I Don't Need You - AR FF - prt34 updt 12-06-14

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

Yeh kahani suru hoti hain us samay se jab ridhima ne armaan ke sath rat bitaye thi for this reason ridhima pregnant ho jati hain par jab use pata chala to bohot der ho jati hain so use us bache ko janam dena parta hain par woh apni papa ke khatir us bache ko nahi apnati aur woh us bache ko orphanage par de dena chahta hain..par ain waqt par armaan ko us bache ke bare me pata chal jata hain..aur woh apni aur ridhima ko beti ko lekar mumbai se chala jata hain..kyunki mumbai uska ab koi nehi tha?
sab use galat samaj te hain..aur ridhima use ab woh nafrat karne lagi thi..so woh apne bache ko lekar chala gaya..lekin armaan ke jane ke bad hi ridhima ko apni galti ka ehsas hua..par ab bohot der ho gayi thi..armaan uski aur armaan ki beti ko lekar us chala gaya tha..ridhima ab sirf ek zombie ke tarah ho gayi thi..par agar kismat ne un dono ko 13 sal bad fir milate hain to kya hoga? ab kon si tufan ayegi in dono ke zindagi main?



INDEX
Part 01 to 03 - pg 01
Part 04 to 06 - pg 01
Part 07 to 10 - pg 06

Part 11 to 14 - pg 06
Part 15 to 22 - pg 07
Part 23 to 24 - pg 09
Part 25 to 26 - pg 12
Part 27 to 30 - pg 16
Part 31 - pg 19
Part 32 - pg 34
Part 33 - pg 46
Part 34 - pg 64

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Greater Manchester,England

we see a huge mansion and many servants are going inside the house..the house is clearly breathtaking then we move into the upper section of the mansion..oh i forgot that we also see a name plakard in the main gate of the house..the name written there is MALIK MANSION .

now inside the house we see a huge room totally pink in colour but the wall contains a big potrait of a sweet girl..there is also a pic of that girl and a very handsome man..a blue eyed handsome man..and in another corner there is a pic of the local football team.. manchester united football club...now in present...


Three servants are waiting outside of that girls room..and suddnly there is a loud ring of a alarm clock..and in the next moment the servants hear the noise of breaking something...
servant1:what's the noise?
servant2:oh!you don't know..anamika baby just wake up from her sleep
servant1:but why there is a noise?
servant3:Aree nahi..eh to roj ka tamasha hai..anamika baby roj uth ti hai aur ek clock ki dead ho jati hain..
servant 1:iska matlab har din ek clock ja ta hain..yeh itna kharcha kyun?
servant 3:oye tu naya hain khabar dar aisa mat karna..anamika baby agar sun liya na to tera khyar nahi..
suddenly a voice speaks:oye..mere beti ka buray kar rahe ho?
servant 3:no..no sir ase koi bat nahi hain..
voice:c'mon kaka..apke liye to main abhi bhi armaan hun..aur ap kya bhul gaye ap yaha pichle 13 sal se..hain..
their conv. breks with a loud voice...
voice:papaaa..ap kab exercise se lautein..aur gud morning..
Ar:hey gud morning angel ..aur...happy birthday...
servants:happy birthday..baby...
Anm:thank u papa...aur thanxs kaka, barry aur jiggy..
Ar:toh princess..ap itni jaldi uth kaise gayi..aur kaunsa clock aj tod diya..
Anm:ha ha ha pappa...very funny...ap to mujse bat hi mat karo..
Ar:oh! sorry princess..ap to gussa ho gayi..to batao meri punishment kya hai..
Anm:ruko batati hun...ap aj mere sath ek basketball match khelenge..mere liye khir banaoge aur mere sath aj shopping bhi jaoge..
Ar:oye..kis janam ki badla le rahi hain..mujse..mein tera bap hun..
servants laugh seeing dad-daughters amaging bond..
Ar:ok , baba done chalo ab toh apna woh dimple wali smile doh..jispar sab fida hain..
hearing her fathers word anamika laughs her million dollar smile..
Ar:kaka,ab toh princess man gayi na ab nasta lagao..waise naste mein aj kya banaya hain..
Kaka:aloo ke partahe..
Anm:alo ke parathe cool..waise papa apko
toh mumma ke hath ke banay huein aloo ki parathe sabse jayada pasand hai na..woh main janti hoon..hai na saying these she bit her tounge bcuz woh janta hai ke armaan ko aisi word sunna pasand nahi aur woh yeh bhi janta hain ke woh uski mumma ko bohut jyada pyar karte hain but woh yeh nahi janta ke kyu ab woh uski mumma ko hate karta hain...
Anm:sorry pappa!
she hold her ear and say sorry to her dearest pappa. Armaans heart melted seeing these and he embraced anamika in a hug
Ar:its ok beta phir yeh bat mat kehna..ok beta..
suddenly a voice from behind run and shouted to Armaan.
voice:oye Armaan..tum dono ka senty batchit khalam ho gayi to ab kuch kam ki bat kare..office nahi jana kya..chal aj tera meeting hain..ANAMIKA BETA ..HAPPY BIRTHDAY...


