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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the updates Zee! I can imagine hoe beautiful Khushi would have looked. Funny how the Arnav who reluctantly took Khushi to NY with him, is now possessively keeping her at arms reach or within his arms. He loves his wife despite stating that he hates her very existence. Khushi is also falling for her husband once again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh update Oh update
Where art thou Oh update 😆

I like your new banner
Can't wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my god!!!!! I read it all at one go..outstanding... Please pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read dis story now...i wish to c arnav repenting a lot n khushi nt frgivng him..n wen vl d second hero come in d pictr
hope to c d nxt update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...
please give Arnav the brains to cross check his assumptions...




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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all 11 parts just now...brought tears to my eyes...
Seriously wish i could go into the story,hold Arnav by the shoulders,rattle him and make him see reality...
Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
please please make Arnav see sense before it is too late. He cannot break khushi like this - if this goes on this will be the death of the spirit of 'khushi'
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Posted: 11 years ago
i unusually woke up 6 am in the mrng, now its 9 am here , finished reading 11 chapters in one go , ok i know i suck , i should be really ashamed for not giving a try to one of the amazingly written story , i feel ashamed for not encouraging of one the closest friends of mine on IF who is also a brilliant writer !!
but as a new reader of this story can i give a hug??? 🤗 🤗 🤗 , and i prefer to give comments here as a reader , i just pretend i dont know you😆

ok i was bit confused abt the role of mohit in this story , at first i thought you put him in shyam's role but later realized he was not!
my favourite chapter in 11 chapters is the first one , IT WAS BEAUTIFUL ," To taste the sweetness of God's tears clinging to her fragrant skin with a parted mouth " , I cannot get over this line , IT WAS SUCH AN AMAZING METAPHOR ,

and i hate arnav in this story , totally 🤔 , just like i did in pandorasbox😳 ,
i just want to kill him for saying such awful things to khushi , i nearly imagined killing him for not sitting beside her in flight and for allotting another room ffor her as he thought it was shameful to him , I HATE HIM 😵 , urm but i love barun 😳 LOL 😆

the first thing i love in serendipity is your narration , its just BRILLIANT , im so proud to be a firend of one amazing writer 🤗

loved every chapter, eagerly waiting for the update<33

P.S my like button isntworking, i will like each and everychapter once that stupid thing works!! love you loadss <333


Edited by deepz_SI.BS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey i have just started reading this story and i guess its also time to raid your index because i am loving it !

Ill be back for more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
A/N: Okay. So I got some of the most amaaazing feedback on this last update Lungi dance lungi dance lungi dance 🥳 Guys. Seriously. PLEASE. If you're reading, I am begging you to leave some form of a constructive comment for me to ponder over. I have around 70 people on my PM list, yet I don't see many of them like the post or even comment. It's a lot of effort, so please do try to leave me something 😳 Even if it is 'youre a horrible writer', I'll take it. Also, I am sorry for the length of these updates. I have exams next week and I'm having trouble managing.

PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU THINK THE PACE IS TOO FAST. I'm really nervous about this. I feel as though I am rushing it. Please also note, this is not proofread.

Today, I recommend one of, if not, THE best SS I have read till date. You MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST read A Girl Named Khushi.

~Serendipity~
"an accidental discovery"


Chapter Twelve: Consideration
949 words.

"Arnav Singh Raizada? What a pleasant surprise!"

Arnav winced at the disruption of the high-pitched voice he so strongly detested. Meena Kapoor. Daughter of his regarded and New York situated business associate, Anand Kapoor. She was uncouth, conceited, and frisky -- yet a measly twenty years old. It didn't stop her from approaching him at every social function he attended in the East Coast, begging him for attention and offering him champagne despite being underage. He loathed her, yet the credit for AR's every deal with the successful and respected Anand Kapoor went solely to the spoilt daughter leering in his direction.

Arnav reluctantly removed his hand from Khushi's soft grasp in order to face and banish the unbearable imp.

"Aah. Ms. Kapoor. Fancy seeing you here" he said, tightening his grasp around Khushi's waist. As oblivious his persistent admirer was to the insolence in his voice, the soft gesture didn't go unnoticed and her nose flared in rage.

