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THE dAWN OF THE dAWN
Chapter 44 - Part 2

As he led her through the glass doors and a narrow passage opening to their master suite, Khushi's eyes fell on 2 young ladies who were fixing something at the dressing table.

Leena, Meena? What are you guys doing here?

Leena and Meena are twin sisters who employ at AR Group. They are the head of Aestheticians and Stylists in AR, and get hands on only on supermodel or ASR recommended candidates.

Hey Khushi...as they met Arnav's gaze, they corrected themselves, Sorry Ma'm, how are you?

Khushi immediately looked at Arnav and rolled her eyes and he pretended as if he didnt say a word.

What are you guys doing here?

Before they could say anything, he interrupted the ladies calling out their name, and ending with almost imperceptible nod asking them to leave.

They whispered to Khushi, We will see you in a bit.

Close the door on your way out. Arnav instructed looking at confused Khushi.

Arnav why they are here?

I worked so hard for my wife and she blatantly ignored the most important gift her husband planned to give.

Gift? Where? She looked around and as her eyes met his master piece, she stumbled upon on her feet losing control as she almost collapsed colliding against his chest. She covered her mouth with her palms and gasped pretty loudly.

He held her by her waist and walked her to the lehenga he designed for her. Not just lehenga, a perfect wedding lehenga put on mannequin and displayed at the center of their room.

Khushi? He called her name but she didnt register his voice. Still covering her mouth with her palms, leaving his side, she walked around the mannequin, just like the first time, noticing every detail and wondering if she is feeling it for real or dream. She bent down on her knees and felt the heavy brocade border of the lehenga between her fingers as tears trickled down her eyes. She smiled proudly as she could see her own reflection in the pink and white diamonds heavily embroidered in the lehenga.


He tucked his hands in his pocket and stood lost in her happy tears, seeing her all lost in excitement, in fact her every expression screamed more excitement than he imagined.

She raised her head and asked almost in choked tone, You dint design this for Payal?

He nodded NO with a smile.

YOU designed this for me? She stood up waiting for his answer.

Every stitch, with my own hands. He shrugged his shoulders and curved his lips.

As the tears trickled down her lashes, before he could take one complete step towards her, she threw her arms around his neck, slammed her lips onto his lifting her feet in the air. He stumbled upon his feet but soon gained control holding the wall corner as she collided with him with such massive force, leaving him in all chuckles. As he wrapped his arms around her back, she tangled her fingers in his hair, contracting her own shoulders in effort to get closer to him as much as possible. As he realized her taking the lead, he smiled and played underdog letting her do as she wished. She kissed him hard, assaulting him sweetly, thrusting her tongue, sweeping his every corner. He tangled his hands into her hair, losing himself in the pleasure of her lead. As she got tired of her own assault, he took over kissing her with tender gentleness calming her overwhelming emotions concluding the effect of the intoxication as her tears touched his lips.

She buried her face in the crook of his neck, weeping. Khushi...He called her but she wrapped her arms more tightly not letting him go. Why did you do so much for me?

He picked her up and sat on the couch with her on his lap. I will tell you later tonight. For now, I want to see you in it. In fact I am dying to see you in it. She cuddled herself more in his arms as she heard him. I called them to help you get ready, in case you need extra help. Do you want their help?

She sat up straight and wiped her tears running her palms on her face hastily. Do you mind if I do it all myself? I want to do it in my way for YOU, Is that OK? or do I absolutely have to use their help?

He smiled amused at his wife asking permission to get ready herself. He smiled thinking if she can get any more cuter. No, you dont have to take their help. But they will be around here, in case you change your mind or if you need anything later. Hmmm? He asked wiping the tear stains off her face.

She nodded getting up from his lap. He straightened himself looking in the mirror, brushing his hair with his fingers, So shall I leave now? Will you be OK? He didnt feel like leaving her in that state. She nodded and hugged him as she walked him out the door.

I will be around. Take your time, per thoda jaldi karna. He grinned sheepishly peeking through the door as she was about to close. And everything you need is on the dressing table. Wear anything you like but there is one thing I absolutely want you to wear. Before she could ask him, he answered, you will know when you see it. He pecked her lips and whispered huskily, See you soon! and this is for you to calm your nerves, he gave her a chocolate and she instantly grabbed it pecking his nose.

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Khushi looked around the room removing the accessories off her and blushed thinking this is where IT is going to be. Nothing over the top but simple and classy unlike the typical first night decor.


She stepped into the bathroom and smiled nodding her head in disbelief admiring his classic choices being continued. The bathroom walls raised in black marble and vanity area in white marble gave her a feeling of black and white era. What caught her attention is her initial embroidered in the bathroom linen. She picked up a towel and rubbed it against her cheek, which felt softer than the baby towel or matter of fact softer than cotton ball.


She wondered if there is any other man existing on his earth who would make his wife as special as Mr. Raizada is doing.

