring of her phone..without lookin at the screen she receive the call..but uske bolne se pehle hi dusri taraf se..

Mu:ANJALI GUPTA!!!

and the superloud shouting of Muskaan bring anjali from her thought..

An:oye muski dhire main behri nahi hun..
Mu:but main tujhe behri karke rahungi..idiot main tum tino se chun chun ke badla lungi..
An:kyun?
Mu:mujhe yaha akele chodne ke liye woh bhi hitler ke sath..ab teri behen ke phone de

anjali quickly give the phone to ridhima..

Ri:hello muski
Mu:oye hello ke bachi..tune mujhe bohot bada musibat main phasa kar chali gayi hain?
Ri:kyun? kya hua?
Mu:kya hua?? yeh puch kya nahi hua..
Ri:okk..kya nahi hua??
Mu:oye teri vajah se mujhe ab hitler ke sath guests receive karne jana pad raha hai..
Ri:guests??
Mu:haan guests..un good for nothing foreign guest..are yar agar sirf guests ko receive karni hoti toh sab thik tha..but puch kiske sath mujhe guests ko receive karni padegi..?
Ri:kiske sath..
Mu:hitler ke sath..
Ri:hehe..enjoy your time with hitler dear..
Mu:oye dara kyun rahi hai??..but chod yeh sab batein but tujhe pata hai hume Kisko receive kare jani hai??
Ri:kisko ??
Mu:aree jo doctor isbaar award jita hai na..kya nam hai uska?
Ri:dr. Malik
Mu:haan..dr. Malik hum use receive karne ja rahe hain?
Ri:whatt??








Part 18


England to India flight


All the passenger in the plane are fast asleep..sorry not all one of them is fully awake and observing the outside view through the window of the plane and remembering the last time when he was in india that time he lost his love ..this time he is thinking what will he loose in india??..suddenly his best friend started to talk..

Ra:kya hua..tu thik hai na?
Ar:haan buddy thik hun bas kuch purani bate yad aa gaya..khair chod 13 saal bad main England se laut raha hun india mein..kuch ajab nahi lag raha..
Ra:haan woh to hai..mai to 14 saal baad aa raha hun..
Ar:aur ek baat mujhe bohot sata raha hai..
Ra:kya??

Ar:hume phir se sanjeevani jana padega..i mean that place..woh jagah humari zindagi ke bohot sare yaaden lekar aj bhi hai...woh jagah humari zindagi se kitne judi hui thi lekin aj woh jagah par jane se bhi dar lagta hai..kahi jis vajah se maine apna country apna ghar choda tha..woh vajah phir se na meri samne aa jaye...
Ra:no way buddy..is baar main tere sath kuch bhi nahi hone dunga..kuch bhi nahi..
Ar:i hope that rahul..i hope that..mere mein aur kuch sehne ka takat nahi hai..

but before he finish suddenly there is a announcment by the pilot

'ladies and gentlemen we are now in indian air space..we will land in a short while so please fasten your seat belts..thank you''

Ar:so buddy we are now in our motherland
Ra:yup..we are ..
Ar:acha rahul..sanjeevani se koi hume receive karne nehi to aa rahe hai na??
Ra:sorry to dissapoint u buddy but aa raha hai sayad koi..
Ar:kya ?? u know na i can't face any of them..
Ra:relax buddy..kuch nahi hoga..aur tu vul raha hai ke 13 saal bit gaye is bich..sayad hum jine jante the unme se bohot sare ab sanjeevani mein ho hi nahi...

armaan can sense the sad tone in rahul's voice..so to change the sad look from rahul's face he crack a joke

Ar:isbaar india mein aur kuch ho na ho lekin tere shadi to jarur karaunga..and i am quite serious in this matter..
Ra:kya?? mere shadi ?? nahiii...

all the people look at them in shock and that make armaan realize that people are seeing ..

Ar:oye drama king nautanki bandh kar aur suna nahi fasten ur seat belts..

and they fasten their seat belts and wait to land in their original country ..


