Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

omg..wonderful n awesome update..so much passion n kushi gave in as a chance for once n arnav being cautious but slipping someway..was that lust for him?i dont think so..he was controlling that emotion n being impassive..kushi's dilemma abt her emotions n the fear for gun was so scary to feel..being trapped in desire n fear..fear of loss n cheat..she purposely fallen in the pool of desire n spontaneously fallen in love for him..that she didnt reveal..so arnav had some plan..evrythng planned n thats why he was stalking..but what was his job n why was he trying to trap kushi n in that way where he dont even give promise..but the last part was very clear that arnav was trying to knw abt his enemy n was trying to cheat the ppl who belong to that enemy n the foe was none other than shyam,kushi's husband..great blow..ahh..lol..hmm very interesting..shyam was a detective?and was there anythng that shyam related to the death or relationship of arnav's late wife lavanya?!and seems lyk arnav wanna knw abt shyam's move in kushi's place n thats why he had bugged the apartment with microcam?!hmm wats going to hapn to arnav n kushi?arnav with police n kushi with shyam..waiting eagerly for the next update..

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Absolutely enthralling, Jenny!!

The pieces of the puzzle slowly seem to come together...A&K's chemistry is nothing but combustible...and, though Arnav is into it with an ulterior motive, Khushi, really seems to be gradually developing some feelings for him( despite that inner conflict)...her touching his face, enveloping him in a hug, spoke about her emotional turmoil, with a not -so -pleasant past..

Shyam is an SIS ( thank you for rekindling fond memories of reading innumerable novels on espionage), and, him turning out to be her hubby came as a very pleasant surprise...interested in becoming cognizant of the identity of the receiver of Arnav's call... keen to read more ..now that the intrigue quotient has risen ..exponentionally..

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priya goyal

@cutesforum_02

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#893

Truly amazing update... cant believe she is married.. and why is arnav spying on her.. such a mysterious story it is .. plz update soon :)

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#894

Amazing chapter. Fantastically written.

Both of their situations is wonderfully captured. He was there because he has to complete his work and for the he did whatever he needs to be done with Khushi. If he took advantage of her or not, will come to know afterwards, but what I see that he might want evidence against Shyam and for the he took Khushi's help.

Till now we heard what Khushi thinks but not what arnav is thinking about her, did he even like her or just using her for his work. It will be very sad if he is taking advantage if her.

I an looking forward to this story, very excited .

About Shyam it is clear that he is involve in somthing and not a good man. Like arnav is he also using Khushi for somthing. It was shocking to know that Khushi is married to Shyam. Can't wait to know the truth.

Thanks for the update and pm.

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madhurima.devu

@madhurima.devu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

Jenny ur amazing writer.. story line is superb.. cant wait for next update.. full of suspence...

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jeetega

@jeetega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

as a lover of almost all your stories and being crazily in love with them and ur writing style, I hereby use it to ask u to update more. wen u have such a great story, its not fair on us to update it slowly. do pls dear!

biting nails, I bet arnav is seeing shyam's entry! eagerly waiting to hear kushi's past