Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

wow very different but interesting

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xyzsm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I love it...please do continue...

its different plot...but with our arnav-khushi...:)..

I am sure you will create magic again with their awesome chemistry...:)

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IDatIF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow that was something new and different
Countinue soon

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kajal511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

loved it👍🏼
continue soon dear😊

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opsyellow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

New story from you!
Actually I did find him little scary and then that kiss...
Khushi is a bar dancer wow

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vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Not many stories an compell me to type out a comment on my phone... But this story is so intriguing, I couldnt help myself. So very different from anything you've written before!

So I've already taken to the characters.. Khushi's spunk and Arnav's mysterious aura... Reeks of the forbidden fruit 😛 The premise had me glued to my seat Jenny, so excited to know what happens next :)

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Ananya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

OMG, Jenny!

You know, it was my TBWD reading day today, but then I came across this!

Dayum!! This story is really interesting, and deserves to be a full on work of fiction for a novel or something.

Btw, hadn't you started this story on another thread? What happened to that? :-/ And I also see you've decided to change it into a three shot. How are we going to see the end up of it in just three shots? :O It deserves at least ten I'm sure 😳

Anyway...

I loved the description of Arnav. For some reason, a limp on him makes him somehow very hot, attractive, appealing and mysterious. And I really like those qualities in a man :D

It'll take time for me to adjust reading about a Khushi who is a cabaret dancer, but your writing makes it reading very believable :)

So the last bit tells me that it's a mysterious tale. Can't wait to find out who actually killed the wife and best friend, or the reason if he was the one who had killed them...

But seriously, three shots, Jenny? Bas?