PART 2

voice:oye Armaan..tera kuch nahi ho sakta ..jab dekho tab late ho jata hain..mana ke hum boss hain magar hum log to hardin late nahi ho sakte...waise bhi kaha suna hai ke doctors late ho te hain..seriously man hume is hospital main ek gabbar lana chahein..dr. kriti ko main is matter me jyada miss karta hun.. are armaan mere bat par dhyan dega ..are tere piche kaun hain?...waise anamika kaha hain..maine use abhi tak wish nahi kya..jarur abhi tak so raha hoga..woh bilkul tere tarah ho raha hain..abhi se use samal le..aur tere piche kaun chupa hua hai..

Ar:oye...rahul ke bache tere bak bak karne ki adat abhi tak nahi gaya..maine socha ke india se chale ane ke bad tu jarur sudhar gaya hoga..lekin nahi tu waise hi hain..budhu kahika..ap tere piche dekh..
Ra:mere piche..maine to tere piche koi hai aisa bola..wait a min.
saying this he turn around and then some one throw a mug of water to him...
Ra:baby ab to tum gayi..
saying this he started to run for anamika who throw water to her..lekin anamika to anamika hai na armaan ki beti..to woh armaan ke piche jakar chupta hai aur chillane lagta hai..
Anm:papa..papa..dekho rahul chachu mere piche bhagne lag gaye..unhe roko?..
but armaan use rokne ke bajay rahul ke sath milkar anamika ke piche bhagne lag jate hai...after doing a lot of chor-police in the hallroom rahul,armaan aur anamika tired hokar sofe par lait jata hain..
Ra:HAPPY BIRTHDAY,BETA!
Anm:thank u ,chachu..chachu ap to mujse bat mat karo..ap harbar mujhe 2nd mein wish karte ho..lekin aj apne mujhe 2nd mai nahi 3rd main wish kiya..jao mere ap se katti..
she showed fake anger to rahul.rahul dar jata hain kyunki use pata tha ke agar anamika naraj hui to is ghar mein ambulance aur fire brigade lana hoga..to woh anamika ko manane ke liye kehte hain..
Ra:sorry beta,isbar chachu ko maf kar do..are main to bohot jald aa jata lekin us atul gadhe ki bajase late ho gaya..
Ar:kya? champ..woh kab lauta..aur kya kia champ ne..
Ra:ullu ka pattha lauta to kal hi anamika ka birthday miss karde aisi uski himmat..aur puch mat usne kya kia..hum do no jab tere ghar aa rahe the..tab raste mein kisine water waste kya..aur idiot ne car se utar kar water pollution ke upar ek ghante ka lecture dia..aur aisi hindi word use kya ke agar woh tu use karega toh sure tera dat tut jayega..ruk ha yeh mila..kya tha woh word..pradushan..karke kuch?
Anm:pra..what??
Ar:tu rehne de..tere bas ke bat nahi..
Ann:lekin chachu mere gift kidhar hain?

Anm:ab yeh mat kehna ke ap mere liye gift lana bhul gaye..agar ap bhul gaye to main apko nahi chodungi..haan yeh main surely keh deta hoon..
Ar:cool dowm..ANA beta..rahul garewal ke itni himmat ke anamika malik ke liye gift na laye..kyun..thik kaha na main?
Ra:haan..tune thik hi kaha..laya hun ana beta..par abhi nehi de sakta kyunki abhi wo mere pas nahi hain..abhi woh us idiot atul ke pas hain..aur woh idiot raste mein car rukkar kisi ladki ko enviournment kaise safe rakh sakte hain iske upar ek bada sa lecture de raha hain.