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Muskaan-ridzi phone conversation

Ri:what??
Mu:kya what??
Ri:tum log dr. Malik ko recive karne ja rahe ho..
Mu:yes..
Ri:main bhi aa rahi hun...
Mu: oye..miss hello tu sayad bhul raha hai ke tu dr. kriti ko galat reason deke hospital se chutti li hai..
Ri:haan..to kya hua??
Mu:to kya hua..madam agar dr. kriti ne tujhe airport mein dekh liya na toh tu to gayi..
Ri:haan..yaar yeh to tune sahi kaha..chal thik kaha..
Mu:oh..yes..aur ek bat batati hun..pehle bol kya degi?
Ri:kuch nehi..
Mu:u are so mean..ridzi..chal akhir tu toh meri dost hai na isiliye bata deti hun..
Ri:haan..ab ayi tu line pe..
Mu:kal teri ek surgery hai..aur is surgery mein tere sath dr. Malik hoga..
Ri:what??
Mu:yes..babes..chal main rakhti hun dr. kriti bula rahi hai..bye

and muskaan cut the call ...

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In Mumbai Airport...

dr. kriti,Muskaan and dr. shubhankar just reached the airport..

Mu:ok..mam hum aa gaye
kr:dr. muskaan ap jayie jake dekhiye ki dr. malik aa gaye ya nahi..tabtak mai aur dr. shubhankar jake dekhte hain baki ke flights kitne der mein aa jayegi..
Mu:ok..mam

saything this dr. kriti left with dr. shubhankar and dr. muskaan take a board which was showing 'Dr. Malik' from the car and goes inside the airport..

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After 30 min.

muskaan is hell irritated with this dr. Malik ..and she has a solid reason for it..lool she is a girl and girls hate waiting..and dr. Malik's flight landed a long time ago..so where the hell is that foreigner??..muskaan was cursing dr. malik...but suddenly she heard a man calling their hospital's name beside her..

man:i can't see anyone from sanjeevani here..and you are saying that they will send someone to pick up us..
man2:are bataya to tha..
man:phir woh log hai kaha ..

muskaan undestands that they must be dr. malik and his co-doctor so she turn towards them to say that she is from sanjeevani but her all plan come to an end and she can't speak anything after she sees them..how can she say anything?? she is seeing those faces after a very very very long time..may be full 13 years..she can't beleive her own eyes..it looks like she is seeing some dream..and her dream will break soon..but she clearly say that those two person was already shocked to see her..but some how those two persons manage to say just one word..

Ar and Ra: muski???

muskaan toh abhi bhi apne shock mood min hain but kisi tara woh bhi unke sawal ka jawab dene mein kamiyab ho jati hai..

Mu:hero?? rahul??
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Part 19

Armaan and rahul just landed on mumbai international airport..they should be tired ..yes,they are tired..their tiredness flew away like sudden cold wind..u must be wondering why??..because of the person standing infront of them..unlogo ko yakin nahi ho raha hai ke jin logo ke karan unhe apne country apne ghar se dur jana pada ..woh phir se unlogo ke samne hai..they are not in a position to say anything..but somehow they are able to say just one word...

Ar & Ra : Muski??

in reply they just heard..

Mu:Hero?? Rahul ??

bichde hue dost aj 13 saal bad phir mile hai..aur apne emotions ke vajah se koi kuch nahi keh pa raha hai...but muskaan couldn't held her emotions for long time..she just threw herself in rahul's arm..rahul was taken aback but responded the hug...rahul is also in a different world of emotion due to this closeness..true that they are separated from 13 may be 14 years but it's also true that he still love and will always love this girl...and here armaan is happy to see his best friend happy...suddenly muskaan realizes that people are seeing so she separte from the hug..and looked at armaan..and hug him tight..muskaan started to cry in armaan's arm..armaan and rahul also have tears in their eyes...the trio didn't say a single word..just crying...after a while rahul controled himself...and looked at muskaan and armaan...

Ra:muski chup ho ja..aur ro mat bohot scary dikhti hai..

muskaan can't beleive her ears..she is listening her favourite voice..after she can't even remember..she is still in the shock mode..and use hona bhi cahiye...and she is in no mood to talk..but she remered that she made a promise to herself that she will do one thing if she will ever meet these two people again in her life..so she did what she promised to herself...she slapped both of them hard..