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After steamy shower, as she slipped into the lehenga and choli, she looked herself in the mirror and she shyly lowered her eyes as for the first time she indeed felt that she is breathtakingly beautiful, especially with the way the choli hugged her perfectly. She was worried initially thinking how she is going to manage wearing heavy piece but her thoughtful husband made it all easy by adding zips instead of hooks and strings of doris. She blushed thinking if he designed such way for his own convenience and she let a soft chuckle remembering his struggle with dori on the night of mehendi.

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After getting the day's update from Aman, he stepped into hot shower in the adjacent guest room to get ready for her. He smiled imagining how she turns wild when all emotional and behave absolutely shy at every other min as if its her first time feeling him.

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She sat infront of the dressing table drying her hair as her eyes traced along 5 sets of necklaces, every piece best in its own way. And then her eyes searched for something he specifically asked her to wear. The moment her eyes fell on the purple glass bottle, she knew that was it. A very familiar bottle that she carries everywhere she goes especially ever since their confession night. Lavender Oil, she picked it up and smelled it with smiling expression. She bit her inner lip to control her blush and smile but by now her lips started aching due to all the quivering and trembling sensuous thoughts her mind is dreaming.

She styled her hair into wavy loose curls, and put on very mild make-up giving herself a subtle and dewy look with pearl pink blusher on the apple of her cheeks. She giggled thinking she doesnt need blusher as the thoughts of him is naturally bringing the same hue on her cheeks.

As she was about to proceed with the next step, she looked herself confusedly thinking what in her face is more attractive to him, her eyes, or her lips as she wanna accentuate only one of them. She remembered him telling how he fell in love with her eyes the very first moment. Finding the answer to her perplexed state, smilingly she picked up the set of brushes and in few harsh and smooth strokes she gave her eyes a very smoky dramatic look with golden peach and charcoal grey shadows.

Moving on to her lips, She picked a brown bottle that read NARS Follow The Boys, that she had been waiting for long to use it for their special night. She chuckled thinking Ultimate weapon to assault Mr. Raizada. She generously smeared Sweet Revenge flavored with honey on her lips giving them intrinsic glow with fabulous shimmer. The smell of the flavor reached the tip of her nose and tempted to taste her own lips. She pecked her tongue on her upper lip and let out Yumm! as if she is devouring dessert.

She then picked and wore the exquisite pink and white diamonds jewellery set that matched the wedding ring, but not before she dabbed his special request, lavender oil on her neck and shoulders.


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He came out of the shower wrapping his towel around his hips and stood infront of the wardrobe thinking what to wear. Never in his life, he took so much time to dress. But he wanted to do it right for her and make her fall in love with him again. After weighing many factors, he picked something not too grand, simple yet presentable. He spread the clothes on the bed and moved to mirror to dry his hair. As he started drying his hair, he smiled remembering how she smelled his hair and ran her fingers. He immediately stopped drying his hair and combed it wet as he knew how much she likes to touch his drenched hair. He dabbed his chin and cheeks with after-shave lotion and gave a generous spray on him with Clive Christian No.1 perfume, he moisturised his lips with lip balm and slipped into his cotton black shirt and greyish blue trousers.


He smiled imagining what she must be doing as he buttoned leaving the first three open, revealing his taut chest just like the way she likes. He rolled up his sleeves imagining her in the lehenga with all possible combinations of make up, hair style, and jewellery.

He slipped his feet into boat shaped black leather shoe and grabbed his wallet and keys. He turned around one last before going out to check himself. He tucked his hands in his pocket and checked from head to toe in the mirror and let an approving smile before he rushed out the room to make last min preps.

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She filled her maang with sindoor, pretty thickly, accentuating her face and marital status and looked herself for a brief moment. But she couldnt look for long as she felt shy of herself. She picked up the dupatta, pinning its one end to the waist, she draped it from behind onto her right shoulder. She then picked up the veil, and covered her head, curtaining her shoulders with the sheer material. She hesitatingly lifted her lashes, that she had been avoiding to do for last few mins, and looked up in the mirror to check herself, She gapsed with overwhelming emotions looking herself as bride and looked away feeling nervous and calming herself taking deep breath.

Raatein surmayi, shaamein gulabi ho jati hai...

Jab teri nazron ki inayat hum p ho jati hai...

Dhadkaney tez aur gaalo ki laali badh jati hai...

Jab tere kadmon ki aahat hoti hai...

Kaisa yeh ehsas hai jo baandhta hamari saans hai...

Kaisi yeh dor hai jo kheenche mujhe teri ore hai...

Iss ehsas ko, ankahi pyas ko...

Kya mai naam doon, tu hi bata, tu hi bata...

** Credit to Astha

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He lit the last Midnight Moon candle that smelled like Jasmine and came down the deck to see if she is ready. The door is still closed and he was about to check on her but he stopped himself giving her all the time she need. He stepped back leaning against the guard rail, stood folding his arms at his chest impatiently waiting for her. He tried to imagine, nothing but her eyes flashed his mind. Just then as he took deep breath, the door slowly opened, and the goddess of beauty stepped out taking one careful step into the moonlight.

