~Arhi OS ~ Finding Solace ~

wow it was so good.

nope not at all mushy gushy
but sure touched the right cords
he got it finally didnt he
hurting her hurts him more
so he stopped and just gave in to his love
wonder why she was pushing him
but thats not relevant

Beautifully written ash!

From their pov,its so evident that they are deeply in love with each other. .

Just curious to know what made khushi leave arnav at a point of time. .

Loved arnav's method to hurt khushi. . Jealous khushi or arnav is my fav. .

Loved arnav's concern when he saw hurt in her eyes. .

When khushi closed her eyes so that arnav wil be there in her dreams. . Aww. . My heart went to that gal. .

Last conversation was cute. .

Loved your second attempt also crazy gal. .

Do bring out more ideas and do share it with me. .

When i first went through the os,i really thought u are planning to write somethn about future generation, aarav and ally. . Lol

do let me knw why khushi left hm. .may be a second part . . ;-)

It was beautiful.
I just love the way u described arnav and khushi thoughts.

And atlast he realise that he love khushi.

Awesome!

Hey, u r back with another one, I was going to send u message asking when u were going to write another one for us, and there it was beautifully written...I love how u give us both their perspectives, the emotions were written very well, u can feel the pain each of them r going through, and hurt both of them feeling, and I love how u write the little things that makes me smile, like the "wake up sleepy head" that was really cute, and the whole time I was reading it, I was waiting to see what happen that Arnav was soo hurt that he was trying to hurt khushi, so u should write a part 2 to this, abt their love life before and why khushi had to leave Arnav. All together that was really good, u should start a ff or an ss, u have great sense of writing. Will wait to read more from u :)

Originally posted by: mssravya

Hey, u r back with another one, I was going to send u message asking when u were going to write another one for us, and there it was beautifully written...I love how u give us both their perspectives, the emotions were written very well, u can feel the pain each of them r going through, and hurt both of them feeling, and I love how u write the little things that makes me smile, like the "wake up sleepy head" that was really cute, and the whole time I was reading it, I was waiting to see what happen that Arnav was soo hurt that he was trying to hurt khushi, so u should write a part 2 to this, abt their love life before and why khushi had to leave Arnav. All together that was really good, u should start a ff or an ss, u have great sense of writing. Will wait to read more from u :)

Wow loved it, you portrayed their emotions so beautifully, but was wondering if there would be a part 2?