Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1. - Page 87

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Jenny!!
With this FF I was prepared to expect the unexpected but Shyam being Khushi's husband still caught me surprised.. And i hate him already, he does seem to be pretty mean to Khushi and she is scared of him.. But if she's the wife of a Secret service agent why is she in such abject poverty and working as a bar dancer?? Is she even his wife or he just taunting her??

Between Khushi and Arnav i dont know whom I feel more sad for.. Khushi who is on one side stuck with a hell of a Shyam who is her past n present and at the same time with Arnav who clearly doesnt trust or respect her and is using her for whatever his goals are, but at the same time with all these negative things she is still able to and does fall in love Arnav which means emotionally her state is more salvageable...

Arnav on the other side seems to have suffered too much so that trust or any positive emotions would not come to him easily. And what are those scars about? War wounds or something more personal?? Even with last update I had a feeling he dint really kill his wife and that persists.. He thinks he's only in for something physical with Khushi but the last moments seem to betray his feeling or am I just being too hopeful??

If Shyam is with the Secret Services and Inspector Khan apparently suspects Arnav, who is Arnav working for?? Somehow all those bugs and his desperation doesnt seem like he's a free agent.. Or is someone being double crossed..

Some questions answered and more raised... Loved the update and waiting for more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an amazinggg update!!!

Poor khushi doesn't knw what shes getting herself into
Lol I had my doubts to of arnav being the killer...i hope not
Shyam is khushis husband...nooo!!!
I know there's lot more to it
Hope khushi gets the happiness she deserves

Amazinggg update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my...that's what is would call an explosive update...did not expect any of it...loved all of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
You've incorporated the spies and betrayal too! You've got the whole noir shebang Jenny! Heeheehee I'm so excited!
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Posted: 11 years ago
So Arnav is on a mission...?? What is Khushi alleged to have done and what does Shyam want in all this???
Khushi is married?? How has Arnav gained all those scars?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jenny...ok this was definitely one of my favorite chapters...since it shows so much emotions ...kushi turmoil...arnav on a mission and the passion they share and a lot of questions...looking forward to read another fab creation...cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
woah...quite a many revelations and seems there r many more shocking surprises in store there,...khushi is already married to shyam and arnav...
well I should hold my breath and wait for the next.
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg ..that was hot ☺️
arnav s come to find out about shyam...
what is this guy upto...
khushi s husband shyam 😲
what the hell is happening...
n y arnav for investigation...
awesome update 👏 👏 👏 👏👏
update the next soon dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg!! Shyam is khushi's husband..
Brilliant update..
I must say dis story is getting very interesting..
Khushi has fallen hard for arnav n i think arnav is also attracted toward her..
Why was arnav investigating her room??
Their lovemaking was so passionate..both cant resist each other..
I think there is much more things which has to come..so waiting!!!!
Edited by sana27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ouch that hurt deep, after the parting shot I understood all his contempt...
Khush Is stuck inbetween waiting to see her reaction when she gets to know Arnav's real intentions...

She said she loved alone, but Shyam is getting his mail here

Khushi being used by all

I do not care two hoots about Arnav now, all he felt for was her was mission😡

Really liked the twists in the story, not fair we are left at a cliff hanger😃
Edited by arnkhunostalgic - 11 years ago

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