Aaslok FF : Beintiha.....part 15 updated page 139( depth of love) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
nice update
shlok cAncelled the project
now he is telling to make coffee
continue soon😊
Edited by niki795 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
amazing update..😳loved it..
shlok is asking astha to make coffee for them.. Bechari astha😆
nd shlok cancelled the deal for astha.. Dats was swt of him
plz update next part soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
awesome.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
great, another good chapter...i just loved that shlock sent her to the car and cancelled the deal...so sweet...and im glad she was angry at him and prepared to quit over it...and your aastha is so cute...
awaiting next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update dear!!!Thanks for sharing and PM!!!Loved it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the PM, great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
You need to put more effort into editing your pieces of work.
They are riddled with grammatical errors and many sentences do not even make sense.

Ask people on this forum to proofread your stories, I am sure many will oblige

Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Roshni
as always loved it.❤️.im really enjoying the story right now..Its going in right pace..well done👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Smart shlok...
Make the coffee for shlok aastha...😆
Superb update...
It was very nice...

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