ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

dear awesome updae.
so finally there first night is comming:P
I am liking the way story is progressing:D
thankx for great update

sory for late comment didnt visited if for few days:(

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ara_000

@ara_000

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

intezaar karing for d update 😳

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

The part with Khushi and her parents was pretty emotional... I kinda feel bad for Khushi for being stuck in such a difficult position between her parents and Arnav... I am glad that Arnav is not expecting Khushi to answer all his questions and wants to leave her out of it... In any case the day he finds out the truth it wont be pretty...!

The scene in the plane with Arnav not being able to control himself had me laughing and blushing at the same time...! 😆☺️ Looking forward to their Fiji trip😊

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spilla

@spilla

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Very passionate and hot update

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Wow Atlast the most awaited part and it was just amazing..👏

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

deepu thank u so very much for giving such a beautiful night...which we all were waiting eagerly ...thank u so very much for showing that feelings can be so pure...thank u so very much for showing true love is real eternal...thank u so very much for showing there speciall moments so magical...thank u very much for showing dreams getting full filled in such a beautiful way...thank u very much for taking us under the sky instead of there bed room :)...thank u so very much for showing the beautiful love making of two souls who were missing love from their lives last many years...thanks for making us witness with stars moon there awesome loveable special moments...thank u so very much for showing every thing so elegantly and taste fully...thank u so very much for giving us peaceful fabulous time where we cheerished love...thank u so very much for showing care and concern exists ...thank u very much for giving a girl her life's best start to a very important phase of her life...thank u so very much for making her feel like princess,like special...thank u so very much deepu for giving us amazing arnav...who has given such a beautiful and fantastic start to there happy future...thank u for everything deeps...its not just the story which is showering love...its ur inner self which is spreading love all around...in the end i wanted to say thanks to some one else than u i mean GOD for sending u in my life...

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

astha awesome lines ...beautifully written...loved it...❤️

nishu best wishes for u once again ...

deepu awesome vm ...song is tooo good ,loved it

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#478

haath jab say hay tera haathoon mien...meray hatoon mein yeh zamana hay ...it said it all ...wow itnay pyaraay lyrics deeps...just again listening to the vm ...its beautiful

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

i came here to ask...when will u update...
instead...
i see u already did...
my semester final starts in 3hour..n here i am reading ur update...
will comment after i am done with my xm..!!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#480

amazing update finally they came together loved the love making scenes very cute very utterly sexy loved how he took care of her the whole time awesome update beautifully done see you in two weeks

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago