ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED - Page 63

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Chapter 37

Part 1

Khushi beginning to speak her heart out slowly letting out the pain of living a lonely life during her childhood to Arnav & he intently listening to every word she's uttering & he speeding his car to reach her as soon as possible brought out how Arnav couldn't even hear her being upset & his heart rushing to be by her side to ease away every pain from her 😊

Khushi's childhood seems too painfull, 😭 she expectantly waiting & wanting her parents love & attention & her longingness for them was so emotional 😭 The parts were Khushi spoke about how she longed for attention but it kind off didn't work out & people mistook her to be a nerd & on hearing it Arnav reminiscing about how he even longed for the same attention in a phase of his life was splendidly written 👏 focusing on the emptiness that both of them were facing

Khushi shocked to see him & he rushing to comfort her, she weeping in his embrace & he silently comforting his love & mentally cursing himself for leaving her the previous night while she remembering it & angry on him & trying to withdraw but he holding her tight followed by his apology & his request to know her past only while she's by his side so as to assure & comfort her was a very touching scene 🤗

Arnav patiently giving her time to come out & his promise to fulfill every single wish of hers was lovely 👍🏼 He observing her night clothes & he surprised followed by his naughtiness was adorable 😃 Arnav checking her room & he finding it to be so simple & he thinking if she was alone without any friends & on his suggestion to take the photo she not wanting to take it along insisting that she looked sad brought out the sad phase of her life that Khushi was through

Part 2

Arnav noticing Khushi's silence & he trying to make her speak her heart out & let out the pain that was burdening her; Khushi then pouring her heart out; Arnav startled on seeing his portrait that was exactly resembling every single feature of him was awesomely written 👏 Buddy, Khushi seeking answers from Arnav & she realizing that in the past actually she was seeking the attention & love that Arnav used to give her during childhood wrongly from NK & then the incident on the wedding night where she could only see the signs of Mrs. Raizada in her & not even an iota of Khushi Gupta were beautiful scenes ... loved them 👏 ❤️❤️❤️

Arnav wanting her to stop when she started speaking about the relation she shared with NK, he screaming to her & confessing his heart out & he overwhelmed when she said she was preserving her heart, body & soul for him all these years was mind blowing Deeps 👍🏼

Arnav impatient with the Dr & questioning repeatedly in panic was cute 😃 ... poor Dr 😆

On waking up Khushi admiring her handsome hubby & her caresses disturbing & ultimately waking him up making him go into his teasing mode followed by her kisses tantalizing his senses & finally his both options only dawning on Khushi will be both beneficial to him & they opting to take things later was romantic ☺️

Every inch of it for you to explore, for you to own it Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada.

Arnav asking her if she really meant what she said & he over whelmed on hearing it again & totally special & stopping her from uttering further was lovely. Hmmm so Arnav is planning for something very special for his special sweetie pie 😃

No, for Kaka and his girl friend! 😃 😆 😆 😆

Deeps, I thought that u will probably reveal the surprise only in the next chapter but buddy it was awesome ... Greece, Italy & Fiji ... cool. Must admit Arnav is a man of taste 😊

"Private Island, Only for couples, Private pool with ocean view. ... helicopter"

Hmmm 😉

Khushi frustrated on knowing that he's planning for the honeymoon only next month & she enjoying on watching Arnav getting frustrated that " Iska matlab, 60 days in an year?" was enjoyable 😆 😆 😆

This is why I hate your God, just so you know. Cant it be single day cycle?

I loved the last bit of the conversation a lot 😉

Thanks for the PM buddy 😊

Chapter 38

Part 1

Khushi admiring Arnav's one in a million exquisite design in awe & Arnav intently observing every little facial expression of his lady love was excellently laid down 👍🏼 Khushi immersed in worry while Arnav making her let out the worry troubling her along with a bit of teasing involved thereby lightening her mood & turning her worry frowns into crimson blushes was lovely 😃

Arnav freaking out on hearing Payal say that her cousins would engage her & her phrase love to kiss blowing him into his possessive mode was awesome 😃... possessive ASR ... hmmm ... lovely

