Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1. - Page 12

Nice and different story. Arnav with limp and an Ex Major and Khushi as a bar dancer sounds interesting. Please continue. I think Three Shots is too less for this kind of story. Make it a SS :-)

Originally posted by: Anupama.

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Jen! 🤗 This is brilliant. Too bad for us that it will be a short journey but knowing you as a writer, it wont be a surprise when you 'd give us an awesome tale spanning a lifetime in these 3 chapters and the effect on us would be as good as ever!

Major Raizada is such that even if you wouldnt exchange words with him, you cant help but be affected by him. His limp seems to be some result of being in a war. There are too many questions. The first being his instant fancy which he seems to have developed for Khushi. I wanted to hit him for manhandling her. Dont know what he meant by asking him nicely to leave her.
And the very next instant my heart saddened for him as a glimpse of his past was known.
And obviously I wont believe that he did that. Lets wait.

I loved Khushi..Strong. Who is this he she is thinking of? I already dont like him from whatever Khushi was thinking.
Great one Jen!