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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

wow it was so good.

emotions described so well...

v can never live away from our love,how much we try..

can v have its second part..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

nope not at all mushy gushy
but sure touched the right cords
he got it finally didnt he
hurting her hurts him more
so he stopped and just gave in to his love
wonder why she was pushing him
but thats not relevant

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully written ash!

From their pov,its so evident that they are deeply in love with each other. .

Just curious to know what made khushi leave arnav at a point of time. .

Loved arnav's method to hurt khushi. . Jealous khushi or arnav is my fav. .

Loved arnav's concern when he saw hurt in her eyes. .

When khushi closed her eyes so that arnav wil be there in her dreams. . Aww. . My heart went to that gal. .

Last conversation was cute. .

Loved your second attempt also crazy gal. .

Do bring out more ideas and do share it with me. .

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

When i first went through the os,i really thought u are planning to write somethn about future generation, aarav and ally. . Lol

do let me knw why khushi left hm. .may be a second part . . ;-)

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arshina223

@arshina223

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

It was beautiful.
I just love the way u described arnav and khushi thoughts.

And atlast he realise that he love khushi.

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome!

Khushi's emotions were nicely described!

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sravya

@mssravya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey, u r back with another one, I was going to send u message asking when u were going to write another one for us, and there it was beautifully written...I love how u give us both their perspectives, the emotions were written very well, u can feel the pain each of them r going through, and hurt both of them feeling, and I love how u write the little things that makes me smile, like the "wake up sleepy head" that was really cute, and the whole time I was reading it, I was waiting to see what happen that Arnav was soo hurt that he was trying to hurt khushi, so u should write a part 2 to this, abt their love life before and why khushi had to leave Arnav. All together that was really good, u should start a ff or an ss, u have great sense of writing. Will wait to read more from u :)

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mssravya
Hey, u r back with another one, I was going to send u message asking when u were going to write another one for us, and there it was beautifully written...I love how u give us both their perspectives, the emotions were written very well, u can feel the pain each of them r going through, and hurt both of them feeling, and I love how u write the little things that makes me smile, like the "wake up sleepy head" that was really cute, and the whole time I was reading it, I was waiting to see what happen that Arnav was soo hurt that he was trying to hurt khushi, so u should write a part 2 to this, abt their love life before and why khushi had to leave Arnav. All together that was really good, u should start a ff or an ss, u have great sense of writing. Will wait to read more from u :)

woah! your response blew me! thanx!!

i never thought smone would actually want/wait for me to write...

oh dear, the lil mystery i created abt the past was not intentional, if i am frank, then i was actually relieved that i am ending this story at a point where i dont have to present what happened in the past...my sole intention was to challenge myself to write smthing emotional, which would highlight what my protagonists are going through at the moment.

apart from this, i m studying, though this cannot be an excuse, but i barely get time to sleep, let alone write a ss/ff !

it really encourages me to write when i get positive response from my readers, but i dont think i will do justice either to the story or the readers if i leave it undone...

plus, its a DISTRACTION and i cannot afford that! lol