Aaslok FF : Beintiha.....part 15 updated page 139( depth of love) - Page 10

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaatkiRani
You need to put more effort into editing your pieces of work.
They are riddled with grammatical errors and many sentences do not even make sense.

Ask people on this forum to proofread your stories, I am sure many will oblige

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thanks buddy i will be careful next time... sorry for mistakes

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved it dear

oh love sparks are visible...

beautiful and cute

lets see how the romance is going to stir up😉😉

keep it up dear...👏

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Ziva01

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely updt

Hmmm so Astha is makin coffee for both of them 😳

thanks of the pm

stay blessed rab rakha

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update thank you, he wants Astha to make him coffee

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RaatkiRani

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi,

You have used incorrect adjectives throughout your story. Please ask someone to proof read your story before you post it.

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaatkiRani
Hi,
You have used incorrect adjectives throughout your story. Please ask someone to proof read your story before you post it.
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thnx dear i will correct next time

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks for pm but i am not following shlok astha stories coz i hav'nt watched the serial

but i do read all arjun sakshi stories

i am sure ur this story must be good any ways thanks for pm

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Hanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Coffee time! Cant wait for the next update!

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Mona55

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice update waiting for next one

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..optimist..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Roshanii!!

Read the first five parts!! 😊

Very nice and interesting 👏

Will read the next parts soon!

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