He stood numb and paralyzed as she looked no way closer to his underwhelming imaginations. He swept his gaze from her feet which are hidden behind the curtains of lehenga, to her midriff. He fell in love with the way she draped her dupatta keeping his preferences in mind, showing her flat belly. He stood straight feeling proud with the way choli turned out hugging her pronouncing her curves more vividly.

She looked around for him nervously fidgeting with her veil, when he emerged from dark and stood under direct moonlight. She took sudden breath and their eyes were locked for long time without blinking. She gave a quick rundown on him and blushed as he looked devastatingly handsome in black casual. What she liked most is the way his chest busted out of the shirt and the way his muscles felt suffocated trying to rip the sleeves off.

He stared at her eyes and then shifted his gaze to her sindoor. His eyes lingered on the bright red color for good long time and then shifted his gaze to her mangalsutra finally meeting her eyes. She lowered her eyes and focused on the ground as he took step towards her.

He stood infront of her and noticed her shivering nervously. He cupped her cheek and kissed her forehead, right next to her sindoor, without messing its beauty. He lifted her chin to look at him but she instantly lowered her eyes.


Aankhon mai chamak, chehre p muskan hai...

Jab se kahe tune wo alfaaz hai...

Kitne salo baad dil ko sukaan aaya, mujhe khud yaad nhi...

Jo rishta benaam tha, usse naam dene ka waqt aaya...

Meri har saans teri hai aur tera har aansu mera hai, bas itni si mohabbat hai...

Tera ghabrana, sharmana, itrana, pagalpana sab mere dil ko baar- baar fida kar deta hai, bas itni mohabbat hai...

Aaj tod dein mil k iss haya ki deewar ko, kho jane de saanso ko saanso mai, bas itni chahat hai...

** Credit to Astha

Smilingly, he scooped her up in his arms and carried her to the top deck, which he stopped her from entering few hours ago.

She gaped in awe at the sight in front as they stepped into the deck lit with tea lights and candles. What she found more enticing is the way it opened to the ocean, beautifully reflecting the god of silver light, the Moon. As he carried her to the center of the deck, a rose, a small box. She gave a strange look wondering what a jacuzzi tub is doing in the middle of the deck unaware that every single item present in there will be put to use by Arnav Singh Raizada.


If you are done with your investigation, May I put you down on bed? He asked huskily smiling at her flushed face.

He put her down on the sectional bed and she shyly drew her knees closer to her chest.

He reached for the glass and gave her some water and sighed her to drink to relax her. Once she handed the glass back to him, he grabbed a small blue velvetty box and went down on his knees on the floor.

She muttered confusedly Again? thinking he is proposing her again.

He chuckled and took a diamond studded anklet and showed it to her in the air. She wide opened her mouth mesmerized the way it sparkled under the dim lights and she slightly shivered anticipating whats about to happen. Just as she expected, he looked at her narrowing his eyes passionately and moved the lehenga up on her ankles exposing the mehendi clad feet.

The moment his fingers touched her feet, she pulled them away as she felt inappropriate of him to touch her feet. He adamantly gripped her feet giving her assuring look and slipped the toe ring connected to the anklet and then clasped the diamonds around her ankle, tilting his head making sure it is secured properly.


He then leaned and kissed her ankle where the clasp is. She shuddered with the tickling sensation he created and tried to take it away but this time his grip was much firmer than before. He rubbed his thumb on the soft flesh of her feet as he dropped wet kisses along the line of her sole.

He sat up on the bed at her feet, and holding her palms at her knees with one hand, he lifted the lehenga off her feet completely exposing the mehendi he had been waiting to see for many hours. As he swept his palm on her legs, she shyly closed her eyes, unable to show the sweet turmoil that is clearly reflecting on her face.

I never waited so patiently for anything as much as I waited to see these long legs. He whispered as his fingers brushed on her smooth skin. Dropping the lehenga down to her feet, he flattened her knees on the bed. He lied down resting his head on her lap and spoke caressing her face with his thumb, Since you decided to look only down for the rest of the night, I think this position is good for both of us. She chuckled with his comment and finally looked at him.

At that moment he grabbed a single rose reaching behind her back and gave it to her, For you, since you complained I never give you flowers.

She took the flower, and said running her forefinger on his forehead, But you already gave me one.

He looked at her with surprised expression. She continued, Sort of...You left a rose by my bed and almost...she was about to say kissed as stopped as blush took over.

You knew that?

She nodded Yes.

How embarassing? He pursed his lips grabbing her palm in his and quickly changing the topic.

I guess I have to find my name before I can proceed with anything. He teased her as he carefully tried to read mehendi on her palms. It wasnt too difficult for him to spot his name but a wicked idea lit in his brain, to tease her. I am finding it difficult to find the name in dark. Why dont I kiss and find where my name is?

Thats cheating. I wont allow you to do anything without spotting your name. She said her feisty tone all of sudden, which is what he wanted to hear.