Ar:ouch!! muski yeh kisliye?Purane dosto ko aise wellcome karte hai yaha...
Ra:haan..oye sherni of punjab kis chakki ka ata khate ho..my cheek is still paining...kitna strong hai re iska hat..

atleast muskaan smiled a little and said..

Mu:mujhe tujhse kuch bat nahi karni mr. rahul garewal..aur hero main tere class to ab lunga...

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Malik Mansion,
Manchester,
England

Anamika malik is angry ..not only angry just very very angry...aur is baat pe woh bilkul apne mummy par gayi hai..gussa hardam nak pe chara rehta hai..but ab woh gussa kisliye hai?? chaliye dekhte hai..isbar kis gadhe ne marne ke liye anamika malik se panga liya hai..wait wait wait ap log apne dimag jyada use mat ki jiye...the person is none other than our hero..chaliye dekhte hai kya hua??

Anamika is walking furiously in their big big hall room..and atul,ananya and sapna are sitting in the sofa afraid of little malik's anger...ananya at first tried to calm her down but just see the result..

Ananya:anamika baby..calm down..please...Itna gussa thik nahi hai..

Anm:dadi...first of all i am not a baby ok..i am now a big girl...and i will never talk with that dr. armaan malik...never..

phir aya atul ka number..

At:but beta..

Anm:no chachu..u are on my side remember..and your best buddy and bhai fully knows that tommorow is my exam..and i can't concentrate on my exam untill i heard his voice and he is still not calling me..and here my BFF is nowhere to be found...i am angry now ..very very angry..

so atul tried for the last time..

At:ana ..he will call ..akhir woh bhi to apne princess se bat kiye bina reh payega kya??...and apko apne papa ke liye jo video message record karne bola tha woh kya ??...

Anamika exited to hear this so she forgot her anger and told atul..

Anm:aree chachu woh sab to maine kabka kardia..

At:good..that's like angel..now you are not angry na..

Anamika pretend to think a little then she smiled her million dollar smile and said in pure hindi..

Anm:jao maaf kar dia apke dost ko..woh bhi kya yaad rakhenge...anamika malik ki meherbani...

ananya,atul and sapna were shocked beyond limits to hear this girls reply..

Sapna:my god..anamika baby you are such a drama queen...

Anm:mausi..i am not..i am just special...

Ananya:tu apne dad ki full copy hai..but tere yeh drama queen wali adaat tere mom jaisi hai...
yeh bat sunte hi anamika ke hasi kam ho jati hai..aur woh apne dadi ke taraf dekhi ...she coldly said...

Anm:to phir mujhe apni yeh adat jald se jald change karni padegi...i don't want to be like my mother who left my dad and me...

saying this she left the hall room and went to her bedroom...


Part 20

Armaan just arrived at his house in mumbai..seeing his long lost once so deeply loved home again after a long long break made him emotional..once this house was the centre of his long lost future..he dreamed of having a family with one special person in this house but that dream of a future was shattered by none other than the lady herself...now armaan have a family maybe the lady also...but now armaan's main focus is his daughter not anybody else...but where is rahul? ..he also came with him..isn't he?..oh!..ab yaad aya rahul to airport se apne ek aunty ke ghar gaya hai ..rahul ki mom use waha jane ko kahi thi...now let's get back to armaan..


Ar:oh my god!..this house still looks the same...kuch nahi badla yaha...i so much missed this house...but where is kaka?

and then he saw a old man coming towards him..he can say that the man is extremly happy after seeing him..

Kaka:armaan beta!! ap aa gaye
Ar:haan..kaka finally..but yaha pe to kuch bhi nahi badla..sab same 2 same hai...ekdum
kaka:han beta..yeh waisa hi hai jaise tum chodke gaye the 13 saal pehle anamika bete ke sath...waise anamika beta kaisi hai?
Ar:thik hai kaka..ap batayie ap kaise hai?
Kaka:main thik hun...aur yeh batao rahul kaha hai?
Ar:woh apne ek aunt ke ghar gaya hai..thodi der mein aa jayega...
Kaka:oh..acha chalo beta andar chalo..bohot lamba journey karke aye ho...main khana banaliya hai..ap kuch khake so jao..aur rahul baba ki tension mat ki jiye..main hoon unke liye..chaliye ap abhi..apka room maine ready kar dia hain...
Ar:thanks kaka..pata nahi ap na hote to main aur daddu kya kartein...chaliye..

