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shah.1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

interesting let see what this trip brought for them
may be khushi become strong
but arnav behavior I hate it

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@.Boss.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Good effort. But why is khushi so weak? Why is she putting up with all the crap from arnav? I hate to see women in submissive roles, because I am a woman as well. But I do understand that this is your story, a fiction and I must admit that I like it as well. Arnav better repent hard. I want to see him on his knees, vulnerable. Sardonic, yet true.

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rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Interesting!

Everything is done for Di as he can just bear her presence but does not like others appreciating her!

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

thanks for the pm
I hate this arnav for troubling the poor girl so much

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

this ff is heart wrenching i am waiting for the day when arnav's know the turth and he will die the same day like kushi right now...!

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Shilpa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Thanks for the pm. Good update. Anjali atleast you made a good thing by checking with the organiser. Its because of that khushi can atleast roam around the city. Continue soon.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

loved the way is stealing those few minutes and enjoying in her surroundings.. khushi wants to enjoy this week in new york as she have to go back to prison again.. really want her to have a nice time.. arnav for your di sake leave khushi alone.. she will be more happy alone than being with you who just does work of getting angry with her.. loved the update for khushi..

thanks for pm 😊

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imma chek

@imanech

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

he is so disrespectful why is he treating her like a plake

a mere maid ?

no matter what he think about herand her character

i hate this arnav

she should not end up forgiven him no matter what

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#299

Oh dear
Poor Khushi suffering at the hands of Arnav and Shyam
Hope she survives

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#300

Thank you so much for this comment dear 😊 If there's one thing I can assure you, it's that I may be the biggest feminist on IF. So there is no way I like writing about a weak Khushi. But the harsh reality is, the ones close to our heart hold the power to destroy us. And some women are weak in this sense... esp women who are so blindly devoted to their families and loved ones.

Khushi will not be weak by the end of this FF. I have something planned 😃 These first updates are painful and hurtful, I know, and for a few more updates, I'm going to pursue the same patterns. But the ride will indeed be fruitful! I promise! 😆 Thank you so much dear for the comment 🤗

Originally posted by: .Boss.
Good effort. But why is khushi so weak? Why is she putting up with all the crap from arnav? I hate to see women in submissive roles, because I am a woman as well. But I do understand that this is your story, a fiction and I must admit that I like it as well. Arnav better repent hard. I want to see him on his knees, vulnerable. Sardonic, yet true.

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago

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