Thats exactly what I am doing to expedite the process. He touched his lips to her thumb giving an imperceptible kiss and making an obvious feathery sound. She flinched in pleasure and she wondered how a simple kiss would do wonders like this. She was kissed more passionately and roughly and gently before, but all this is something new and the way he is giving attention to her every inch of her skin overwhelmed her. He closed his eyes and followed the pattern until his lips reached where his name is.

As his lips touched the very soft flesh of her palm, he looked at her to meet her eyes that were admiring the way he was enjoying her. She shyly looked away as he huskily whispered, I never knew my name would look so beautiful.

He ran his fingers over her head and slid the veil off her exposing her wavy tresses. He scooped part of those to the front and sniffed the sweet smell of vanilla as they touched his face teasing him.

Do you know the meaning of APHRODITE? He asked her suddenly. She smiled and blushed.

I can tell you if you dont know.

She placed her finger on his lips and said softly, I know, dont embarass me with your compliments.

He sat up facing her, caressing her cheek. I have been trying hard for last 10mins to come up with something other than my usual words stunning, beautiful and drop-dead gorgeous. He kissed her eyes tenderly. I never knew I would be sharing my life with an Aphrodite that too an exquisite one.

Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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THE dAWN OF THE dAWN
Chapter 44 - Part 3

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Silence engulfed around them with the intensity of emotions that held captive for several years. Her warm tears that rolled down her eye corners, touched his temples that buried in the crook of her neck. He lifted her head and cupped her face worriedly. She instantly hugged him and cried. He laid on his back and pulled her onto his chest and pulled covers on both of them. He caressed her back calming her. The feeling is inexplicable at both ends, the longing was justified but the reason was beyond one's understanding.

It feels like I have waited for this night all my life. She mumbled on his chest.

He kissed her forehead, Indeed we did! He spoke gazing at the stars. Holding her chin to look at him, he spoke with moist eyes, Open your eyes Khushi! She opened her eyes dreamily looking at them. You are MINE Khushi.

Her tears rolled down her cheeks drenching his chest as she heard him continue, I survived without my parents but I dont think I can live without you. Please never let go of me.

She leaned down to his lips and kissed him. I am YOURS. I have always been yours. My promise for life, there is and will never be anything more important than you in my life.

He pulled her to kiss fondly, as she hugged him securely. And they laid there gazing at stars, feeling calm and at peace, completely cutoff from the outside world. After laying there for long time, he tilted his head to see if she is sleeping. She smiled and looked at him, speaking softly, I am not sleeping if thats what you are checking me for.

He smiled, Are you doing alright? Any pain?

She blushed and mumbled without looking at him, A bit sore I guess. I am not sure, I didnt move since then.

Do you feel cold underneath? He asked trying to sweep his fingers on the bed.

Yeah I do too. She moved from him, and sat up pulling the sheets to cover herself. He stood up and wore his pants as she looked away shyly. He moved the sheets and found half the bed dyed in her blood. She shivered and closed her eyes a bit embarassed. He sat next to her and pulled her to tight embrace and whispered, I am sorry I shouldnt have been so rough.

I am glad you were, she mumbled on his chest.

He pulled back and looked shocked at her and smiled again what she meant. He wrapped her in the blanket and scooped her up to take her to the bedroom but she insisted to spend the rest of the night there. He placed her on the sofa and pulled the sheets off the bed. He quickly grabbed another set from the bed room and made the bed while she watched him do that. He looked quite tempting working hard, without shirt on.

You are sooo HOT, my hubby. She giggled and landed a pillow on her as he blushed with her compliment. Especially with no shirt on. Another pillow landed on her and his warning with smile, Stop it before I throw you in the water.

She giggled hugging the pillow as he fixed the bed. She tried to getup and walk upto him, she felt wierd with the first step took. Arnav this is so weird. He turned around to look at her. I feel so weird, I feel something is holding me up there.

Where? He looked around trying to understand what she is referring.

Here down. She limped like monkey with broken feet.

He chuckled, That means you are still feeling me there. She narrowed her eyes tallying the feeling of her muscles with his words and she blushed realizing it. He scooped her up in his arms, Which also means only I have the right to walk you around next few days. She smiled and wrapped her arms around him.

He made her stand on her feet and removed the blanket around her.

Arnav? What are you doing? She crossed her arms and turned away. He scooped her up again and put her carefully in the jacuzzi tub.

She hissed in pain as soon as the water touched her soft bottom. He kneeled outside the tub and stroked the water to her bottom giving her gentle water massage. She felt shy at the same time she struggled to bear the burning sensation due to the rip-off of her skin.

Arnav, yeh sab? Its paining. She held his arm tight.

Bas Thodi der Aur! You will feel good otherwise you will be very sore by morning.

No, please take me out. It is unbearable. She tried to get up.

He stopped her firmly. Look at me. He leaned to her and kissed her helping her forget the pain momentarily.

She indeed calmed down as the water strokes relaxed her sore muscles.

What did you put on your lips? He asked sweeping his tongue on his own lips.

She smiled, Did you like it?

Any doubt. What is it? He asked stroking water against her bottom.

