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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Nice update
Loved it😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Very well written. Waiting for the whole team to meet at XYZ cousin's marriage.

Update soon & do PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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2nd chapter is really well..:)
soon taani gonna meet swayam or mayb gang 2..!!

luvly ..update soon n pm me plz :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3

rey
back from the resort, planning for the ganesh dance festival going on.everyone in the new atrium talking.( as i dont really care what evryone else inlcuding SS are upto, will concentrate only on the TR related part )

"so everything done?" sharon
" haan...waise tum sab jaanewaale ho kya? " aashi
" kaise yaar..yeh festival bhi overlap hoga tho..." simmi
"kahaan?" rey
" meri behen ki shaadi mein"
"KYA? what? " rey ...everyone looked at him . swayam patted him on his shoulder understandingly and continued," nahin rey...doosri cousin hain" rey was like ok' face," papa ne sab ko invitation bheja hain tho...i know yeh festival ke last din ke saath overlap kartha hain ..main soch rahaan tha ki uski baad hi jaaoo"
"tum sab ko bhi invitation mila hain kya?
"rey looking at the boys
"haan" nil... reys face confused.,"tumhaari kitni sisters hain?" to swayam
"what do you mean ki tum shaadi ke baad aaoge?" rinni to swayam
" tho? waise wahaan koi kaam tho nahin hota ki..."
"but still swayam shaadi hain. kitni..."
excitedly rinni
"oh please tum girls ab super excitement mat dikhao. kisika bhi shaadi ho yeh itne khush hote hain..seriously man.." vicky shaking his head to nil
girls vs boys start argguement and walking away
swayam to rey," kya hua? tumhaara face itna utar kyu gaya"
rey shook his head," batana kya baat hain?"
"swayam mujhe invitation nahin mila..."
swayam made a kya look," i mean mujhe pata hain ki tumhaare dad ko mujhpar gussa aaya tha par mujhe laga ki sab sort out hogaya ..."
"nahin rey maybe confusion mein miss hogaya hoga. but tum itns upset kyun lag rahe ho?"
rey
shook his head and said," kuch nhain. chal."and started moving .
"rey...tumhe jaana hain?" swayam . rey shook his head but unconvincingly- swayam raised his eyebrows and asked," sure?" rey shook his head saying not sure.
"chalo meri taraf se tum invited ho. aakhir meri bhi sister hain"
" haan tumhaari hi sister hain"
rey to himself .
seeing him quiet, swayam," kya hain rey? kuch kahaan tune? "
rey ," im confused bas. " and sat down on that centre stuff ( whatever it is)
swayam sitting down next to him and putting one of his legs up , his bag kept down," taani bhi hogi. poori family mein wo youngest hain tho sabki favourite bhi hain." he stopped and looked at rey still quiet ," tumhe usse milna hain?"
rey looked bac at him," kya usse mujhe milna hain?"
"thats besides the point. kya tumhe usse dekhne ka mann hain?"

rey smiled indicating an yes..." tho chalo. yeh festival ke baad chalthe hain"
"nahi yaar. i dont think ki mujhe jaana chahiye, not because tumhaare dad ne invitation nahin diya but mujhe nahin lagtha ki taani khush hogi "and lifting his hand to stop swayam from replying,"its okay , in fact i know ki wo comfortable nahin hogi..maybe isiliye uncle ne mujhe invite nahin kiya. ek minute ke liye laga ki ...par maine promise kiya hain usse door rehne ka tho ..."
swayam shrugged his shoulder," your wish.. par mere taraf se tum invited ho" both of them smiled at each other.
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(for convenience imagine college as in TBP)
taani walking in the new college corridor with the mobile in her hand," main bhai se poochoon? ya nahin? " bag slung as usual over the shoulder, throwing up her hands now and then," pechle 5 ghante se yahin soch rahin ho" she scolded herself," phone karna hain tho karlo..." the phone rang making her jump
"hello bhai"

"hello taani! bhai? kaun bhai" voice came from behind her. she turned to see another girl cutting the ring," mera phone tha" smile
"oh...mujhe laga mera hain.sorry " smile taani
" r u okay?"
" haan main teek hoon"
"waise main congrajulate karna chahrahin thi ..i heard ki tumhaari project ka proposal accept hogaya and ki its very good"
excitedly
"achha wo...thanks. haan aise hi..." embarassed at the excitement
"aur mujhe tumhari help bhi chahiye tha mere project main if you dont mind"
"haan bilkul"
"and main tumhe sorry bhi bolna chahrahin thi"
"sorry kisliye?"
" generally tumhe ignore karne karne keliye"
taani laughed,"its okay, mujhe aadat hain..." she replied .they were joined by three more ppl- 2 guys and one girl.

The girl screaming," Natasha tum yahaan ho. hum tumhe hi dhoond rahe the," catching sight of taani," hi taani , congrats . suna ki ..."

"tumhaara project proposal bohot achha tha" one of the guys completed.

Taani smiled little embarrassed at the unusual compliments," thanks"

"ok listen, " the guy continued looking at the other three," now someone help me out- mujhe saare colleges ke list jo fest ke liye chahiye wo mil nahin rahaan hain. aur tum," hiting Natasha on the shoulder," tumne list banaya ki kya kya preparations karna hain ," he continued looking at the other girl. She shook her head saying No

Taani felt nostalgic as looked at them talking about the fest which was comming up soon "mere paas hain" spoke up without thinking.

"kya?"

"wo saare preparations and activities ke list jo fest mein karne hote hain" and as they continued to look questioningly at her,"main GS thi old college mein."

While three of them showed open surprise at this, the guy who was doing most of the talking said,"then great" smiling in relief ," time saved. main tumhaara naam kisi committee main daaldoonga college fest ke liye ya phir coordination ke liya tum mere saath kaam karo. Okay?"

"NO" taani s voice came out unintentionally sharp . all of them looked at her in surprise."matlab," she continued in forced normal voice," main aapko list dedoongi, mujhe aur kuch nahin karna hain"

" but why? Dekho, time itna kam hain aur agar tumhe ismein experience hain tho mera aadha kaam kum hojaayega"She looked at them, shook her head and started walking off.

"cmon, be a sport taani. Problem kya hain?" the guy asked again surprised at her sudden change in mood.

She asked herself the same Q," haan taani, problem kya hain? " she had a glimpse of rey teaching her how to organise stuff the first time she had become AGS. Her face softened at the memory and again she shook herself mentally," problem yeh hain ki tumhe sab kuch rey ki yaad dilaatha hain. but aisa nahin chalega.itna stupid nhain behave karsakthi."

And she turned , walked straight nback to the guy ," main aapko list mail kardoongi aur koi help chahiya tho please batadena"

The guys smiled in relief and showed one thumbs up.Taani smiled back and left them.

"kitni weird ladki hain" Natasha said

"but cute hain" the guy added

"haan weirdly cute hain" they laughed

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taani s mobile rang-SWAYAM.

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Please let me know if its too long. thanks for replies. pm later


Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
nice update😛
want taarey meet soon pl z
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm buddy..read all d parts at once..
would surely luv to read more of it..
so plss cn u pm me d further updates..
n ya update soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Wonderful part
Reyam part was too gud

Updt soon n PM me

Sry dear like buttin is not working
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nice update😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice update. Waiting for TR meeting in Shaadi. Please update soon & thnx for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome update ...
taarey thinking each other ...lovely
update soon ...pm me

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