Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #2 [ Completed ]

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chitra

@chitrajay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Peek-a-boo

sorry Mints

for disappearing

This new year, I have a new resolution

DO NOT PROCRASTINATE!!!!😆

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

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chitra

@chitrajay

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

😲me me me me!!!!

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Wow...you do know how to build up the anticipation Mints!!! Loving every moment of this story...as usuall, the flow of events is superb! Muahhh!!!! ***Blowing air-kisses at you***👍🏼

Loved how you showed Khushi's nervousness and the natural anxiety she would feel...until now, her relationship with Arnav would have been really kept private, known just to them and her two besties and perhaps, Sumer?😉 They have managed to stay out of the public eye for a while now...and this party would certainly change that...I can so imagine how anxious she must be feeling...scared too...at stepping into a world different from her own. Even though she is no stranger at socialising for professional reasons, this is an entirely different ballgame. This time, its her personal and private life which would come under close scrutiny...hmmm, not easy at all...😕

Then, lets move on to Arnav...loved how you showed his "preparations'...ahemmm...busy busy man...no time for love? 😉 And I have to mention I liked how you have given "paper-space" to the other characters...Akash's feelings are not ignored...Payal and Sumer...aaahhh...have I been waiting patiently for this one? You bet, I have!!!😃 Finally!!!! And now you give us hints to Payal's mysterious past...involving Shyam, the dark one😉(pun fully intended), who also happens to be darling Sumer's cousin...horrors!!!!😲 I guess, roses must have thorns.. (I have to tell you, I really like Sumer...so pls give me enough of Sumer in every chapter you write)

Arnav and Khuhsi placing Devi Maiyya's idol in the pooja-ghar...haaye...can you get more symbolic than that? Filmy ho tum bhi, Mints!!!😆

And the precap ...that was interestinggg...why is she crying?

Beauutifulll...as usual👏👏👏

Edited by chitrajay - 11 years ago

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Res😊

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Mints, I love this story and I'm so glad you are back to regular updates!

I can feel why Khushi is so nervous as this is obviously a big event and for Arnav to insist on her presence obviously means that he wants to take their relationship to the next level. I absolutely love all your Arnav and Khushi moments - so sweet and romantic😊

Oh no, an evil Shyam😡 Hope Sumer finds out soon what's bothering Payal.

I'm a little nervous about the precap now - what happened that she's crying, and is it at the party?? There are so many thoughts running in my head!

Thanks for the PM, looking forward to the next chapter!

Edited by A_BA - 11 years ago

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@EchTee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

awesome chapter mints..

precap scary.. y she was crying..
continue soon

Edited by HUMII10592 - 11 years ago

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hadiqua

@adrastiathena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

cant wait! for the net update the pre cap is o intriguing👏

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

res

Loll sorry for late unres

I knw till nw aap use too hogye honge 😛

Back to update

Both khushi nd arnav was in same thoughts .. 🤔

Here khushi was thinking abt wat she wil do in his family function were as arnav had diff plans for her 🤔

Only dey wat future have for dem 😈

Waisa y is Akash being soo stubborn cnt he accept d fact khushi cn never be his 😔

Showing his grumpy attitude to khushi making her feel guilty😒

I m glad he went to d party nd saw d sparks of love btwn arnav khushi

Ufff d dress for both i m still drolling lolll first tym on khushi i m drolling like a mad 🤣

I like my flirty arnav he is sooo sweet . 😳

Wen wil he propose her dii I m waiting for dat eagerly

Waisa wats wid payal sumer nd shyam

Dis is toh sure both payal nd sumer like eachother 😊

Opposite attracts 😈

Bt d fact payal is hurt is nt understood clear it soon di

Waisa if payal is for sumer den wat abt akash poor he wil he be alone 😆

Lovd d update dii ❤️

Nd no need to take too much stresss 😡 Replies are nt running away 😆

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SPraba

@SPraba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Hey mints back with an update as promised and what an update it was. Arnav simply bowled over khushi and we see things brewing up between payal and sumer. I am sure shyam has something to do with payal's misunderstanding over Sumer.
But the precap why was khushi crying. Boy am curious to know why. Cant wait to read more

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Hey Mints another awesome chapter...I just love your Sumer...he is such a cute personality...so he is also feeling jealous after seeing AR and Payal together...he is also feeling something for Payal...I am happy...first I thought Payal is in love with AR but I think she likes Sumer...but I think something is went wrong in past which is bothering her and may be it is related to Shyam, Sumer's cousin... and she is comparing both of them...now Shyam is a mystery...how sweet the way they both got jealous after seeing each other with different kind of people...I don't know but I really feel happy when two people are in love and get jealous of nothing...must be a crazy thought but I love it...I love the way Arnav is mesmerized by Khushi's beauty...I loved both the outfits...he got jealous once he saw her hand in AR's hand...but he knew it that she loves him and will be with him...Loved her gift...I think Ananya also loves her...I loved her dialogue stop staring Arnav...and his dialogue...yeh tumne mere saath kya kar diya, Khushi...but Arnav beta you still have to deal with AR...who is a very good and dear friend of Khushi...thanks for the dedication dear😳... but I am scared of the pre-cap...as why she is crying...thanks for the PM. 😛

Edited by sunitikapoor - 11 years ago