Why should I tell? You are the one who tasted it. You guess it. She giggled playing with his ears.

Hmm Honey may be?

Hnn? How did you find out so easily? She pouted.

Like this! He leaned and nibbled her lips as she giggled.

He scooped her up from the tub and wrapped towel around her, helping her wipe her hair. Her eyes teared up with the tender care he is providing and she leaned onto him with her towel wrapped.

He picked her up in his arms and carried her to the bed, pulling covers on them. He unwrapped the towel and threw it on the side as he hugged her giving her warmth.

The lehenga is so beautiful. I have no words to explain. I still cant believe you did so much for me!

Aren't you happy?

Ofcourse I am.

Then, thats the answer to your question. He cupped her cheek and spoke lovingly. You have no idea how much you changed me since last one month. I never thought twice where to have my lunch. I never thought about the time I used to return home. I never spent time more than 2 mins in choosing my clothes. But now I do. I think about all these, I think about my every action, you know why?

She looked up at him.

To impress you. To see that smile on your face. To see the change in color on your skin. I am afraid one day you will change me to Arnie, as you wanted to?

I wont. came her instant reply.

He looked at her shocked.

Because I fell in love with Arnav, his blazing anger but melting love, his rough hold but gentle touch, his harsh bites but tender care. This is what I fell in love with, not a prankster Arnie.

He lifted her chin and kissed her tenderly and whispered, Your mom might not like it but you got a cut on your lips.

But I love it. You love it. Thats all matters. She smiled.

He brushed his thumb on her lips and said softly, Why dont you ever stop me doing such things? Why do you bear the pain I give you?

Because I look forward to the love that follows that pain. I love the way you care for me and give so much thought to small details.

You are very innocent Khushi. That scares me sometimes. What if something happens to m..

Landed a one tight slap on his face as she pushed herself up on her elbows, and smacked his face angrily. He opened his eyes that turned moist feeling the sharp pain on his face and whispered Sorry.

She slapped his other cheek and shouted Dont you ever say that! He looked at her sporting subtle smile on his lips. He held his ears and said Sorry again but he didnt stop her from punching him and hitting him which surprised her.

Why do you do this Arnav? Why do you hurt me so much with your stupid talk? She hugged him and sobbed on his chest imagining her life without him.

That was huge mistake on my part. I shouldnt have said that. I am sorry. No one can separate us, not even ourselves. He kissed her forehead.

She sniffled wiping her tears and looked at him pouting her lips, I am sure you would have smacked if its someone else in my place, dont you get angry if I hit you? How do you have so much self control?

Self control to hit back or to do something else? He asked making sly innuendos.

She giggled saying Everything.

Do you want me to lose self control? He teased her.

No, I am not complaining, I am just curious.

I guess the day you entered my life, I realized everything is worth the wait when it comes to you. And it is just proved once again today.

pyar woh k jab hojaye tou na din na raat ka khayal

pyar woh k jab hojaye tou na dhop na chaoon ka khayal

pyar woh k jab hojaye tou tu tu rahay na mein mein

pyar woh k jab hojaye tou aik pal ki bhee douri sahi na jaye

pyar woh k jab hojaye tou dil hee zuban bun jaye

pyar woh k jab hojaye tou mein tujh mey aur tu mujh mey samah jain

pyar woh k jab ho jaye tou teray milan k aas hee pyaas bun jaye

pyar woh k jab hojaye tou tun mun dhun sub tujh per lotanay ko mun chahay

mukhtasir yeh k...pyar woh k jo tu nay keya aur mein nay hur pal jeeya...

*** Credit to Lala

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Author Note: Folks I will be inactive for next 2 weeks. So I am not sure when the next update wil be. I will try to give one but I cant promise. Enjoy Life!

Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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Part 1-

3-4ft long beard, Arnav's 3 probs cracked me up... 🤣

Seeing Khushi nervous I felt d sm way anticipating wats cumng nxt... 😳

Dis 1 again cracked me up- Let me know if you want us to take the return flight right away? Dont ask for food in the middle of the night. You will not get any! Teaser n eager Raizada... 😆

He GIFTED her a YACHT as a wedding night gift????? 😲 OMG!!! *FAINTWA*

BTW, I luvd d d way he pampers her n also luvd d Yacht, it ws beautiful... 😃

1 Highlight of d update- Never tell me what to gift you and how much to spend on you. I never gave you permission for that. I dont want anyone to replace the memories we are going to create in it. Whether we use it or not for the second time, it will stay with us for our life. 👏 👏 👏 Arnav's threat send shivers down my spine... 😳 N I so luvd d justification he gave, I agree completely... 👏

2 Highlight d update- I am a man who slogged and earned my keep for last 8 years only to take revenge from people and to get back what I lost. But now I wanna change the reason behind my earn. I wanna earn for you and flaunt it for you. So get used to it, Sooner the better. Because I am not backing off. 👏 👏 👏 I so luvd it... Hayeee... Kaash...

