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sarahjac

@sarahjac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#621

*new reader**

I came across this story today and i am totally hooked

The starting chapters were heart wrenching...Khushi: a simple sweet innocent girl ruined by unchecked hatred

Arnav: no man has the right to treat a woman like he treats his wife. He may detest her but still there is no way the verbal and physical abuses can be justified.

Coming back to the current track, the New York trip, Khushi again wins over my heart. The girl is so pure that you would actually want to wish her all the happiness in the world. It was so heart warming to see her find pleasures in a library, on a beach, in simple things that life has to offer.

Arnav on the other hand, is stuck in an all consuming blackhole. We don't realise what we've got until we've lost it forever. No matter how much he apologises, can he be truly forgiven?

Now this brings me to the night they spent together, I hope Arnav wakes up first and realises what he has done.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#622

Dhamaka Update! I am wondering if A meant what he said towards the end! It'll be a delight to read about the morning scene now, and how they cope with this new development! Continue soon!

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#623

Beautiful description of their love...but khushi doesn't deserve ''khushi...i hate that i cannot love you''...
Poor khushi will be broken...and hope so they don't regret this.

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Awesome update finally Arnav apologizes waiting 4 their reactionz update soon

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#625

A tastefully done scene.
Arnowji , mera Profile Pic nahi dekha? Condoms bhi Ab main yaad karaaun?
On a serious note, you are one of the VERY few writers whose narration is flawless, and the writing leaves an impact for long on your mind.

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#626

This was beautiful .😊

I am glad they let their arming guards down for tonight but still under the spell of alcohol and what will happen after that, that is a different story.

He apologized for his misdeeds but still fully not there yet.

Khushi is experiencing What any wife can but poor soul doesn't know the length of it yet.

Thnx for the PM.

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zehr_akhan

@zehr_akhan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#627

Amazing story pls continue khushi suffer alot plz easy for her now update sooon love this story beautufully written

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45678

@45678

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#628

Read up whole do today. It's simply amazing. Fab. Please pm me the next one.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#629

First of all I loved your note and thank you so much for mentioning me in your note, much appreciated Hun.

I hope your exams went well, no worries on the delay.

Congrats on writing your longest ever chapter, a big round of applause and you my darling deserve a pat on the back, lol.

The update has left me speechless and it was so unexpected, I honestly did not expect Arnav and Khushi to actually become so close and sleep together.

However I will admit there were some plus points to the update, firstly Arnav apologising, secondly Khushi not giving into the kiss at the start and thirdly Arnav was quite considerate and did ask her if she was ok.

The big question is what exactly is he apologising for, because two sorry's are not going to make up for all the abuse and insults he has thrown at her in the past.

Anyways as a writer I will certainly praise you for writing the mature content to perfection, it was written so beautifully and intimately.

Both Arnav and khushi's point of views were written and expressed amazingly well,

Coming to Arnav's confession at the end, it's just so heart breaking even though Khushi heard him I don't think she will remember.

It's a shame Arnav is so going to regret the night as he was so drunk, please warn us beforehand in the next update if we will need tissues for Khushi's heart break and the French language I will be using towards Arnav, lol.

Wonderful writing and a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago