Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

superb update loved it thank you for pm.

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#882

That was amazing!

Havnt read such a mystery in a long time.

Thats why the contempt

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Nisha

@NishaAP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#883

OMG. I never read anything this much confused. Each paragraph changing the story and while reading it even my opinions on the persons are changing.

At first I felt sorry for Kushi that Arnav was using that broken soul. Even I thought he might be the serial killer and he came to kill her and befor e he wanted to have her. Then while he was searching about Syam Jha, I thought he did not kill his wife and may Syam Jha did it and Syam Jha also has some kind of relation with Kushi and he is the person for whom Kushi trying to leave home before 11 clock.

So this is happening in UK and Syam Jha is not criminal but working for SIS/MI6? Then why Arnav wanted his details? He is doing something against country and Syam Jha suspecting him? How come Inspector Khan found put it was Arnav who stalked Kushi just by knowing some description is still mystery. Now we came to know that Kushi is Syam wife. So is she cheating on her husband? It is Syam for whom we need to sympathize and not for Kushi?

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#884

Trying not to second guess each thought about who is what and the why of things. Waiting to read more.

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Kaatya

@Kaatya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#885

Twists and more twists. Shyam an SIS agent? That was not expected. You are out to surprise. Waiting to read more.

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akankha

@akankha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#886

another fantastic update come with a another sets of questions, confusions. well,i'm impressed with ur writing again,and also with the storyline! i like mysterious story and it's a fabulous one. it's proved that u hv a good hand in this category also. thank u for PM.
and impatiently waiting for all my question to clear up!

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_Devaki_

@_Devaki_

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#887

As usual, AMAZING update...
Their passion, atraction...everything was portrayed very beautifully!..
Shyam is her husband!..What the *ASR style*
Waiting to read the next part 😃

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#888

I love the twist in the end... khushi has strong feeling 4 arnav... is arnav using her 4 his own purpose..
shyam is her husband... eager to know what u will. next...

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#889

Seriously... Khushi is married ??????? Nd arnav knows it... I mean why??? Why she is doing this bar dancer job ...

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#890

I love this story. It gets better and better with every chapter. It is intense, suspenseful and gripping. I am glad to know that Arnav is not the serial killer. I am disappointed that Arnav does not feel more for Khushi. He is focused on his goal! I hope he discovers Khushi's innocence soon perhaps during one of his spying moments when he overhears Shyam and Khushi's conversation. I hope it happens soon, Khushi desperately needs someone to rescue her and he desperately needs to save someone. This equation can work! No???