Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #2 [ Completed ]

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Just came across this story! And im actually loving it, thoroughly. 😊

A simple,cute fairytale like love story of arnav-khushi, with a tinge of jealousy and mishaps.

Beautifully built, and I love your tough cookie yet caring arnav and sweet sweet khushi. Though my favourite character in here is the mad Sumer. This time its Akash whose smitten by Khushi and well, shyam's also there, in a negative role? ;)

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! update soon.

ps ~ have sent a buddy request, in case you pm. 😊

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Arnav's family love her...I hope their they live her enough for her to be their bahu...n I just hope no MU related to their status or feelings between them would crop up now...so a bit of PayPal's past revealed...n samar like her...

Aww lovely update...thanks for pm...

PS happy new year...

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

I'm absolutely thrilled to be included in your dedications 😳

Leaving us with such an intriguing precap... Not fair!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Did she overhear some random gossipmonger? Akash - Payal conversation about his feelings for Khushi?

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

beautiful update...preparing for the party...both of their appearance...his thinking of Khushi when his mom talk about his settling down...a lil bit of jealousy...flirting with her openly...marking his territory...then her gift to his parents...placing DM's idol in the mandir together...loved all of it...
and how Payal knows Shyam...so thats why she dislikes Sumer this much...I was wondering that...also I am juggling between Sumer & Akash...who will be the guy for Payal...looking forward for more...
what happened in the precap...why's Khushi crying???wanna read more...

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Oye buddy! Thanks for the special mention :)

And about the update! Poor people lost in the battle of relationship!

All are confused! But most of all the readers us! What with peek a boo about their pasts and the precap!

Lovely update! I feel for each nd every one but at different levels nd different emotions!

Cheers

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Lovely update...cant wait to read more.

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Superb update dear...glad to read that arnav realises that how deeply he feel for khushi and wants to take their relationship on a next level by marrying her...Aww how cute blushing khushi and flirty arnav...after seeing her in green attire ..He was completely mesmerized by her beauty...finally akash and arnav meets..i'm curious about payal and shayam matter..& i think sumer liked payal..what a teasing precap..continue soon..thanks for pm...

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shafqee80

@shafqee80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

sooo awesum ...loving d update...is akash only a friend in dis story to both .coz seems like even payal showed sum feelings toward sumer..

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Wonderful update...so many emotion going around...arnav and khushi, Akashi and khushi,aakash and payal and Sumer...in all these couple arnav and khushi are more like a couple...let's hope they realises their feeling ...loved it