ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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Sarah

@zahra2709

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#601

this update was soo beautiful ❤️

and please update soon!

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#602

started to read now .amazing work

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raws

@raws

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#603

hey when u will be updating dear

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Neetz11690

@Neetz11690

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#604

hey di when 'll u upd😒

w8g eagerly

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ammi22

@ammi22

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#605

what happened to you dear? Are u okay? Are u sick? I'm just worried. Hope you are fine and everything with you is fine.

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Marvelous FF.

Stumbled upon it a couple of days ago and had a marathon reading session.

Looking forward to further updates.

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#607

heya sorry for late reply...well life is at its full swing and all set to gimme shocks...with last year of my studies its getting more hectic...i seriously swear i wont study anymore well until i seriously wanna get crazy :P

sorry coming back to update..AWESOME...i dont have much words to say so i'll just wont beat around the bush and say that i loved the subtle and sweet romance, his care and the feeling of them being their for each other in the update...he did all that for her and she got all decked up just for him...to feel her emotions from her eyes was his motto while doing all that and to see her from his eyes were her thoughts while getting ready for him...i loved that she dint took help from anyone/...

the thing that i wanted was from her to say that she want to cherish everything that symbolizes this night...(when he threw the jewelry) and though she opposed...still its not abt money...he'll get loads of time to shower all that he earns on her...after all its all hers...but those thing were something much more than just jewelry...they were his thoughts and dreams when he handpicked them...

well tht were just my thoughts not that my intention to offend u...sorry if i did..

thanks u for pm n update...

PS i know u r saying that she wrote this much when she dint have words to say...

PPS please update soon i cant wait read more...

PPPS everything was simply perfect...though i assumed their night on the island...but this was something beyond imagination...well i guess thats why its ur story :D

P(4)S okk this was last of the PSs...

P(5)S lol...sorry bbyeee...update soon :)

P(6)S huh its not accepting more than 3 P... :(

Edited by jahnvi.luvs.ASR - 11 years ago

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Deep Di u have Become Famous... Waiting for u to Return

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dimpsptl

@dimpsptl

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#609

Just one word awesome...jst came across the story yesterday n read it till the last update.its really interesting n awesome am nt getting words to describe it..would like to read more of it n see what happens next especially when Arnav gets to know the truth...n ya the palm tree also...