Room wid capital B 🤣 Red on u n white on walls... I so luvd it... 😳

Ahh... D Pills discussion came up n I luvd Khushi's explanation... 😉 I so luvd d way he kissed her pimple as I hv a acne prone skin so I empathise wid her...


Part 2-

Do I need 2 tell u How much I'm in luv wid Khushi's lehenga???? 😳 😳 😳

I so luvd Khushi's reaction after seeing it n d way she asked his permission was so damn cuteee... 😃

I so luvd dis line- I want to do it in my way for YOU ☺️

No doris n hooks, only strings... Thoughtful Raizada... 😉 😆

I so luvd Khushi's weapon 2 assault Arnav... I wonder if its available here or nt... I need it 2 for future use... 😆 😳

Regarding d jewellery I hv already told u tht I'm obsessed wid dis design particularly... 😳

Seeing Arnav's prep I felt dizzy almost... Hez lukng so damn inviting wid dose 3 buttons open... OMG!!!! Deep breathing is d mantra... 😆

Hayeee... D way Arnav ws gazing her made me feel weak on my knees... Koi to rok lo... 😕

D deck is so damn beautiful... This cnt get better... 2 eager souls becoming one under d sky wid brightly lit moonlight... Dis is so damn sensuous... ☺️ (D ambience i meant... ) 😉

khushi thot hez proposing her again... 😆 Ab to uski ring finger mai bhi space nhi hai... 🤣 BTW, d diamond anklet ws beautiful... 😃

I luvd wen Arnav kept his head on her lap n she confessed tht she knew abt d Rose... 😃

Dis 1 cracked me up, cnt she get more cuter???- I wont allow you to do anything without spotting your name. 😆 Jangli Billi... 😈

Hayeee... I'm in LOVE wid dis Aphrodite and her SE*Y Hubby... 😳


Part 3-

U knw hw desperate I ws 2 peep into dere private moments... 😳 😆 N however u explained it I fell short of words 2 describe it... His Passion, rawness, her participation, eagerness all combined n made it a blissful experience... (Abhi k liye itna hi, slow torture continues...) 😆

Arshi k sath even I felt lyk I waited 4 dis for so long... 😉 😳

3 Highlight of d update- I survived without my parents but I dont think I can live without you. Please never let go of me.

I am YOURS. I have always been yours. My promise for life, there is and will never be anything more important than you in my life. 😃 👏 😃 👏 I'm in LOVE wid YOUR Arnav... ☺️

I so luvd d way she teased her SHIRTLESS hubby... 😳

Limped lyk a monkey wid a broken feet... Seriously??? Isse acha comparison ho hi nhi sakta tha... 😆


I so luvd d way he tuk care of her n eased her pain... Itna caring hubby... Ufff!!! 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️


4 Highlight of d update- I never thought twice where to have my lunch. I never thought about the time I used to return home. I never spent time more than 2 mins in choosing my clothes. But now I do. I think about all these, I think about my every action, you know why?

To impress you. To see that smile on your face. To see the change in color on your skin. I am afraid one day you will change me to Arnie, as you wanted to? Hayeee...

5 Highlight of d update- I fell in love with Arnav, his blazing anger but melting love, his rough hold but gentle touch, his harsh bites but tender care. This is what I fell in love with, not a prankster Arnie. 👏👏👏 Dis tuk my heart away...

6 Highlight of d update- I look forward to the love that follows that pain. I love the way you care for me and give so much thought to small details. 👏 👏 👏 Wen I thnk tht d best has already cum u surprise me another 1... 😉


7 Highlight of d update- I guess the day you entered my life, I realized everything is worth the wait when it comes to you. And it is just proved once again today. 👏 👏 👏


P.S. I luvd LALA's poetic lines... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN... Reading her lines I felt mine as crap, I wonder y did u added dem??? 😕 Joote khane padenge IF p mujhe... 😆

VM- Dis is one of d best VM's I hv seen till date... Nishu, Lucky u... I so luvd d detailing n mixing n d Song... Everythng ws jst perfect abt it... 👍🏼

I'M NOT SLEEPING TONIGHT... ARSHILAND IS MY HOME... 😳 ☺️


Edited by asthagarwal - 11 years ago
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Meee😡
Hi Deep Di..

Atlast after a long time I am in first page of update..

Ok coming to Update..

PART 1

hmmm.. Arnav's determination to know the past..
Very good ji very good
But hope he does not turn against his own ppl.

And Khushi.. badi nakhrewali hai

She dreamed him with long beard woh bhi 3-4 ft?

Now what did I do?

You came in my dream. You had beard of 3-4ft length. You were looking ugly.

What nonsense?

Sachi. You tickled me with that beard and I woke up scared. She pouted.

That was not your dream. I did tickle you.

With the beard? She raised her head and asked inquisitively.

Yup. My beard grew to 4ft length listening to your melodious snore since last night.



SAchi di..
Only u can do such things

And My ASR is all Blushy blushy haye..

Problem 1: Attendant who is sitting few feet away preparing for landing, watching his every move on his wife.

