Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #2 [ Completed ] - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update mints
good to see something beautifully brewing between payal and sumer
am I sad for AR - iam not sure
loved arhi scenes
Devi maiya's idol made by khushi and kids of Aashaadan was the perfect gift for the couple, I guess - loved the gesture
lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
THANK YOU SO MUCH for dedicating this chapter. 🤗
Awesome update 👏
I love khushi's dress, green is really her color.
Arnav is mesmerized of khushi's beauty n grace n his family is also effected by it.
Payal is handling Akash brilliantly but this making sameer jealous n comfortable. I think he feel something for Payal.
Payal spoke of Shyam, this means Shyam has got something to do with Payal's heart, may be he is the one who has broken poor sweet girl heart.
Her words effected Sammer espacially when she compared him with Shyam. He should start thinking why her accusations n presence effect him.
If Arnav is very serious for Khushi, he need to act strong for Khushi because his society might deny her for being a part of his life n family because already people have start gossiping her n have start a gaining her to be from a wealthy family. Khushi is a very simple girl, with simple life n dream n she also expect simplicity in future as well.
Precap is very interesting. Khushi was crying. Does Akash said something to her or someone else spoke her rudely in the party.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahaan...another interesting n eventful update dear...
can't wait for the next part...
plxxx continue soon...
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thnxxx a lot 4 pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update Aakash and Arnav both jealou of each other !! Arnav truly loves khushi he thoughts scream that out loud !!! But what's with payal and shyam. And why did khushi became so sad. Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mitthdi,
awesome update..😛⭐️👏
iss party mai 2 ghayal premi hai..
# Akash and
# Sumer..

2nd one will have to work hard to get her trust and love and that's because of the very devil play boy..Shyam 😡

Akash ab tera kya hoga re ?

Arnav and Khushi ki baat hi nirali hai ..
still has this feeling ki Sumer ne kuchh toh share kiya hai Ananya ji ke saath apne "longotiya yaar" ke love interest ke baarein mai..😳

precap ...haaye Khushi kyoo ro rahi hai ?😭

thanks a lot for the update and for the pm too.
lots of love🤗
take care.

* reread it,😊
Arnav ki soch hamesha Khushi ki orhi jaati hai aur kyo na ho deewana jo hai. I loved the way he was waiting for his dream angle ..
Khushi toh hai hi pagal ...iss pyar ne nikamma bana ke rakh diya hai ..jab bhi zara si fursat mili khayaalon mai unke kho gayi..well yeh toh hona hi tha...
Arnav and Akash ki jo pehli mulakat haaye "ek phool 2 mali " wali baat ho gayi..but Payal a very wise girl control the situation ..in the car and in the party too..
Sumer ab kya karein bhai bhi nikla toh uss nikamme Shyam ka toh Payal iss wajah se khafaa hai aur ab kuchh kadiyaan mil rahi hai ..Sumer was in deep thoughts of Payal and for Payal..( pehle muje lagaa tha ki Payal Akash ko pasand karti hai but shaayad yeh jo Shyam hai wohi bichchhu banke kaanta hai Payaliya ko.) Payal shaayad baad mai gaati phire.." na na karke pyar tumhi se kar baithe."😆..yeh green monster jo hai woh apna rang dikhaayega..😳 kabhi yeh toh aapke haath mai hai.😆
Famous dialogue "Yeh tumne mere saath kya kar diya Khushi?" aur jo DM ko gharmandir mai sthaapit karnewala scene tha ...filmy hi tha but bas phool nahi barsa DM ke haarse...😆 ( total filmy lagta😆 but kauno baat nahi hamnein edit karke read kiya.😆)
Khushi ko kuchh gadbad lag rahi hai Akash ke badle badle se behavior se ...aur hurt & pain bhi dekha Ar ki eyes mai toh kya usko pataa chalega ki Akash ke mann mai Khushi ko laike kya bhaavnaayein hai?
Kyoo ro rahi hai aakhir khushi ? aisi kya baat ho gayi ki uski beautiful eyes se tears tapak rahein hai ? jawab bhi nahi de rahi Arnav ko!!!😲 hamaarein dil ko jald se jald shaanti mile issi liye continue soon.😆

Ab hum chalte hai...😆

take care.
love.




Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..


Like the Arhi relationship growing. .but precap dhows crying Khushi is sineone or some happen whicj make them far?..

Pl dont bring that situation. .


Payal and samar in this as a couple id it not with Akash
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Posted: 11 years ago
While I was reading all the chapters, one thing that was constantly buzzing in my head was that humaari bohot patne vaali hai. 😆 It was so obvious with how you have written the chapters that you love Shah Rukh Khan, just like I do. I still wonder how could the CVs make such a big mistake of Salman Khan. It should have been SRK all way. We do have a thing for abbrevaited names, haina? SRK, ASR... 😉

Now moving on... 😃

Chapter 1
: It was dreamy, it was filmy, it was super adorable. 😳 And gosh I love this Arnav! Seedha, suljha hua (well almost), dreamy, and prefect. :D I loved their first meet.. him seeing his angel for the first time. Plus, the description of Delhi is so apt, just one the many reasons to love this story even more. :)

Chapter 2: I loved the way you described Khushi's, Akash's and Payal's past history, their individual lives and their friendship both.I think all of us has that one friend who is extra protective of us, and sometimes we also step into that role.

Khushi's nervousness was so cute! They haven't even met and just the eye talk is doing all the talking? 😉😆

Each one of us somewhere has judged someone or the other. And the discovery that the other person is not what we thought he/she was is a thrill and education in itself.

I wish I was the girl he kissed. Haaye, mujhe koi Arnav Singh Raizada la dooo 😳 Especially yeh vala.. since he seems to have no qualms in kissing girls... okay, I'll shut up.

Chapter 3: The guy didn't know what hit him! Gun gunate hue akhiyaan lad gayyi!!! 😉 I absolutely love this song, and even while reading the lyrics I was humming it to myself. :D Khushi ne dekhte hi Laad Governor ka naam de diya...😆 Not that I blame her.

Chapter 4: I liked Anjali too, she is just like me- trying to hog her brother's time the moment he gets back. 😆 I love Khushi and Payal's bond. They are sisters they never had.

The element of old hindi songs endeared me to this story even more. i don't know a lot of old songs, but plentiful of them are so close to my heart. No rock shock, pop, jazz, hip hop can take their place, ever. 😃 Retro Arnavji is so attractive.😳

Highlight: Sumer. Need I say more? 😊


Will soon be back for other chapters. 😃 Lovely story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
can't wait for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow wow wow that was such a superb n an awesome update.

So Arnav snatched his girl from Aakash...feel bad for him..

So Shyaam had an affair with Payal?????...Shocking?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. but wish it was longer.
Anyways felt a little sad for Akash. Its not easy to deal with heartbreak for anyone.
Payal, what is her past?? Who is this Shyam and has he hurt her?? Looks like Sumer has fallen for Payal. One more love story in the making.
Arnav of course could not keep his hands off his love. Happy that he is showing his feelings out in the open and not care for the outer world.

Now precap is scary.

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