Ar:kya?tu kaise nikal aya..
Ra:are puch mat ..sukar hain ke waha se humare hospital ka ek intern ja raha tha..uska car lekar bhag aya?
Anm:ab us ladki ko to bhagwan hi bachaye..
and woh tino hasne lagte hain..tabhi piche se
Voice:kaun kisko bachega..aur tum log has kyun rahe hoon.?
Ar:tere bajah se champ..tu bilkul nahi badla..chal bahar kyun khada hain andar aa..aur gift kaha hai princess ka.,
At:are main bhulakkar hu kya? ANAMIKA BETA HAPPY BIRTHDAY..ye lo apka gift..
Anm:thank u..chachu..par yeh enviournment pollution ke upar koi kitab hai to main yeh nahi..mere pas already twelve hain..apne mere 3RD BIRTHDAY se yeh book dena start kya hain..ab to rehem karo..
At:haan..haan thik hain jao maf kya..isbar tere liye kuch naya laya hun..maine aur rahul ne milkar yeh kharida hain?
Anm:kya ..hain yeh..
Ra:khud kholke dekh lo
gift kholne ke bad
Anm:salwar suit!!!
lekin maine to yeh kabhi nahi pehna..
Ar:to ab pehenlo princess..jao change karke ao..
after lot of arguement anamika agrees to wear the dress and she goes to her room.after changing the dress she come down armaan , rahul and atul were shocked to see the sight infront of them
Anm:aise kyun dekh rahe ho..jarur bure lag raho hoon..haina?
Ra:kisne kaha? u are looking beautiful...bilkul
Ar:basket ki tarah
Anm:basket kaun hai , pappa?





PART 3

Anm:basket kaun hai papa??
rahul and atul look at armaan in disbelied because they know that armaan does not like to hear anything about ridhima in this house but now woh khud hi ridhima ke baat ki...but armaan quickly recover from this trance but before he speaks anything a voice from the back speaks..
voice:armaan baba khana tayar hain...
Armaan thanked kaka in heart..

Ra:chal..ve..armaaan i am very hungry ..
At:haan ..woh to hume pata hain..bhukkar kahika..
Ar:oye chalo table mein ao sabhi ...hospital bhi jana hain..ANA ko school mein bhi chodna hain ..ao
Anm:haan chachu chalo..waise aj mere b.day hai na isliey aj special breakfast hain..
Ra and Atul:kya?
Kaka:aloo ke parathe..
Hearing this rahul sabse pehle dining table ke taraf bhagta hain..aur woh dekhkar sabhi hasne lagte hain...
Ar:angel tum aur champ table mein jao..mein shower se hokar ati hun...
Anm:ok pappa..chalie chachu ..jakar rahul chachu se kehte hain ke humare lie bhi kuch chode..nehi to khud hi sab kha jayenge..
and the two left for the dining table to join rahul

but armaan doesn't go to shower first woh ek kamre mein ja ta hain jiske kye sirf uske pas hai aur kisike pas nahi..woh us room ko khul ke light jala ti hain..woh room full red hain aur ek ladki ki different pic har jagah main...
asmaani tone is playing in the back ground...
armaan pic ko dekhte dekhte kehte hain..
Ar:aj hamari beti ka 13th birthday hain..par tum mere sath nahi ho..main abhi man nahi sakta ke tum angel ko orphangae mein dena chahti thi..kaise tum yeh kar sakti ho ridhima...kaise?..i hate you basket..i hate you..par dua karti hun ke jaha bhi raho khush raho..mein tumhare bina khush nahi hun to kya hua tum khush rehna..apne us beukuf papa sanky bhudha aru us idiot sidhant modi ke sath..tumhe kya lagta hain ke mein anamika ko nahi samal paungi..galat soch ti ho tum maine angel ko 13 sal rahul aur atul ke sath milkar pala hain..age bhi karte rahungi...and he left the room



on this same day..far away from england in mumbai , india..a women around the age of 35 is cutting a cake and said to herself ..
Ri:happy birthday my cute little princess...aj apki 13th birthday hain..sorry beta ke mumma apke pas nahi hain...kya kare?..apke papa bade budhu hai..kuch samajta hi nahi...Armaan ki bhi kya galti mere vajah se unko kitna dukh jhelna para..aj ap aur apke pappa aur ap jaha bhi ho khush rehna yehi dua hai humari aur ek bad yad rakhna..ke mumma loves u both..




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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4
suddenly ridhima's chain of thought broke by a loud voice from door side...
voice:are ridzi tu abhi tak yaha hain..ready hona hai ya nahi..aj hospital main bohot imp. day hai tujhe to pata hi hai..chal ready ho jaa..jaldi kar..jaldi..
another voice also speaks from door..
voice2:oye,anji tu aur ridzi abhi tak yahi ho..dr. kriti aj humlogoko mar hi dalenge..chal..
Ri:calm down muski..main abhi ready hoti hun..tum log tabtak meri beti ka b.day cake khao..aj uska 13th b.day hai...