Problem 2: Last few mins of landing. He can neither do anything nor move out of the seat.

Problem 3: Lady sitting next to him, doing everything she can to ruin his senses with camelia and lily scent in deadly combination with wet locks.



Aha.. Itne sare problems.. Kabi kisi insaan ko nahi hana chahiye.. Bichare Arnav[/url]



Haha.. KASR ki bolti band
She just nods.. No words..

Oh My my

Chapad chapad bolne wali aaj kuch boli nahi

I can see how fine you are! Let me know if you want us to take the return flight right away?

Arnav is all teasy mode
Haye agar return flight leni hai toh aye kyun janaab?😆😆

Awww...

Deep Di.. Such a beautiful Yatch

Never Imagined that you ll take to such extent..
BEAUTIFUL

PART 2

Leena, Meena



MEENA? MEENA? Really?😳

Ohhh My god

Arnav... AWWW

I'm stuck to it..
Simple yet haaawwttt

And his wet hair

Di Now i really need shower COLD one

Khushi is beautiful

Ufff.. Lavender Oil

It can hit anyone to go weak on their knees

for anyone, the first attractive thing in a person's face will be eyes Mostly and in ArShi's Case its damn true...

Moving on to her lips, She picked a brown bottle that read NARS Follow The Boys, that she had been waiting for long to use it for their special night. She chuckled thinking Ultimate weapon to assault Mr. Raizada. She generously smeared Sweet Revenge flavored with honey on her lips giving them intrinsic glow with fabulous shimmer. The smell of the flavor reached the tip of her nose and tempted to taste her own lips. She pecked her tongue on her upper lip and let out Yumm! as if she is devouring dessert.


Di this is sheer torture han..
Arnav toh puri Pagal ho jani hai

At first I was like JACUZZI? What is the use of it here?

But later it stuck my mind.. u know sometimes my mind gets too guttery😉😆

Di.. Those payals.. Bhai wah.. Maar Daala...

ASR's classy dimaag ki jai ho

APHRODITE

Really?

That's is a huge Compliment

PART 3

Haye Di...

I read this part at 2:30 early in morning

And I forgot that i have exam the same day..

And believe me this time..

I had 3 bottles of Iced water beside me..

I knw that u ll come up with something like this.. 😆😆

You created such a hot atmosphere...

and there you go.. ur Emo part..

Holding her chin to look at him, he spoke with moist eyes, Open your eyes Khushi! She opened her eyes dreamily looking at them. You are MINE Khushi.

Her tears rolled down her cheeks drenching his chest as she heard him continue, I survived without my parents but I dont think I can live without you. Please never let go of me.

She leaned down to his lips and kissed him. I am YOURS. I have always been yours. My promise for life, there is and will never be anything more important than you in my life.


Di.. How come always ur words have that power to being tears roll down drenching my cheeks...

And again u changed it

Teasing naughty ones

You are sooo HOT, my hubby. She giggled and landed a pillow on her as he blushed with her compliment. Especially with no shirt on. Another pillow landed on her and his warning with smile, Stop it before I throw you in the water.

Haye.. Where is my blushing Khushi?
But this s also nice😆

Ahh... As i thought
That Jacuzzi tub is for that purpose..
I knew...

Such a caring Hubby Arnav

To impress you. To see that smile on your face. To see the change in color on your skin. I am afraid one day you will change me to Arnie, as you wanted to?

I wont. came her instant reply.

He looked at her shocked.

Because I fell in love with Arnav, his blazing anger but melting love, his rough hold but gentle touch, his harsh bites but tender care. This is what I fell in love with, not a prankster Arnie.

He lifted her chin and kissed her tenderly and whispered, Your mom might not like it but you got a cut on your lips.

But I love it. You love it. Thats all matters. She smiled.

He brushed his thumb on her lips and said softly, Why dont you ever stop me doing such things? Why do you bear the pain I give you?

Because I look forward to the love that follows that pain. I love the way you care for me and give so much thought to small details.

You are very innocent Khushi. That scares me sometimes. What if something happens to m..

Landed a one tight slap on his face as she pushed herself up on her elbows, and smacked his face angrily. He opened his eyes that turned moist feeling the sharp pain on his face and whispered Sorry.

She slapped his other cheek and shouted Dont you ever say that! He looked at her sporting subtle smile on his lips. He held his ears and said Sorry again but he didnt stop her from punching him and hitting him which surprised her.

Why do you do this Arnav? Why do you hurt me so much with your stupid talk? She hugged him and sobbed on his chest imagining her life without him.

That was huge mistake on my part. I shouldnt have said that. I am sorry. No one can separate us, not even ourselves. He kissed her forehead.

She sniffled wiping her tears and looked at him pouting her lips, I am sure you would have smacked if its someone else in my place, dont you get angry if I hit you? How do you have so much self control?

Self control to hit back or to do something else? He asked making sly innuendos.

She giggled saying Everything.

Do you want me to lose self control? He teased her.

No, I am not complaining, I am just curious.