I enjoyed the secretive convo between the two buddies ... 😆 😆 😆

Awww, that's cool Arnav's name being added in the activity list 😉

Part 2

The emotional talk between Arnav & Payal was beautifully penned down ... Arnav still treasuring the receipt & he remembering Payal's help till date & thankful to here is one of the qualities that I admire in him 👏... he's truly a gem ... one in a billion. Khushi joining in their convo & correcting Arnav's statement as us' & she narrating her contentment of Payal & Akash's help was a warm scene

Awww, that was so sweet, Khushi talking to the baby & Arnav a minute confused if the baby did really talk 😃

Arnav shutting off Khushi once she started enquiring about the lehenga followed by their romantic talks was ... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Shashi being sarcastic to Arnav & the latter giving it back "I know you are pretty busy in life ... take sometime off your busy retired schedule" ... hmmm ... who can win against the great ASR

Arnav turning restless on reaching the farm house while Khushi trying to recollect the memories associated with this place. Khushi assuring Arnav & at the same time she wanting to enter the house in the rightful manner by placing her right foot; Arnav narrating the happy moments spent with his parents & Anji along with the memories of each little thing placed in the room was so emotional ... hey Deeps could literally feel the emotions with every word u've written

She used to ask me to get her a romantic Prince. She promised me she will never leave me after marriage.

Beautiful but emotional lines buddy 😭

When Arnav was reluctant to enter his parents room Khushi comforting him & standing strong as a great source of support & helping him let out the pain that he was carrying for the past 8 years ... loved Khushi supporting & helping him in his broken state

Why me Khushi? What did I do? Why all of them? He cried on her shoulder.

You have YOU, your mom's most precious you are. 👏 ⭐️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Hats off buddy ... the heart to heart talk, she crying along with him & their emotional convo was superb 👏 ❤️❤️❤️ I loved every word of it

Arnav still remembering every detail, reminiscing it & Khushi coincidentally doing or saying the things that were done in the past & Arnav touched by it was a very emotional & touching scene. Arnav having to witness the accident spot & he unable to belief the fact that his family was no more then he sobbing bitterly while telling her that his dad called out for him but he could do anything about it & also he shivering when he was saying about his mom & Anji being crushed 😭 😭 😭 & slowly he drifting off into a deep slumber in his lady love's lap threw light on the fragile state Arnav was in which he was masking inside his heart for so long & how Khushi helped him ease his pain

Thanks for the PM buddy 😊

Chapter 39

Part 1

Khushi panicking the moment she didn't find Arnav, she hesitantly asking him if he was alright & then asking him to take her along if he wanted to let out his pain showed how Khushi had become a pillar of support for him & how she's handling his happiness as well as trying to eliminate the pain in his life

New tradition ... a bite on his chin & the apology was ... 😉

Araav arranging everything related to the wedding with so much of attention & also he making it similar so as to remind Khushi about their wedding was lovely. He specially having designed the dance spot for Khushi so that she could relive the lost moments so romantic 😳 ... agreed ASR is the best & he's impressive 😃 OMG!!! Khushi for the first time turned into ASR mode ... shocked 😃 😲 Then she kissing & singing out her love thanking him for so much of love & Arnav pulling her up when she touched his feet & showing her the place where she rightfully belonged was mind blowing 👏

Part 2

During the dance Khushi expressing her feelings to Arnav & he reciprocating to her with so much of love was a beautiful scene ... loved it

The talk between Arshi & Payash was over whelming, especially when Akash complained regarding Arnav not throwing a bachelor's party, Arnav's sarcastic reply "You need baby shower not bachelor party" was too awesome 😆

The part where Khushi gets disappointed with Arnav for not turning up for the Sangeet function right on time whereas Arnav secretly plans for the honeymoon trip so as to surprise his love & he smiling on seeing her choice of the kurta for him was fab ... it showed his heart wanting to be by her side as soon as possible but at the same time the surprise aspect keeping him occupied

Loved the exchange of msgs between Arshi 😉

Part 3

Arnav restlessly searching for his Khushi but she all set to play with him & her game making him frustrated, his sudden appearance at the stage & his touching words about Payash & his request to the guests to shower their blessings over whelming everyone especially Khushi & then she feeling nervous on been spotted by her hubby & his gaze lingering over her making her shy was fantastically written

Both the men singing & dancing looking lovingly at their respective partners was sweet. Khushi trying to slip away but being caught by her Arnie & she affected by his proximity & compliments & the little boys sudden statement "Hey Mr. What are you doing to my Di?" 😃 interrupting Arshi was superb. The boy warning Arnav & Khushi enjoying the tease followed by the marriage proposal was lovely ... thoroughly enjoyed it

Thanks for the PM buddy 😊

hey fleurs sorry friend..after posting. i have seen that u r writing ur comments on previous chaps...sorry yaar i broke the sequence of ur comments.. s o r r y

where are u dear? how I wish we could read chap 45 soon...

