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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Chap 10 - Awesome update...Wow Khushi dressed beautifully waiting 4 Arnav's reaction

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Just discovered the story and read all chapters in one go
I can only say that I love the way you write and portray feelings
But I am so verrry sorry for Khushi
Nobody sees her real suffering
How can people be living with her in the same howse and not see how she is disapearing in front of their eyes
Even her mother does not call any more
What kind of mother is that
If I were t get maried and my mother came to know that I was like that all heal woul break loose for those who hurt me

Why does Khushi have to get fury like this all the time?
In my opinion a simple redemption track will not be enough
I hope that...
I don't even know what I wish. I wish for a strong Khushi. For her to learn that she is not at fault here, that she did noting wrong
For me education is the key to our independence
Want for Khushi to be independent and strong but not to transform into Arnav

He is treating her with less consideration than garbage
He does not deserve a happy ending

Sorry for all these rambelings
I can very honestly say that I live your story and the way you write
Just wish Khushi and women in General would not always be the powerless and the hurt ones
Can't wait for the next update

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Chap 11 - Superb update..Wow they r dancing together...Update soon

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Shameless promoting? Hamesha!

Please check out my newest OS, Forty.

Thank you for reading!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3929489/arnav-and-khushi-os-forty-17

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago

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sarapersepolis

@sarapersepolis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

brilliant story i wish to see a strong kushi in your future updates

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Luna

@luv_panipuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

just found this and read all the chapters in one go.. loved it.beautifully written. please accept my buddy request and pm me whenever you update. and please update soon.

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

How can Arnav still be blind to her innocence? Even though he is willing to relent just a bit yet it is clothed in words of revenge. He uses his brains only in his office obviously!

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: addictedx53
How can Arnav still be blind to her innocence? Even though he is willing to relent just a bit yet it is clothed in words of revenge. He uses his brains only in his office obviously!

IKR

Like seriously Arnav where did your big business tycoon brain go?

Come on have some common sense and try to connect the dots

Edited by crazyforsarun - 11 years ago

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Hi...just read all the chaps n absolutely love the command u have of the language, the way u use the words to twist the plot n characters...plz send me pms for ur future updates!!😃