Wading Through Fantasy (An Arshi SS) - Ch 5 Pg 34 (Completed) - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful.. Different & unique concept..Loved it

Loved how Khushi & Shyam tried bring sense in the Raizada's ..For a moment i was shocked to know that Shaym was married to Khushi..

Poor Garima,She has gone through so much...

All the emotions were very beautifully described ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chandini chowk, with the name of the place I thought it was Khushi but nope it was Anjali.Shyam, he keeps meeting Anjali again, is he stalking a rich lady or has true feelings?
Arnav caught Khushi just in time to save her from the fall, it was superb..
Loved the beginning.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Past leaves it's impact on people's lives for long.So, was with Arnav and Anjali, being through the broken marriage of their parents, both of them were scared to be in any relationship fearing to suffer similar pain again.
But then heart won, Anjali got the man of her dreams, Shyam Manohar Jha, a gentleman as he has appeared to be.He doesn't make her feel like a handicapped instead encourages and makes her feel beautiful as she is.
Arnav too had never been serious in any relationship but a certain Chamkili who hasn't even introduced herself to him has captured his thoughts completely.He has even given her a nickname, so unlike him.
What did Khushi try to stop at that temple?
She was walking towards Anjali-Shyam, did she try to stop the engagement?
I fear Shyam to broke Anjali's heart by betrayal, if it's so Arnav won't leave him.
Then why was Shyam shocked seeing Khushi?Why was he smiling to himself when he had to take the jewels given by Nani?
That was awesome chapter.
Egar to know the next.
Will go through next part right away.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The reason Khushi felt scared under Arnav's gaze and kept running away from him all the time, she was married and is loyal to her morals.
But why girls are to be questioned everytime? Just as Anjali is being accused now..
Without her knowing Anjali has been the reason of Khushi's sorrow and is hated by her.But what was her fault? Just that she came to love a wrong person.
And Khushi, she too has been with a wrong person, she isn't to be blamed either.No any woman can see her husband with other woman, Can she?
All the Raizada members are hurt, Arnav for not being able to protect his sister and being affected by a married girl.But he didn't realise that she was married, didn't she put on the sindoor and mangalsutra?
Nani, couldn't protect her family from facing the same incident twice.Mamiji was feeling guilty remembering her words.Mamaji has been helpless too.
Everybody is dealing with their own misery.
Shyam, hope he doesn't escape from there.Not just Anjali, he has betrayed and hurt everyone present there.
He has to pay for his deeds, ushe toh Surf Excel ki dhulai bhi kam padegi..!!
That was another brilliant update.
Well written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bhabhi..!!
Phew, that's all I remember right now.
So, Khushi-Shyam are siblings, I don't have to feel sad for anything now.
I had been cursing Shyam till now as he had been the reason for pain and tears of all present there.
But, at the end of the chapter, that Shyam has been a loving brother who played the role of father for Khushi and also supported her in the plan to make them understand the value of woman and not always the mistake is hers and she isn't to be blamed everytime like this society does.
Loved the way, Arnav defended his sister.His love and respect for his sister, has always been my favourite part.It's heart-warming.
Another Brilliant update.
Loved it..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read the entire story.
It was amazing.
Everything was brilliantly potrayed. Loved every bits of it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ss
i loved it
it was different and awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a different take to the whole IPK scenario. The skeletal framework was still there yet you managed to induce a freshness to it, one that made me go through all the chapters in a jiffy.


For me, this story shall be about the following things:
1. The use of the word chamkili for Khushi by Arnav. Have never seen this, and was justified quite well.

2. Equal importance to the 4 characters. Never did the balance sway towards the more popular characters and I'm happy that maintained your promise of this story being about Arnav, Khushi, Shyam and Anjali.

3. The suspense. 5 chapters was all there was to this story, yet the intrigue was substantial, and the twist thrown in confounded me.

4. Garima. The woman did not feature in this one, but it was all for her, isn't it? I loved for a fact that unlike the CVs of the show, her place held importance and her victimization and subsequent redemption was well shown.

Loved it!

P.S. You should write some more😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Eccentrica


P.S. You should write some more😊

I second that.
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Posted: 11 years ago

And I have been saying that for so long but...😭

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