Originally posted by: lalarukh

hey fleurs sorry friend..after posting. i have seen that u r writing ur comments on previous chaps...sorry yaar i broke the sequence of ur comments.. s o r r y

It's okay yaar ... actually I'm not following a sequence. Now only I'm tying my comments & posting it once I'm finishing with it 😊

Chapter 40

Part 1

Akash is truly a great friend. He trying to decipher the reason behind Arnav's strong decision to never have children for life & the former even more sad after hearing Khushi's statement & planning to talk in detail with Arnav was so nice of him 😊 ... hope he convinces Arnav that having kids is a lovely phase of live & make him realize the joy of being parents & loving them boundlessly. Oh! No ... Khushi didn't hear the whole statement & she agreed to his wish 😲 😲 😲 So Arnav will be thinking that Khushi too is of his view to never have kids

A dirty and very sad misunderstanding with many repercussions to follow.

Buddy this line is really scary 😲 😲 😲 Hope this doesn't create a lot of arguments, pain & heart breaks within Arshi

OMG!! Khushi is seriously one crazy girl, whom only the great ASR can handle. The scene with the little boy's plan to elope with Khushi in return for the ice creams & he addressing her husband as kanjoos irking Arnav was enjoyable 😃 Arnav horror struck on hearing the little boy call him uncle, he checking himself & his brain quickly hatching a plan & shooing away the little boy was lovely 😃 👍🏼

Khushi pretending to ignore him but in between she ogling at him, Arnav trying to pacify his feisty wife but in vain was cute

Part 2

Khushi while dancing pointing at him embarrassing him but he irked & possessiveness taking over him on seeing the little boy's dance with Khushi & he asking Payal "Are you sure he is kid, not some sort of dwarf right?" was mind blowing 😆 ... Arnav is really too much. He turning into his full possessive mode & pushing the kid away from the dance floor & dancing with her & preventing the kid from coming back & dancing with his Khushi was lovely to read

Arnav surprised by these ladies giggles & he confused; he not following the hint of Akash, then he falling down & forgetting what to do next, further on getting some knowledge of what Akash was explaining to the ladies he startled & he trying to escape but the group of ladies & their treatment embarrassing him & Arnav cursing Akash was very hilarious 😆 😆 😆 ... only Akash can come up with weird & dumb ideas 😆 ... I pity Arnav

If this goes wrong, I am going to bury you in my backyard, I swear.
👍🏼

Part 3

Finally on succeeding to reach the room, yet another pack of women endlessly questioning then making Arnav lose his last string of patience, then Khushi's resistance to let him in turning him into ASR mode & finally his demanding tone working was a nice scene

The little romance at the bathroom ☺️ ... as usual interrupted ... by Payal

So sweet of Arnav to undergo all the troubles of these ladies groups in order to tend to the pain of his wife. She overwhelmed at his concern & living the happiness brought out the immense contentment that Khushi was feeling due to the attention & care she was receiving from Arnav's end

Poor Arnav & Akash ... both these buddies had to put up with the rantings of the other men ... thank goodness Akash took control of the situation & calmed Arnav when he snapped at a man on hearing him speak about his private matters

Arnav heaving a sigh of relief on hearing his love's voice & all his anger vanishing in a sec & he immersed in her sweet voice was nice. Khushi frustrated when Arnav didn't guess right & he asking her to come over & she accepting it unable to stay away any longer threw light on the love that they had. Arnav requesting her to wear mehendi on her hands & feet & the convo where she blushes was adorable ... guess Khushi doesn't know how he loves to see her hands & feet adorned with mehendi

The scene were Khushi tries all her might to pull her pallu off from Arnav's hold unaware of her hubby's antics & she protesting like a kid on the blouse being ripped a little oblivious to the effect she's created on him was enjoyable

Thanks for the PM buddy 😊