I guess the day you entered my life, I realized everything is worth the wait when it comes to you. And it is just proved once again today.
This is my fave part DI...

The true Love is playing in every word and action..

Just LOVE

PYAAR Khubsurat Ehsaas

And Di

Your VM and the Song Selection... Perfect

U started with Rabba Ve...

I am damn Flat.. [url=http://emoticoner.com]

Ok Di.. Now I am leaving to Take Cold Shower..

BYE
LOVE U DI

Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 11 years ago
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unres by mwep
Thanku re paagal😳 res ke liye oopsii thanku waapas liya
PART 1:
IT WAS AMAZING...
khushi ka dream seriously 3-4 ft long beard🤣
luved her dress😳😳
khushi is getting naughty😳 she is teasing arnav bechara arnav😆
he is sitting n counting his problems😆
aww khushi is nervous😉
i luved the yacht😃😃
it is beyond my imagination its interior,decor is just superb👏👏
aww he gifted it to her how romantic😳

Capital B besharam 🤣


PART 2:
Khushi ko ready krne ke liye he even brought asst.😆
luved khushi's expression when she saw the lehenga😃
the lehenga is very very beautiful haye mera dil aa gaya uspe😳
arnav ne extra bhi banaya h kya😆
luved the way she found solace in arnav's arms😛
aww she herself wants to get ready for him😳😳
bechara arnav is getting impatient😆

omg is this bathroom😲 kitna acha h😃
how can he forget Lavender Oil😆
aww arnav is also concious of his luks😆
but his dress is also 👏
i luved the ring n anklet😃 mujhe bhi chahiye😭
He called her APHRODITE😳
i searched for its exact meaning on google😆

PART 3

it was 😳😳
luved when khushi said i somehow lived without my parents but cannot imagine my life without u...

i also luved these lines:
I guess the day you entered my life, I realized everything is worth the wait when it comes to you. And it is just proved once again today

poetic lines written in b/w were amazing👏👏
luved the vm too👏
do come soon di😃
Edited by ARSHIANDI - 11 years ago
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awesome di👏,superb,speechless⭐️

part-1 loved kushi dream😛
arnav problems are soo funny😆😆
di loved the yacht nd its interior haaye mein toh fida hogayi🤗
kitna beautiful interior hai😳

kushi told aranv reason behind the pills😛

part-2
haaye kitna sona lengha hai di loved it😳
kushi got soo emo aftr learning tht lengha is made by her arnav evry stich is by him,me also become emo di😭

agin di interior nd accessories were soo beautiful specially bathroom😆
the way they both get ready just for eachother like kushi filling her maang from arnav's sindoor or arnav wetting hair etc were soo amazing di it shows hw much they love eachother😳😳

haaye di tht top deck surrounding was soo soo beautiful mein toh fida hogayi
for ur awesome interior a song dedicated by me:
inn sab se meri nazar nahi hatt ti
nazare hum kya dekhe
😆😆

di tht anklet omg soo pretty,mujhe bhi chaiyeh i was not fond of anklet but from now i love thm yaar😳😳

arnav called her aphrodite-goddess of love nd beauty soo sweet di

part 3-i hv not read love making part i m still under 18, i m a good girl u know😛😛😛

loved arshi di,thry r madly deeply in love with eachother😊
loved the lines di tht u included in btw😳😳

awesome updt di,waitng for nxt one,come back soon😃

Edited by ARSHIANDI - 11 years ago
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Part 1 : The yacht was really amazing . I was literally imagining ARSHI in that Yacht and was drooling. Yes ASR forgot about his fathers letter .
Part 2 : The lehenga was really amazing. The way ASR asked about the pills was really very cute and it shows how much he is concerned about Khushi Loved it

Part 3 : 😳 what more can I say.


Amazing update.

what you wont be able to update for 2 weeks 😲 how can I survive .
Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago
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R...

----unres----

arnav try to think what made shashi send khushi away from him but it was interrupted by khushi..!!!
thwy reached their destination and she was shy and nervous..!!!!!1 he is teasing him.. understands she is nervous..!!!!
he gifted her yatch..😊 finally pills part is cleared..!!!!!!
he love red on her and white on walls..!!!!! lovely...!!!!!!!
finally he gave her lehenga and khushi's reaction worth watching..!!!!!!
she gets ready just like a newly wedded bride..!!!!!! loved their reactions on seeing each other..!!!
they become one..!!!!! loved that part.. it was written very beautifully..!!!!
super awesome update..!!!!!!!!
that was the best chapter...⭐️ ⭐️
u r very fab writer.. hats off to ur writing..👏 Clap 👏

but ye kya last me bomb drop kar diya that u r going to be inactive for 2 weeks ..!!!!!!!!
ok will wait for next part..!!!!!!1

pls pls continue soon..!!!!!
Edited by khareshelley - 11 years ago
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yipeee!!!! jumping jumpang jumping jamphak...😉
deepthi aaagayeee
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😃 ⭐️


I'm out if words. I'll be back when I get my speech back 😳
Edited by sweetie_angel - 11 years ago

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