Hearing this anjali and muskan both look at each other and anjali say to ridhima ..
An:ridhima tu kab tak sapne me khoye rehegi tujhe pata hai ke tere aur armaan ke beti dekhte kaise hain..tune khud hi armaan se apna rishta toda hai..ap ye pachtaoa kyun?
Mu:ridzi buda mat manna ..teri vajah se hum sabne armaan ko khoya hain..aur uske sath atul ko bhi...waise ismde tera galti bhi jyada nahi..us kamine sid ki vajah se us din hum sabne armaan ko galat samja lekin atul armaan ke sath tha..pata nahi woh dono kaha hai ab..
Ri:sry di,sry muski..ap sabko kya lagta hai mujhe koi pachtaoa nahi hain? main janta hun ke mere beti jaha hai khush hai mere pyar armaan ke sath..chalo hospital chal te hain..


on the other end o3 the world...englands one of the best hospita...'life savr Hospital' 13 sal pehle yeh ek chota sa clinhc hua karta tha lekin jab ise armaan malik ne kharida tab yeh chang hona start kia aj yeh world ke 9th best hospital hain..is hospital mein aj bohot hi happy moment hain kyunki aj is hospital ki owner armaan malik ke beti ka janam din hain..hospital ki head sergons rahul,atul aur armaan ek sath conf. room mein baithe the..
At:tere liye ek news hai..
Ar:kya good or bad
At:dono hain..pehle good news sun..
Ra:bata..
At:humare hospital ab england ka best hospital hain..aur tujhe ab isiliye award mil raha hain..
Ar:kya..par mujhe to pata tha ke is sal award kahi bahar dia ja raha hain..
At:haan..aur yeh news tere liye bad hain..
Ar:kyun
At:kyunki award is sal india mein dia jayega ..aur sanjevani mein award dia jayega..
Ra and Ar:kyaaa!




PART 5
Ar and Ra:kya???
At:haan...s a n j e e v a n i ...aur woh bhi mumbai wala ..
Ar:champ..tu pagal ho gaya hain..main kaise sanjevani mein ja sakta hun tujhe pata hai na ke mai aur tu princess ko lekar 13 sal pehle india se chale aye the..aur kabhi nahi lautein..tujhe pata hai na india se mein kyu chala aya tha..to phir ab kyun?..
At:main janta hun Armaan...par yeh bat yaha ka govt. ko nahi pata ..unlogoko toh nahi pata ke 13 sal pehle England ke best doctor ke sath kya hua tha..so Tujhe INDIA jana padega..
Ar:lekin...thoda time de mujhe ..

At:koi time nahi payega..aj subah hi health secretary ka call aya tha usne 2 tickets bheja hain...
Ar:no..mai princess ko us jagah to bilkul nahi le jaunga jaha par us woman ka shadow bhi hain...
Ra:toh kaun jayega...
Atul and Armaan look at each other and turn their heads towards Rahul..
'tu' said Armaan and Atul together
Ra:pagal ho gaye ho tum dono..main jaunga to hospital ka dhyan kaun rakhega aur bohot reason hain..
Ar:abbe tu yeh kyun nahi kehta kai tujhe dar lag raha hain ke tujhe kahi hum log india le jakar kisi fat lady ke sath shadi na kara de..hai na champ..
saying this they both hi-fived with eath other..
Ra:haa..haa..very funny!..chal ve main kyun darun...
Ar:waan tu dar nahi raha...kya bat hain rahul garewal bada bahadur ban gaya..
but before rahul says anything there is a call from reception and he leaves frowning..
Ar:champ..main phir se woh sab nahi seh sakta..main ek aur bar ridhima ka samna nehi kar sakta..isbar sayad main zinda hi nehi reh paunga..
At:khabardar agar aisa kuch phir se kaha to teri khyar nehi..aur tum log india sirf 2 din ke liye ja rahe ho..awarad lo aur laut aao..aur anamika ki chinta mat karo main hu yaha..uska dhyan main rakh sakta hun..ja tu ghar ja aur packing kar le..maine gopal kaka se bat kar li hain..unhone tere mumbai wala house clean kar dia hain ..tumlog waha jakar rahoge..chal ab ghar ja..anamika ke birthday party hai aj yad hain...
Ar:haan..jata hun nehi to aj princess mere jan nikal degi..tu aur rahul hospital ki kam khatam kar ke sidhe ghar chale ana...rahul gadhe ka koi bharosa nahi pata nahi aj agar man. utd. ki match hui to woh dekhne chala jayega...use pakar ke lana..aur zara jaldi aa jayio..
At:haan..haan..ayenge..ja tu ab..
Ar:ok
saying this armaan left the hospital but before going back to his house he took his phone and he goes to image section to find a particular pic..ridhimas pic..
and he said to the pic..'kya hain? khush mat ho ke main laut ke aa raha hun..kyunki isbar jo armaan ja raha hain woh purana armaan nahi hain jiska dil koi bhi tod deta..yeh armaan different hain..be ready , basket ur past is coming back'