and then they went inside the house..when armaan kept the first step all the past momment which he spent in the house come racing back to his memory...his 1st step in the house...gang staying in the house..all past fun momments..her first step in the house..those beautiful momments..and many more...

kaka:armaan beta ap jake fresh ho jao tabtak main khana garam karta hun..
Ar:thik hai kaka..

saying this he went to his room...and when he entered his room he get another shock...this room is still same..those pic..still hanging on the wall...

Ar:oh no..mujhe kaka ko batana cahiye tha mere kamre se ridhima ki sari tasveer nikalne ke liye..yeh sab photos sirf dard denge aur kuch nahi...

saying this he went to the bathroom for freshen up...


After two hours..

armaan is trying to sleep but sleep is not coming to meet his waiting eyes

Ar:haad hai yaar mujhe sona hai aur nind ata kyun nahi?..ab kya baith ke bakri count karna shuru kardun...help me plz..plane main bhi so nahi paya aur ab yaha pe bhi..mujhe so na hai...

suddenly his sleepy eyes cathches ridhima's pic in the wall..

Ar:kya hai?? has kyun rahi ho main so nahi paya isiliye..haso aur haso...(to ridhima's pic)...

but somehow his all attention diverts to his meeting with muskaan at the airport...



FLASHBACK

Muskaan took rahul and armaan to the airport cafe...and before rahul and armaan can say anything muskaan just asked..

Mu:kyun?
Ar:kya kyun?
Mu:kyun tune aisa kia?
Ar(jokingly):kyun tujhse shadi nahi ki isliye..
Mu:hero bat ko palat mat..Tu janta hai main kya keh raha hun..
Ar:kya?
Mu:tune kyun sab kuch is tarah ..achanak..aise chodke chala gaya...kyun?

rahul tried to speak in between thema..but aplog dekhiye kya hua ..

Ra:muskaan..
Mu:oye khote..tu chup kar..mujhe tujhse koi bat nahi karni...tujhse to main baat main dekhlunga pehle mujhe hero se baat karne de..aur agar phir bich mein bola to teri khair nahi...aur hero ab tu bata kyun?..
Ar:muski..jo baat bit chuka hai use dohrane se kya faida..
Mu:phir bhi mujhe jan ni hai...
Ar(now angry):to main aur kya karta..tu bol..yeh janke ke meri beti ki ma use nahi apna na chahti...use kisi aur se shadi karni hai...main aur kya karta bata...agar tujhe mera kyun ki jawab cahiye to jake us ridhima gupta nahi nahi ab to ridhima modi hogi..use jakar yeh puch ke woh kyun mere sath aisa kya?? kyun meri zindagi ko aisa banaya..kyun..?? ask her..muski..ask her.??

armaan was now crying silently ..muskaan was kicking herself mentally for asking armaan..she was feeling very guilty now..rahul understood the situation so she decided to calm the things..

Ra:armaan..shant ho ja yaar...
Ar(now softly):sorry muski..aur yaar ab rehne de insab bato ko..ab woh bhi apne zindagi mein sayad bohot age bar chuka hai...
Mu:nahi..armaan ridhima..
Ar:rehne de..muskaan ...chal abhi i am too tired..kal milte hai..kal main sanjeevani aunga..ek surgery hai..koi doctor ke sath..toh kal milte hai...

Muskaan sense that this is not the right place and time..so she said..

Mu:haan..woh bat to hai but armaan ..dr. kriti and dr. shubhankar bhi hai..
Ar:sry..yaar but kal mein undono se mil lunga..abhi i have no energy left...
Mu:ok..but tum done rahoge kaha?
Ar(with hurt in his voice):tere dost ne mujhe sabkuck nahi chin paya..abhi bhi kuch hai me ra..

----FLASHBACK END ----

present..

armaan asked the photo of ridhima..

Ar:why? why ? why basket ? why ?


