Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

HUSBAND?? What? I thought he was her brother or something. Oh my GOD. Why does she dance in a bar then? And why is Arnav investigating Shyam? Too many questions!!

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

no Jenny. Nooo Please Not Shyam . How can Shyam be Khushi's husband. I cant take this.

I am so disturbed now. Please let it finally come out that he is not her husband.

Please jenny Please Please...

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

wowww...

just woww...

brilliant writing dear...

shyam is her husband...how could it be...

can't wait for the next update...

plxxx continue soon...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

Chp 4

D strting was arnav nightmare or may be his past scenes of his wife wich he gt

Nt dat i m guessing loll i m bad at guessing

nyway i loved d update

khushi is however unable to remove arnav frm his thoughts wich i m enjoying a lot

One side she is waiting for him nd d oder side wen shd finds him on her door she express herself as if she is nt intrested in him

Anddd finally she is trying to trust him somewere i wish she express her trust on him

D hunger in eachother was perfectly shown in dat move

Totally loved it ❤️

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Deepti

@deepti1906

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

What the HELL?? 😲

I'm tongue tied... 😳

I had mentioned it very earlier that I had a feeling that verything was linked up with each other... That is Arnav, shyam, Khushi, the serial killer, they all are linked with each other.. And looks like it came true... Aranv is looking for Shyam and is upto some mission...

This is what I came up with after a much thought- Arnav might be working for SIS as well.. And Shyam might be up to something very wrong. Arnav could only sneak in his/Khushi's house through Khushi. 'Even what he knew about her and his supreme contempt for women like her' this could only one thing that he knew Khushi is married to Shyam and still working in a dance bar. So he probably thought of her as a wh*re.

'He had to have her first.' The only way he could sneak in and find out something about Shyam... It might be possible that he knew about that mails as well..

I don't know if I'm right but I can only say one thing that THIS WAS EFFING AMAZING!!! 👏👏
Right from the start, there wasn't any moment that didn't leave me intrigued... Is there any genre you can't write??

Absolutely LOVED IT!!!!❤️❤️ But this suspence, mystery is killing me for sure... I'm very glad that this wasn't the last chapter...

Update soon!!!! Please!!!😳😳

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#876

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#877

I think I am understanding Arnav's Mind little bit now. 🤔

No Shyam is here😡 Always bad news😔

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#878

What the...? Shyam - her husband?!! He seems to be an agent...& Arnav, another agent is interested in info about him...so the bugs! It is so confusing, yet so mysterious...I'm loving it.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#879

What the...this is a SHOCK...Khushi is married to Shyam...he works for secret service...but its obvious that she is not comfortable,let alone happy seeing him...and why does she work as a bar dancer...what's going on actually...and what about Arnav...why is he here actually...whats his motive...and what about the scars...also what he's gonna do to this alleged serial killer thing now...so many questions...need answers soon...I'm dying in curiosity...continue soon...