PART 6
IN INDIA,SANJEEVANI,MUMBAI



Ridhima,Muskan and Anjali reaches Sanjeevani ..they were surprised to see everyone busy..
Ri:may be there are some imergency..
Mu:hope not,i am in no mood to work right now..
An:very funny tu sayad bhul raha hai ke tu ek doctor hain..
Mu:mujhe yad hai..chal hitler nahi to ..pata hai na..
An:haan haan ..chal
saying this humare three beauty hospital mein enter kar te hain..samne nikki ko dekhkar woh ruk jate hain..
ni:hey guys..
All:hey nikki
An:nikki yaha ho kya raha hain..koi emergency hai kya?
ni:nahi baba..actually agle sunday ko yaha par international doctors assosiation ke annual meeting aur award function hone ja raha hain..isiliye sabhi busy hain..
An:cool..is bar award kaun jeeta woh khadus dr. paul ..
ni:nehi..is bar england ka koi doctor jeeta hai
Mu:yeh bhi..khadus hi hoga..actually every foreigner khadus hota hai..thik kaha na ridzi..ridzi..
ridhima ke taraf se koi reply nahi ane ke bajah se sabhi uski taraf dekhte hain..
An:hey ridzi..kaha kho gayi..
Ri:haan..nehi di main thik hun..waise nikki humare sanjevani ke sare doctors bhi to ayenge..naye, purane sab..sare interns bhi..
Ni:haan..sabko invite kar rahe hain humlog..
Ri:toh phir Armaan???
Mu:haan nikki Armaan aur woh idiot rahul ..
Ni:Sorry girls..maine khud dr. kriti se pucha tha unhone try kia par unlogo ka koi link nahi mila..
hearing this ridhima left the place and goes to her cabin..after locking the cabin she open her drawer and took an album..it is full of Armaan's pic..
Ridhima to Armaans pic:kaha ho jaan..plz laut aao..tumhara basket ab tumhare bina nahi reh sakta..laut aao..

In England,
Armaan goes to car show room to buy a new car 4 his princess..actually anamika is very fond of car..but Armaan is confused ..
Ar:kaun si car lu..
sales man:may i help u sir..
Ar:yes u can..
Sales man:dr. malik!!
Ar:actually i want to buy a car 4 my daughter..but don't which one to buy..
S.M:woh sir for ana madam..sir if i am not wrong she already have 9 cars with 9 drivers..
Ar:yes do u have a problem with that?
S.M:No sir, ..idea sir u can buy a ferari 4 her..she doesn't have a ferari
but before he speaks a voice calls him.'Armaan Tum'
armaan was surprised to see the person
Ar:Tum



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yo yoyooyo i m first... haahhaa...
got it here to...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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cool nurshad bro u r starting it again keep writing n love ur ff
Edited by Jennifersg - 11 years ago
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Wowww bhaiii u post this ff also here... I so luv this ff...
Bhai do u going to cont this one on blog also?
Edited by Prizi - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

yo yoyooyo i m first... haahhaa...

got it here to...

hi di how are you now adays in Pakistan so can't compete.with u guys
so beaware after I go back to Dubai n sorry for not replying
u guys kya karooon yahan itna pyaar mil raha hai hahahahaha
after so long wahan par apne irritating bhai ko jhelna parta tha btw
we will see when I come back soo watch it 😉 and
I miss u guys here
love u guys tell sargam di also byeee gtg
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

yo yoyooyo i m first... haahhaa...

got it here to...

di aap humesa kaise 1st ho jate ho???? Pout*
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eee...
u started here...
cooolll...
ab jaldi jaldi post kar...
I want to read new updates...
tc don ;)
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Originally posted by: Prizi

di aap humesa kaise 1st ho jate ho???? Pout*


hehehhe dear bcoz i m the one posted it hhahahaha... shhh secreat *wink
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