Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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sisgeo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#851

that was a shocker...nice update and thanks for the pm

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aashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

jenny😃🤗 once again simply superb upd seriously u made me speechless with ur upd 👏👏i must say you hv wonderful concept n with each upd u r making story more n more interesting , oh so it cleared shyam is khushi's husband , i wonder what is arnav up to with khushi , n mr khan is behind arnav it seems very interesting upd , khushi n arnav shared blifful moments no wonder both r attracted towards each other n khushi likes him hope her life will be easy soon , do upd soon looking forward to next part , u rock 👏👏

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Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#853

So they finally give in to the attraction. As much as he may have disdain for women like her (not the dancing part but cheating on her husband part due to his past), he is physically pulled to her. Poor Kushi, going all in when she knows there was no hope whatsoever. What is up with Jha? Are they really married?

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divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#854

shocked wud b an understatement

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anuprika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#855

Gripping update.nw is shyam d serial killer..
I wud luv him to b
poor khushi.
Shes n dilemma

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Barunz4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#856

Wow this story is taking a different turn . Quiet impressive n unexpected too. Arnav on a mission to know about Shyam . N khushi is married to Shyam just unbelievable . Waiting for the real story to unfold. Loved the desire laden passionate Arnav khushi moments😳

Thnks for pm

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rukuswasthika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#857

the update is intresting yaar

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#858

Wow this is messed up and full of mystery I love it!

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207shikha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#859

hawww.. the end literally took me!

this was such a googly chapter. loved reading it! :D

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BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#860

Oh suspense and more suspense... This story is so gripping Jenny.
I loved the way u have conveyed Khushi's turmoil...

So Arnav is after Shyam...
Good that he has the fittings in her house, he will get to know the real Khushi... Maybe...

Oh the start was really hot !!!

I noticed u used Arnab instead of Arnav in one of ur lines ;)
This shows ur still living in the 1920's era... Just like us.. Just like Me...
In the beautiful Arshi period love story thats called TBWD.

Very eager to read more of this suspense thriller. :)