Wading Through Fantasy (An Arshi SS) - Ch 5 Pg 34 (Completed)

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Coffee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

That was really nice... I hope you post an Epilogue too!

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samarablog

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

this is sweet..am reading the first chapter and happy to go back to arhi world..

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kdsubs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Gita - right? You are still Mamiji in my mind 😉.

I knew you could write! And how! Well done indeed 👏. Musings has always been one of my favourites, and i love this tale of yours too.

Ok, i did guess part-way thru chapt 3 where you were going (comes from reading so much Agatha Christie and Anne Perry - nothing you let tell) but you left me wondering about Mamiji. Her expressions, her guilt, her twinge of memory wasn't fully explained to my satisfaction. Details please?

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Finally ...long long over due...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95786802

Comment to chapter 5-

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Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Gita...honestly girl you are an amazing writer👏,

Thanks a lot Vandu for recommendation ...

For a change Shyam is a good human being and I liked that...

When I read first part I was wondering what was going on ? Jhansi ki rani Anjali...😳

Anjali and Shyam's first meeting in Chandni chauwk...

Arnav at coffee shop and was in spell

He named her Chamkili now that's very cute.

Shyam's proposal for marriage..

Anjali and Shyam's engagement ...

Khushi's entry as Mrs. Jha...

And the realisation...

Garima had suffered a lot but loved the way Jha siblings fought for her ...

Here I loved Mamaji's character ...

Maamiji Kyoo khayaalon Mai Khoyi hui hai ?

Gita ...can you please write an epilogue ?

It will be our pleasure if you do so...

Please.

Thanks a lot dear for wonderful SS.

Take care.

Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago

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canvasdreamz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

It is so different from most of the Arshi stories im reading..the twist was mindblowing..nvr xpected it.althoogh khushis dialogs were sounding bit familiar but nvr cud guess the real relatn between her n shyam.liked the fact that khushi managed to stage the whole play without flinching bearing the full wrath of Arnav..Wud love to have seen a full fleged arshi romance blossomimg in bangalore...but u ended it😭

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IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

wow.. liked all the twists & turns..

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Just read the entire story. It shows us that there is always two sides to a coin. Just looking from one angle does not give the entire picture.

Loved the way you connected names like Rani Saheba and Chamkili to this story. You are an amazing writer and please do keep writing.

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arpitasharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

*blinks* *blinks* *clears throat* Is there a sequel coming up? *puppy dog eyes* *blinks*

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Jignasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#350

That was simply brilliant at times I was scratching my head with a lot of What the's coming out of my mouth. Read it one go and was left wanting more...Loved it you should definitely continue this! 😊