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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Thanks for the update Zee. Can I get something to hit Arnav on the head? He's irritating me with his behavior. I will wait for a day when he's dying for Khushi's attention but she'll treat him like no one but a stranger. I can't believe he paid the perverted steward who was trying to harass Khushi. I don't feel Arnav will ever protect Khushi as he's always blind to reality. It'll be better if Khushi's strengthens physically, mentally and emotionally to leave Arnav. He's really not worth her.

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

its greedy

poor of her

update soon n i like read this more

please pm when u next update

waiting for update

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

how can behave like that?
why he doesn't give her a chance to explain in Airport?

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

First of all, a blushworthy banner! :p

I am seriously disgusted with ASR, Hate him for doing this to her!

But i know he will soon realise his mistake...hopefully!

Kya kuch hone wala hai iss trip pe? I mean seeing the banner, i feel *ahem* u know...!:p

Pls no intimacy before the truth is out..! Pls :|

Pls updt soon and long plss

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

This guy is out of his mind. Ashamed of her eh?

Was marrying her the only way to save your sayaani di then ?

Maid. Ya right. Oh so you are so qudrapolar (not bipolar )that you burst a vein when you see Shyam assaulting Khushi and blame the both of them . But when an unknown steward does the same , you blame just your wife . 👏

I love your writing style .

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Omg this arnav is very rude...he considers khushi to be his liablity and treats her like his maid ...hate him but yet can't help feeling sad for his future redemption,his guilt will kill him for sure. Khushi is timid and meek following his orders all the time. I wanna kill that jerk of a steward taking advantage of helpless khushi helpless alas...her own husband distrusts her... Don't know what will happen in this foreign country... Poor khushi is all alone...curious to know what happens next. Plz update next part soon n thanx for pm.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

lovely update !!! felt very bad to see way arnav treated khushi.. calling her maid.. arnav is out of his senses and can't he see a man throwing dirty looks at his wife.. have asr become so stupid.. at the same time.. the last line shows asr as arnav who knows his wife so nicely and was happy for her to be something else.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Welcome back Hun, hope you have had a lovely vacation.

I have so missed reading this story so I did a happy dance when I received your PM,

I'm loving the new banner or gif you have created for the chapter, very nice and hot indeed.

The update was so sad, painful and heart breaking.

Poor Khushi was made to sit in the economy seat on her own and she was so scared and afraid, I felt so sorry.

How cruel can Arnav be he actually felt embarrassed to be seen with her and did not believe her when she tried telling him about the pathetic stewerd.

I can't believe he even called her his maid and she has been made to sleep in a separate room, how is she going manage alone.

What has Arnav the monster done to poor Khushi, she does not even have the courage to say anything to him anymore.

I don't think I have ever hated Arnav so much in this story as I have done in this update,

Did Arnav actually ever love Khushi or was it just a forced marriage, I can't even see any affection or guilt from his side.

On a plus side I did love the way Arnav's room was decorated and the funny items that were left for him were hilarious.

It's nice that some thought of Khushi did bring a slight smile on his face,

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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naimahoney

@naimahoney

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Exchannging her seat with economy class so he would not face the embarrassment for being with a middle class girl
oplogizing for uneducating maids missbehaviour
claiming her as his maid
wife waiting in a lobby
like seriously is he even a humen?
Life is temperory so is the happines
each update of yours make it difficult for me to breath i want to cry
in what thing does he transformed khushi
walking like a shadow quitely xamening her jottis
but update soon