Part 21


Armaan's house
Mumbai
India

'Armaan , wake up!!' an irritated rahul was trying to wake his dearest friend up from his deep sleep from the last 1 hour..but this sleeping beauty (well he is a sleeping beauty) is in no mood to wake up...

Ra:armaan ..saale aur kitna soyega..uth kal rat kisi jagah chori karne gaya tha kya..uth nahi to is thand mein bed pe hi thande pani se shower kara dunga...

hearing this dangerous threat armaan decided to let his sleep go for today..because he know that rahul is capale of doing that..akhir muskaan ka ashiq hai..

Ar:abhe sale uth hi to raha tha..itna chilla ta kyun hai...

Ra:main chilla raha hun...gadhe janta hai kitne baje hai..

Armaan asked simply 'kitne?'

Ra:9 baaj chuke hai...

Ar:toh usse kya?

Ra:abhe main yeh kaha phas gaya..dr. armaan malik ap shayad bhul gaye..but apko aj kahi jana nahi tha...

Ar:kaha?? oh shit!! mai to bhul hi gaya aj hume sanjeevani jana hai..thank god rahul tujhe toh yad tha tu ruk mai bas 15 min mein fresh hoke aata hun..tu tabtak jara rum ki khidki ke parde hata de..thoda light ane de room mein..ok main yun gaya aur yun aya..

Ra:ja jaldi kar pagal...

armaan hurried to freshenup and rahul smiled at his crazy friend and moved to did what armaan told him to...after doing what armaan told him to he looked back in the room..and what he saw made him stunned..the room is full of ridhima's pic..

Ra:oh no!! ridzi's pic...

then he remembered something..

Ra:aree main bhi kitna budhu hun..yaha pe toh armaan pichle 13 saal se nahi aya...chal tujhe energy ke jarurat hai..aur haan energy se yaad aya mujhe bhuk laga hai..armaan baad main aa jayega...lekin use bata ke jata hun..

Ra:oye armaan

Ar(from bathroom):haan..rahul kya hua?

Ra:tu fresh hoke niche aa main dinning table pe hun..bhukh lagi hai...

Ar:haha ok...

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same city
Gupta mansion

anjali entered ridhima's room to wake her up but like every time she is left stunned...

An(to herself):koi kisi se itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai...

ok aplog sock rahe honge..anjali kya dekh ke itna stunned hua..jara hume bhi to batao..ok ok batate hai...

aplogone toh armaan ke room bohot saree ridhima ke pic dekhi hai lekin ab ridhima ke room jake check kijiye waha pe ab apko sirf aur sirf armaan malik ka pic milega...har jagah every space in the room is full of armaan's pic..there are some pic which include them both..but one wall is empty lekin waha us wall ke niche kuch likha hai..'armaan and mera angel our princess anamika'...ridhima ke paas anamika ka koi pic nahi hai isliye waha us wall pe koi pic nahi hai,

soon anjali cane out of her thought and concentrate on her task to wake her sister up..

An:ridzi,uth..

Ri(sleepy):sone do na di...

An:oye..sleepy head aur kitna soyegi..chal uth..

Ri:no..i wanna sleep..

An:ridzi main gussa ho jaungi..tu uth..

Ri:no..

An:thik hai tuh soti reh..main to chala...waise sleepy head ridhima ji aj toh apko sanjeevani mein jaldi jana tha na..maine suna hai ke apko aj ek surgery bhi karni hai kisi dr. malik ke sath...

Ri:oh no!!! main yeh kaise bhul gaya...aj toh dr. kriti mera jan le legi..kya di ap mujhe thoda pehle nahi utha sakit..

An:what?? ab meri galti na..main tujhe bohot der se uthane ke try kar raha hun...lekin yeh bat alag hai ke tujhe tere armaan ke sapne se fursaat kaha hai..

ridhima blushed when she heard her di's remark..but quickly recovered from it..

Ri:dii..what rubbish main uske sapne kyun dekhungi...mujhe aur koi kam nahi hai kya??

An:haan...nahi hai...

Ri:diii...

An:kya di...

