Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 11 years ago

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What a start!

Hmm..Interesting twist at the end.

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

👏 Fantastic Jen!

You are such a versatile writer. I shouldn't be surprised by your different concepts but you blow me away every time.

Love the tall brooding man with a limp. Your description paints such a complete picture.

3 shot? Really? 😆

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IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nidsubh007
👏 Fantastic Jen!
You are such a versatile writer. I shouldn't be surprised by your different concepts but you blow me away every time.

Love the tall brooding man with a limp. Your description paints such a complete picture.

3 shot? Really? 😆

Fingers crossed 😆

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thulasi_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

interesting ..
waiting for next update

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karsvinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Scary arnav but would want to know all about it😊

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shona-li

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

What a lovely change from your usual style of writing Jenny! You do very well with different timelines and eras and this, whilst being a departure from your brand of historical romances, is still dated and staunchly belongs in the past.

I love how the chapter is overcast with the shadow of mystery! It's very noir-esque, what with how the scene is set - you have your smokey bar, your dancers, and street lamps in the night. Of course not forgetting, sex and death. All the elements are there for a perfect noir tale.

Am I looking forward to it? You betcha. Khushi should be afraid. Very afraid. He's a dangerous, vengeful man who doesn't hesitate to pull out his gun on anyone who's double-crossed him. And he's determined to have his way with her. What is she going to do?

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Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

I have no idea why but this piece of writing totally reminded me of WWII era and made me think of Humprey /Becall and Tracy/Hepburn movies...and that is a huge compliment..

You captured the gritty man persona and feisty but in trouble girl so well.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Gosh...its too awesome...never read anything like this one...par yehi toh tumhare speciality hai...looking forward to read more...

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

*taking deep breath*...

a MAJOR arnav!!!! me toh faintiya gayi!!! Arnav's entry was AWSOME!!! limp...dark...icy grey eyes...this arnav is defo something😉

khushi is a bar(decent). its clear that she is doing this for survival. whom is khushi afraid of...what ll happen if she reaches home ofter 11.30.

their first meeting was a DHOOM!
indeed...INTOXICATION!!!

the last part was just WOW!!!!

Jenny...u never cease to amaze me!!! i love mutry thriller...n i ll love most if its written by u...one of the best n my fav writer in IF...looking forward 😊

can u make it 30shots instead of 3shots...u can still call it TS then(TS=thirty shot)...what say???

Edited by -HEAVEN- - 11 years ago