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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#631

I am blushy blushy

You are good at writing intimate scenes.

Teach me ❤️

But the end.

Arnav.

Grrr...

He still has a lot of repenting to do.

-_________________________-

I LAU YOU.

YOUR DESCRIPTIONS WERE BEAUTIFUL.

I'M STILL BLUSHY BLUSHY ❤️

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samaz95

@samaz95

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#632

I have a really bad feeling about this!:(

Can't wait for the next update- can there be a chance Khushi might get pregnant after this?! :O

Doesn't look so good for them .

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Amazing story i nevr hate arnav in any ff lk hate in this story he so blinded in sister lov that he totaly ignore the truth hw he badly treat kushi i wonder what happen next morning again he wil abuse kushi u writen al emotions of arnv n kushi vry well but am confuse about mohit raina chrctr anyway great story tanx for pm

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Zee

@aamir18

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Thank you so much for this comment and the compliment as well! I am absolutely LOVING the different takes on the last update -- some readers are disappointed, some unsure, some glad. 😃 Thank you so much for reading and your support!

Also, you should know, my family roots are from Kashmir! And the title to your FF drew me in instantly 😳 I just started reading, but you are unbelievably talented. I am loving your story so far.

Originally posted by: likeadesigirl
I'm not sure how I feel about the fact that they actually had sex. I love the way you described it, but I can't reconcile the fact that I too, feel like Arnav should have backed off. Granted, they were both drunk. His last confession nearly broke my heart- I honestly hope that he begs for forgiveness when he finally figures out the truth.

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Thanks for the pm. I understand the reason behind arnav's behaviour but if he accuses her of seducing him, i will never forgive arnav.

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HIPKKND

@HIPKKND

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Hoping to get PM for this..will be tracking this story now..:)

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#637

apology for what ? he realized her innocence or just happened under the influence of alcohol ? the morning after without alcohol is waiting there .

loved the update .their passion and your way of expressing it .

thank you for mentioning my name

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#638

omg.. he is going to blame it on her next morning.. waiting..

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#639

Thanks for the update Zee. I don't know what the outcome will be of their alcohol induced actions. If Arnav says Khushi seduced him, I'll throw something at him for sure. Khushi should not have given in so easily when she knows Arnav doesn't trust her and refuses to love her. But she surrendered due to her drunken state and desired to be loved by the man that she loves and is wedded to.