Ri:dii mujhe itna tease kyun kar rahe ho...hato mujhe fresh hone do..mujhe fresh hoke ready bhi ho na hai...agar main 30 min. mein hospital nahi poucha na to aj hospital mein dr. kriti jarur mera murder kar degi...aur socho world ke one of the best doc. aa rahe hai humara hospital mein aur unke samne agar dr. kriti mera murder kar degi to mera reputation ka kya hoga??..main to barbad ho jaungi...

An:ridzi..

Ri:haan di..

An:to bohot bara nautanki ho gayi hai..kitna bolne lagi hai yeh ladki..chal ab chup kar aur jake fresh ho ke aa..main niche tera wait karti hun..ab jaa..

Ri:ok ok..ja rahi hun baba..

and ridhima went before anjali once again start her not so hearable and good for sleeping lecture...

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Armaan came down from his bedroom after getting ready to see that his dearest friend already finished 6 aloo paratha and half bowl gazar ka halwa..

Ar:oye rahul ke bache kitna khata hai tu...are isiliye aj kal tu anamika se football aur basketball dono main har jata hai...

Ra:what rubbish..main zyada khata hun..kaka dekhiye na...

kaka:armaan beta khane do na rahul bete ko..kitna dubla patla ho gaya hai..

Ar:what ..kaka yeh aur dubla patla..haha what a joke kaka...

Ra:chal chal joke voke chor ake khana kha nahi to main sab kha lunga..

Ar:kaka nasta de do..nahi to yeh bhukkar sachmein sab kha jayega..

Ra:kaka..ise jaldi do nahi to main ise kha jaunga..

Ar:haan..kaka de do..

Kaka:lo beta..beta aplog lunch main kya khayenge?

Ra:kaka hum lunch hospital mein karenge hum dinner time tak laut ayenge... aur apka jo man cahe woh bana lena..

Kaka:thik hai beta..

and kaka left to the kitchen ...

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after 20 min..

Ra:so armaan ready..

Ar:yah buddy..

Ra:armaan agar waha ridhima hui to..

Ar:mujhe koi farak nahi padta ..koi bhi ho..mujhe bas apna kam se matlab hai...

Ra:confident?

Ar:yes..

Ra:to phir chal ..

Ar:let's go,

Ar(in mind):main rahul se keh to dia ke mujhe koi farak nahi padta ..but mujhe toh farak padta hai...i have to be strong..main 13 saal bad us jagah ja raha hun..jo jagah mere dill ki bohot karib tha..dekhte hain is bar kaunsa dard leke mera intezaar kar raha hai woh jagah...



Part 22


Sanjeevani Hospital
Mumbai
India


Today every one is busy in this famous hospital and they have many reason to be busy .the annual WHO medical award function will held here and world's best doctor is coming here..but entire sanjeevani don't know that jis doctor ko wellcome karne ke liye woh log itna prepare ho rahe hai woh unka apna hi hai..unka apna dr. armaan malik...but yeh baat pure sanjeevani mein bas ek ko hi pata hai...and yah you guessed it right..our very own dr. muskaan...but looks like she is tensed about something..let's see what is bothering her?...

muskaan was walking aimlessly and thinking about her hero and her ex-present aur confused boy friend..muskaan don't know how will she manage to controll herself..she is thinking when she bumped into a very moody but thanks to her luck happy nikki...

Ni:oye muski ..ankh pocket mein hai kya..dekhke chala kar..

Mu(without knowing):haan..

Ni:kyaa?? tu pagal to nahi ho gayi na...

Mu(still in her thoughts):haan...

but it bring out moody nikita modi so she smacked her friends empty head..

Mu:ouch nikki kyun mar rahi hai...subah abhi aur rohan ko nahi pita kya...

Ni:shut up!!! yeh bata tujhe kya hua hai..subah khana nahi khaya kya??..

Mu:oyee..main aur khana na khaun yeh kabhi ho sakta hai kya..6-7 aloo ke parathe khake aa rahi hun...

Ni:oh to tu khayegi hi..bhukkad jo hai...but yeh hospital ke saree log gate ke taraf kyun ja rahe hain...

Mu:oyee khabar dar jo mujhe bhukkad bulayi to..waise bhi main ab kitna kam khata hun...kitna patli ho gayi hun...

