Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Nice start. Seems mysterious. OMG...Arnav shot his wife and her lover? :0 Looking forward to the next update.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya
Reserved :)

WOW! WOW! WOW!

Just when I thought Jenny has just about covered different writitng styles, Baam! You come with a mystery.

Intoxication indeed! I loved his limp. This big man in dark coat sounds dark and hot.

So, Khushi is a bar dancer who is clearly doing it to survive. Liked her attitude ... and he kissed her. Now, he has no chance in hell of stying away from her😆

Jen, I love mysteries, I love those thriller paparbacks. I have read almost all Grishams, Baldaccis, Sheldons...you name it. I'm so looking forward to this one from you :)

Loved it. Such a lovely breath of freshness :)

Exactly my thoughts ... WOW ! ... please continue ...

waise it has potential to be an SS or an FF ...😆

Don't you think Jenny ???!!! 😳 😉

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anjubua

@anjubua

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Awesome different but fantastic

It seems Khushi is doing something

she wont usually do but its for her

survival. Our Arnav is a man of mystery

loved it continue soon

👏👏⭐️

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Hey interesting story, Must grant it to you that you come up with concepts that are different from others.

This one reminds me of a Hindi movie with the same concept - would love to see where you take this.

Waiting to read the rest!

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

I am so down for this story! Let's do it!

So Arnav is living the lonely life now? He appears to be also living with the knowledge of killing two people. It seems like he just got out of jail or something

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

this is so AWESOME update soon

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Supab TS Jenny..
Arnav past story could terrify anyone...
First kiss at first meeting...
It's gone be interesting..
Waiting for 2nd shot..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

and here one hopes it shall be more than a three shot
well thats for later of course
wow so he is ex military interesting
but what was that pray tell arnie
what was he thinking
and who was khushi talking about
who was waiting for her and wouldnt like her to come late
sheesh he scared her or what
well seems he did let go of her when she pleaded him
hmm that was intriguing start
cant wait to know more
but he is bit dangerous too right

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DhivyaMurali

@dhivyamurali

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

It is really good Jenny...and pls do continue. Arnav and Kushi in a complete character makeover is just amazing...waiting for he next update eagerly...

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

WOW!!! Just totaly wow...damn awsom yaar...i can't wait 4 nxt chp update sooon!!!! N well dis is strictly 3shot story well i don't mind dat since i feel derz no point in dragging story unncessrily n spoiling it write as many prtz u feel needs da story totaly fyn with it :)