"Arnav," she offensively hissed. "Do introduce me to your... your guest"

"How rude of me. Meet my wife, Mrs. Khushi Raizada"

Khushi squirmed as Meena assessed her up and down, her nose crinkling in disgust as if she were the filthy rubbish in a gold mine. Feeling uncomfortable, she played with the straps of the dress and stared at the color of her toenails, praying to god that she wasn't proving to be an embarrassment to her husband.

"Well, I'm sure Ms. Khushi here wouldn't mind if I steal you for a dance, would she?"

Without the slightest indecision or uncertainty, Meena extended her hand out in invitation to Arnav. He hesitated. As much as he desired to stay as far as possible from this two faced, arrogant brute, he knew how important her father was to his business. Not agreeing to this dance could lose him the most essential deal he had settled on this trip -- the entire world knew to what extent Anand Kapoor doted on his only daughter. Arnav would have to comply. He forced himself to smile and stiffly nod at the nuisance ruining his evening, hoping Khushi would be able to recognize that his hands were tied.

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As Meena draped his arm tightly around her waist, Arnav's gaze steadied on Khushi uncertainly shifting through the enormous crowd, every set of eyes settling on her dazzling splendor. She sat on a lounger in the far, hidden corner and he finally fell at ease, deciding to satisfy Ms. Kapoor with some casual conversation so she'd leave him alone for the rest of the evening.

"Well Arnav, I can't say I am not hurt. Where was my invitation?"

"The marriage was unexpected, Meena. I'm truly apologetic if I hurt your sentiments"

He thought back to the night he had lugged Khushi up the steps of the mandir that had once been her sanctuary. He thought about how he brashly filled her maang and hauled her as they circled around the crackling flames. He thought back to how he abandoned her to appease the rage of his family and spat at her face when he exposed the truth behind their sham of a marriage. He thought of her trying time and time again to clarify the reality of Shyam's deceit, pleading him to believe her and finally losing hope when he refused.

"With all due respect, as your friend, I'm not sure what you're doing with a woman of... that status"

Arnav Singh Raizada felt the most indescribable rage at the witch unconcernedly insulting his wife while swaying in his arms. He took a moment to observe Meena Kapoor that evening -- her sequined dress tight, flashy and revealing, her legs bared and her face caked with foundation. And then he thought of the woman who accompanied him this evening -- simple, elegant, graceful and demure. Meena could not even dream of being as lovely as Khushi. How dare she question and ridicule her so blatantly?

Control Arnav. Control.

He considered the millions he had invested in Anand Kapoor's contract and forced a chuckle at Meena's insult.

"The marriage was unavoidable Ms. Kapoor. We cannot all be blessed with women as enchanting as yourself"

She chortled and tightened her hold around Arnav, resting her head on his shoulder and assuring him that is wasn't too late for them. Arnav felt sick as he thought of his beautiful wife sitting in a far corner waiting anxiously for his return, and he shrugged Meena off his body in an attempt to distance himself.

"Meena, is your father here? I needed to go over the details of a very important deal with him"

She leaned into him once again and whispered seductively into his ear, "a marriage proposal, Arnav? I might just be greatest deal of your life." His stomach churned in discomfort as her teeth grazed the skin of his earlobe, all his coherent thoughts focused on whether Khushi would be watching them or not.

Thankfully, the inevitable grimace that spread across his face went unnoticed as Meena led him to the bar where Anand Kapoor was thoroughly enjoying his drink. As they walked in his direction, Arnav tried to persuade himself that Khushi meant absolutely nothing and Kapoor's business could not be risked by a temporary marital arrangement. He tightened the hold around Meena's hand and feigned a pleasant smile as he congratulated Anand on raising such an attractive daughter and graceful dance partner. Neither thought it important to reveal the news of his recent marriage as the elderly gentleman approvingly nodded at their interlocked hands.

After sharing pleasantries with the remarkable businessman and accepting a whiskey with gratitude, he turned to quickly check that Khushi was alright, nearly crushing his glass in rage at what he saw before him.

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Edited by aamir18 - 9 years ago

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