Ni:tuh aur patli...baby hathi lag rahi hai...

Mu:nikki..mujhe..tune mujhe..the great muskaan chadda..the shedni of punjab..ko elephant kaha..ab teri khair nahi...

Ni:acha baba sorry ..but tune mera last question ka answer nahi dia...

Mu:oh..that question..aree woh doctor aa raha hai na use dekhne ke liye...

Ni:jarur ek budha hoga..use dekhne kyun jana...chal is se acha hum canteen main chalte hai..sab dekhke dissapoint ho ke ayega...

Mu(in her thought):i don't think so akhir kar un sab ke fav. dr. armaan jo aa rahein hai..itne din baad sath mein us gadhe ko lekar..

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'ridzi..agar tu panch min. mein niche nahi ayi to main tujhe chodke hi chali jaungi hospital..phir aa na akele auto main .. ' an irritated anjali give her little sister another her dangerous threat...

An:yeh ridzi itna time karti kya hai..ridzi!!!

Ri:lo di main aa gayi..

An:thank god ke tu aa gayi..chal pata nahi aj dr. kriti humari kya haal karegi...

Ri:chill di...kuch nahi hoga..akhir main hoon na...

An:ridzz..seriously tu bohot jyada nautanki karne lag gayi hai...

Ri:well..thanks thanks...

An:oyee..main teri tarif nahi kar rahi hun...

Ri:pata hai..isiliye to main apko apka thanks pehle hi de rahi hun..kyunki ab ap mera tarif kareengi...kyunki main ne apka tension jo dur kar di...tu ab ap mera tarif kar sakti hain...

and both the gupta sisters started tu laugh..but somewhere in her heart some thing some feeling is screaming to her and telling her that something will happen and thats sure...but hoga kya??..yeh uski is zindagi ko achi ya buri banayegi...

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Armaan and Rahul decided to cover their distance by walking..since they both didn't know this mumbai for 13 years so it should help them..so with a little help from google map...armaan and rahul are now standing in front of sanjeevani basketball court..and this court bring back many memories...some sweet,some romantic,some cute,some bitter,some are...the first meeting,the first match,those girls vs boys match,that bitter momment..all are coming back like a ferari racing car...armaan apne apko rok nahi paya is bb court ke andar jane se...and he saw that some boys are planning..and like some movie he just saw their first meeting..

'bulls eye!! can i have the ball please?'

'boys coach badal do faide mein rahoge'

'yo basket naam to batati jao'

those memories are still so fresh that it looks like it is happening in front of his own eyes...

Ar(in his thoughts):nehi armaan..nehi..tu is jagah ko isbaar apne dimag ko kabu karne nahi de sakta..nahi de sakta...

his thoughts broke when he felt a touch of a hand on his shoulder...

Ar:haan...

Ra:armaan tu thik to hai na...

Ar:haan..main thik hun..mujhe kya hoga...

Ra:acha hai..chal chalte hai...

Ar:haan chal...sanjeevani here i come...

Ra: i nahi we

Ar:haan wahi wahi...

and now finally armaan malik is coming back to that place where he got everything..this place is responsible for his every tear and every pain...and also for his every smile...from this place he got his best two friends...and his reason to breath his darling daughte MISS ANAMIKA ARMAAN MALIK...but most probably he can not forget this place because from this place once he got her...but now he lost her..maybe for forever...but this place is very close to his heart and always will be nothing
can prove it wrong...

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armaan and rahul just stood rooted in the spot ..well the spot is the main gate of sanjeevani...they were shocked beyond limits to watch this..they didn't expect this..and by judging their looks armaan can surely say that they were shocked too..but armaan kisko dekhke itna shocked hai??..
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yooo yooo mil gaya update... hashahahhaa
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omggg.. update aa gaya.. cnt blve.. yeayy..
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Oh Wow, yeh itna itna acha tha.
Just Loved it.
why did you end it here? please jaldi continue karna please.
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Mujhe new updates chahiyeh Don
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I lvd it yar.thnkew so much for d pm.i hope they saw riddhima at sanjeevani. plz try to cont asap.

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